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Maira

@MairaKhan1180

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#301

Hi minimuffin86,

I really love your story:) You write so well! A round of applause for you:)I am happy I found the link to your fanfic again because I recall reading the first two chapters but unfortunately didn't find the link afterwards and now I have, I'll certainly come back to it. Chapter three got me on the verge of tears, I honestly felt for Khushi.I love this new Khushi because we all know Arnav deserves all of Khushi's wrath. It's time he should taste his own medicine. Looking forward to the next part, please update soon. If it's possible, please sent me a pm after updating.

Best,
Maira Khan

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#302

Mini darling, PLEASE UPDATE.😃 Thank you.😉

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#303

amazing update yaar...

ASR stared back at him through Khushis eyes, ruthless, cold and more demonic that ever before.

whoa...this line shook me to the core...

wt a line to express the essence of pure demonisity of ASR!!!

it shows the emotoinal turmoil kushi's been thru coz of Arnav...that made her change into sumthing unrecognizable...

no one simply said KARMA'S A BITCH...ITS PAY BACK TIME FOR OLD ASR TO THIS MUCH MORE CRUEL N COLD ASR of kushi...

love the way kushi's making him suffer...

he deserves it...bt poor arnav who changed for her is taking the brunt...cant see him suffer...

pls update soon n make them climb the spiral staircase together nah...

as an architect im telling u I HATE SPIRAL STARICASES coz

one thing is that they make u dizzy...

n second thing is u dunno wats ahead...

perfect title for the ff...

loved it tons...

~sam

Edited by sparklystarstud - 13 years ago

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egle

@egle

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#304

1) I'M FIIIRST! YEAH BABY!!

2) The entire frame of the swing was covered in creeping vines which were in bloom with the flowers of the most exquisite lilac interspersed with fairy lights that were giving it a magical glow,

Oh I could just picture it! Beautiful and a soft glow all around. Although, maybe I'm being a sadist here😆 but I wish it hadn't been so easy for Arnav to take Khushi back.

Thanks for the PM! 😃

Edited by egle - 13 years ago

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renee

@renee27

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#305

awww...the swing part was touching...evn khushi cudnt resist it...so arnav finally brought her back to her rightful place...he knows how to turn things in his favour...now it will b an interesting journey how this stone khushi changes to bubbly khushi...a difficult but not an impossible task...GO ARNAV GO...get ur girl back!!!!!
nice update...was waiting for it...yeah anything related to dentists are painful...i hv had my share of not so nice appointments with them...take care
thanks for the PM...update soon😊

Edited by renee27 - 13 years ago

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#306

Awesome update!! I'm glad that that bua for once did something worth for khushi!! The girl needs her life back! Though Arnav truly deserves the punishments given by khushi!

Thanks for the PM

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@MereMahiyaa.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#307

Amazing Update Loved it

Thanks for the pm Muffin~!😃

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#308

awesomest part..was waitin for it..thnx for d updt

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#309

man! emotional blackmail is sooo crappy! poor khushi couldnt do anything. i hate the fact that theyone is one arnav's side just becuase he has changed now. they talk as if he had been always like that . they werent there when money was chucked at khushi that morning. arnav is getting on my nerves. i want him to win khushi's heart through humility not smugness. and even khushi is cracking a bit! :O

sorry if i sound real harsh, but to me khushi is not getting justice. :'(

great update though. really got me into it...as you can see with how much i have written, lol.

xxx

Edited by Zeee - 13 years ago

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: Zeee
man! emotional blackmail is sooo crappy! poor khushi couldnt do anything. i hate the fact that theyone is one arnav's side just becuase he has changed now. they talk as if he had been always like that . they werent there when money was chucked at khushi that morning. arnav is getting on my nerves. i want him to win khushi's heart through humility not smugness. and even khushi is cracking a bit! :O
sorry if i sound real harsh, but to me khushi is not getting justice. :'(
great update though. really got me into it...as you can see with how much i have written, lol.
xxx

the moment i typed my own comment i saw this one...which reflected exactly how i was feeling...so thought to edit and add this too
i felt like how Khushi would have felt..BETRAYED..betrayed by everyone and painted to a corner..my mind was asking even if she had to come back to Delhi why did she come back to that house..to that room..that was so unfair...am not complaining..just telling how i felt..
i really look forward to this story updates and every time i fall for it even more..awesome update n the swing caught me unaware just like it did khushi..

but well road to redemption for Arnav needs to be harder.at least i wish he'll have to struggle a lot more...

Edited by princessunara - 13 years ago