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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ruby89

i jstread the whole fan fic, oh boy uve done such an amazing job, jst TOO GOOD! loved every single part, every single dialog man m ur fan fic mad fan now 😆 i'll be hungry for updates... continue soon!

u made my day i am having exams i just came to check some worksheets aww the next part will be the last i am sad thanxx again 4 such a beautiful comment!!!!!!!!!

Edited by griffinmonster - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg! i just read frm pgs 90 - 143 n caught up with evrything. N i hav 2 say tht its sooo good.
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey i just finished reading ur whole fan fic from pgs 1 to 143 and i must say it was superb and with all the twist and turns it was great and i am really looking forward 2 read the last part so continue soon and all the best with the last part 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 awsome job 😳 😳 😳 they are together 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: karismic_angel

omg! i just read frm pgs 90 - 143 n caught up with evrything. N i hav 2 say tht its sooo good.

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx a tonne this is real treat

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: pal89711

hey i just finished reading ur whole fan fic from pgs 1 to 143 and i must say it was superb and with all the twist and turns it was great and i am really looking forward 2 read the last part so continue soon and all the best with the last part 😊

awwwwwwwwwwww thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx a lot what a beautiful comment thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

👏 awsome job 😳 😳 😳 they are together 😳 😳

awwwwwww jaan stop blushing miss u

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Posted: 19 years ago

Guys this is the last part
I feel sad writing it but still I have had a wonderful time writing this ff
I kno I am writing after a long time but u all kno the reasons
So again a sorry 4 that
I just loved writing this I hope u all enjoyed the same

Episode#53(last epi)

It was time 4 kripa to go back to pune but there were no regrets there was no sadness
Everything was alright ….perfect
Not a tear fell from their eyes 'cuz they knew only there bodies were apart and not their soul they were together 4ever and noth could seperate them


Months …………..years……….passed but the feeling never disappeared it felt like yesterday they had fallen in love
whenever they looked in their eyes the same love was kindling in it
Their candle of love would never blow out and never melt 'cuz it was made of love and love never dies

3years later………………………


Everything was same………………………The love was same

Kripa: mama plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz batao main kaisi lag rahi hooon
Kripa was jumping in the bridal dress in her room
She was damn nervous
She wanted to look the best

Kamya and rekha entered the room
Kamya: tum jaisi bhi lago gi angad loves u yaar

Kripa: nahi batao main kaisi lag rahi hoon

Rekha got irritated kripa had tried her bridal dress around thousand times

Kripa couldn't yet believe the fact she was at last …phew …gettting married to angu

Rekha and kamya told her she looked beautiful

Kripa knew she was being stupid

It was her marriage in 4 hours and a lot of work was left

Rekha and kamya had work so they left the room

Kripa looked at angu's photo
And hugged it

From back a voice came "photo ko hi hug kartti rahogi ki mujhe bhi karogi"

Kripa turned in surprise
Angu was standing beside the window
Kripa went and hugged him

K: angad tum tum kab aaye
A: tabhi jab meri handsome photo ko tum hug kar rahi thi

Kripa looked at him
Truely kripa looked beauriful and seeing angad made her more beautiful

K: lekin angad wahan log tumhe dhoond rahe honge

A: arey nahi

K: ab tum jao
A: nahi pehle main apni dulhan ko poori tarah se dulhan ke jode main dekhoonga phir jaaonga
Kripa blushed
Angad went and picked up a necklace lying on the bed

And came to kripa he slowly put it around kripa's neck and kissed her neck
It was same feeling same emotion nothing had changed In all these years the love was as fresh as the dew on flowers as new as a new born butterfly as beautiful as the 1st flower of the season as pure as an angel
They looked in each others eyes
Suddenly someone knocked on the door
Angad ran to the window and kripa opened the door

Her friends had come to put the jewelaries ansd make up as kripa had disagreed to go to parlour

Angad ran back to his house everyone was indeed searching 4 him he mad a silly excuse
Everyone perfectly knew where he had been

The time came angu and kripa sat in the mandap
They stood up 4 the saat pheres nd as every phera was done they truly promised what it meant
Angad put around mangalsutra around kripa's neck and sindoor and slowly a tear of happiness fell from from every one's eyes
Everyone felt the love story had met its end but 4 a-k it was their starting it was their second phase of their love story


Kripa was taken to Khanna house
There were tears in everyone's eyes both of happiness and sadness

Kripa was made to sit in the middle of the hall

Angad was made to sit beside her

They kept looking at each other

A thal containing red coloured water was brought
Naina told they had to play a game
A ring would be put in the thal and who ever finds it 1st will rule on the other 4 the rest of life

Angad and kripa smiling put their hands together
And after sometime both were holding the ring
Naina : iska matlab u both will equally rule each other
Kripa was by now blushing and had become like a red apple

Kripa was taken to her and angad's room
Though she had visited the room more than thousands times still she felt different

Slowly every one left the room
Kripa opened the window and looked at the stars

Someone closed her eyes with its hands

Kripa: anga (whispered)
Angad removed his hands
Kripa hugged him and he hugged her

Words were no limit now
The love reflected in their eyes

Kripa looked at him
Angad took out a ring
And put it in kripa's finger
A: this is promise ring I promise u kripa I'll always keep u happy I'll love u 4ever

Kripa knew he meant every word of it
Though they had spoken these three words again and again still whenever they spoke it it had meaning it was fresh it was still alive it was still young

Angad kissed her eyes which were filled with tears of happiness
The lights faded away

1 years passed...
"angaddddddddddddddddddddddd"
angad came running inside the ward
kripa was holding two babies a girl and a boy
A: kripa we had twins
kripa and anagd looked at each
what more could they get
they had everything
they hugged eack other
angad kissed her forehead and kissed the kids

their children had completed them.

the last lines i want to say is
DIL KI BAATEIN ,DIL HI JAANE
NA MAIN JAANU , NA TUI JAANE......


i wanna thank each and every one who commented here whether it was good or bad i just loved it and had the most woderful time here
i am sorry again 4 the delay as i was grounded 4 one week let the reason remain a secret lol so thats why i couldn't cont any ff dark world will be cont when i come back from vacation i am going to vacation tom to india miss u all like helll
byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
lots of love kisses hugs
griffy

Edited by griffinmonster - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Wonderful part Griffy I am sad u ended it though wonderful ending
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Posted: 19 years ago
it was such a lovely ending 😊 😊 😊
have fun on ur vacation 😊 😊 😊

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