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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

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Posted: 13 years ago

#431

Oohhheeemmmgggeee...Zeee
You wrote all this...
Bacha uthaying fayda 18+ hone ka...!??
Not bad baby.

Hawwttt - hawwwttt...
What should i say more...??
Early morning you make me read all these things...not fair...
Now i'll keep thinking abt this only...ohh babaji.

Maaneet ka consumation...ufff...oxygen needed.
Cant write more.

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Mishu

@-Mishu-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#432

i m unable think anything now
i m speechless, feeling numb
will comment later sweety when i m able to think something

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abhayprsingh

@abhayprsingh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#433

sorry zee i can't comment

i'm DEAD after such an ahem...ahem... update

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zunaiba5

@zunaiba5

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#434

thnx 4 pm

hot part

maneet :)

do continue

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#435

Very hot hot update, thanx dear for such a lovely update. Enjoyed a lot.

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#436

hey zee excellent song selection

superb update lovely romantic

the video u gave to listen is mind blowing

how u wrote these lines zee

"He was teasing her senses. She was forgetting who she was and where she was."

highlight dilogs written by u in this part are

" If you keep moaning my name like that, I will just hold you prisoner like this tonight"

"Finish what you started jaan. Comlete picture dekhao na! I know you are hungry sweetheart"

zee i am flat by this lines

" Show me not with words, but with your actions what I do to you!" he says as he runs his hands from her navel to up her back, as she melts and moves in closer to him.

kiss was yummy

romance was in 7th heaven

the pics u used perfect for update

maan gave exact punishment to tease geet senses

most sensuous dilogs

"you like that jaan" he huskily whispered and lingered around with his finger some more.

" Make me yours already please" she whispered as she hit her orgasm.

Maan: Are you ready sweetheart.

Geet: I want you

" But I want you more"

superb higlight perfect climax of part

Geet murmurs, " I love you" and just snuggles in closer against him.

" I love you too" maan softly murmers kissing her forehead before cuddling close to her and drifting away to sleep in each other's arms.

we already dead by this update

and ur precap most hillarious

Pre-cap:

will post when i can start to think again. . . after this update i am not alive r u???🤣

zee really when i read this update i feel all natures at a time

for this lovely update this is for u