FF'Two broken hearts fall in love' Thread 5 - Page 45

Originally posted by: abinash079

first of all i need to calm
myself then i could comment

i m officially 3rd in the list to comment

coming to the update it was out of the world mind blowing
and i m in loss of words to write the comment
currently i m in heaven and typing the comment


a big hug to select this song

a very sensuous song apt with the
situation

hayee the way maan said"what m i going to this
with this pagli" i was dead🤢

geet was out of control
loved this avatar of geet was was also surprised

the kiss was magical

everything about the update was magical
i was likethroughout the update

now maan and geet
r not maan and geet
dont be confused dear

then have became MAANEET with body as well as soul

love u dear do continue dear

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Originally posted by: maaneet5

hey zee excellent song selection

superb update lovely romantic

the video u gave to listen is mind blowing

how u wrote these lines zee

"He was teasing her senses. She was forgetting who she was and where she was."

highlight dilogs written by u in this part are

" If you keep moaning my name like that, I will just hold you prisoner like this tonight"

"Finish what you started jaan. Comlete picture dekhao na! I know you are hungry sweetheart"

zee i am flat by this lines

" Show me not with words, but with your actions what I do to you!" he says as he runs his hands from her navel to up her back, as she melts and moves in closer to him.

kiss was yummy

romance was in 7th heaven

the pics u used perfect for update

maan gave exact punishment to tease geet senses

most sensuous dilogs

"you like that jaan" he huskily whispered and lingered around with his finger some more.

" Make me yours already please" she whispered as she hit her orgasm.

Maan: Are you ready sweetheart.

Geet: I want you

" But I want you more"

superb higlight perfect climax of part

Geet murmurs, " I love you" and just snuggles in closer against him.

" I love you too" maan softly murmers kissing her forehead before cuddling close to her and drifting away to sleep in each other's arms.

we already dead by this update

and ur precap most hillarious

Pre-cap:

will post when i can start to think again. . . after this update i am not alive r u???🤣

zee really when i read this update i feel all natures at a time

for this lovely update this is for u