**High School**~UPDATED! p 79 LAST PART!!

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areej

@pakigal34

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Posted: 19 years ago

#111

finally!! and yayyy i feel speciall again hhahah

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Ria

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Posted: 19 years ago

#112

wowwwww fabbbbb parttt 😆 😳
plz cont soooon 👏 👏 👏

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Hina

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Posted: 19 years ago

#113

u think!!!! well lets make it clear IT WAS AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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hahahahahah that was the CUTEST part written by u EVER lol
coninue soon
lots of luv and sugar
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@ishu124

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Posted: 19 years ago

#114

gud job n plz continue!!!!!!!!!! 👏
im love it!!!!!!!!!!! 😉

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Dipti

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Posted: 19 years ago

#115

heyy...i finished reading ur fanfic!!..its soo good!!!....omgg..plzz continue!

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purishivani

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Posted: 19 years ago

#116

awsome job
but u better bring angad fast in the story otherwise the dan guy is going to take kripa away!!
Continue soon 😉

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areej

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Posted: 19 years ago

#117

continue 😡 lol jk 😃

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Prakriti Singh

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Posted: 19 years ago

#118

HEY GUyZ! lol. im on a sugar high cuz of all the candy....anywayz, HAPPY VALENITNES DAY!!! Im sorry this part is gonna be short and boring cuz i have to go out with my boyfriend Justin. Sorry once again!

KAN- OK! Here Kripa…this is 100 pounds for your shopping and food and transportation. If u need more than just call me up.

K- Ok.

Kanika Didi leaves after saying good bye.

D- So…where do u wanna go?

Kripa just shrugs.

D- Ok…so well just go to……..umm…how about Madame Tussads?

K- Ok.

Dan puts out his hand and Kripa takes it after a little bit of hesitation. & amp; nbsp;

Todayz Update

Dan is a great guide and he takes Kripa everywhere. As time passes by, Kripa starts to open up to Dan.

They both were sitting in a Trafalgar Square and staring at once couple posing together. Kripa started to sob a bit thinking about Angad. Dan noticed this.

D- (softly) Kripa….r u okay?

Kripa dosent say anything.

D- u know, old ppl always say tat if u share ur burdens, ull feel betta.

K- ok…I gues I can trust u. Can I?

D- ofcourse!

Kripa tells Dan all about Angad and how she liked him since the first time she saw and how he yelled at her for no reason and how he acted like an as* with her. The whole time Dan is listening intently.

The minute Kripa's story ends, Dan puts his arm around her. Kripa gets surprised and pulls away.

Dan notices this.

D- Kripa, u shuld 4get him! Hes not worth u!

Kripa just sobs.

D- Kripa, u deserve sum1 who can treat u like u deserve 2 be treated.

Kripa turns to Dan and looks straight into his hazel eyes.

K- I don't know any1 like tat…..

D- don't u know me?

Kripa gets astonished.

K- u..u.uu?

D- ya. Ive liked u since the time Ankit Bhaiya showed me a pic of u.

K- realy?

D- yes. So wat say? Can u give me a chance?

K- I gues…

Dan smiles and hops up. He hold out his hand.

D- lets go!

Kripa takes his hand and smiles.

Many days pass by and Kripa and Dan get really close. (Kripa is a girl with strong principles and she dosent kiss Dan on his lips. Just some gentle huggin and cheek kissing. Don't forget she is only 14!)

It's the last of summer vacation and Kripa has to leave in the afternoon. Everyone is at the airport and Kripa is crying.

She takes turns saying good bye to Kanika Didi and Ankit Bhaiya. When she gets to Dan, she hugs him tight and they exchange numbers.

Preview- Kripa is in the US. The reactions from her friends, break-up with Dan and a new hook-up.

Edited by prakriti - 19 years ago