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Deeksha

@-Dee-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Hey there,

I think you are peeling off the present Khushi in layers. First, her defying devi maiyya and now, the almost in-humane philosophy about stars being nothing more than a ball of gas. Not that Arnav does not deserve punishment, but I pity him but most of all I pity Khushi - to have turned into an almost life-less and heartless woman from the bubbly-lovely girl that she was.

And the jalebis that she was frying the morning - was it because she was quite upset at what she'd done and what had happened to her?

"...Khushis eyes, ruthless, cold and more demonic that ever before."

Love😊

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

He was surprised that he hadn't recognized it before. It was the same look he had seen in the mirror since the age of sixteen staring back at him, it was the look he wore for the world. It appeared that the day he had exorcised his demons they had found a new vessel to call home. ASR stared back at him through Khushis eyes, ruthless, cold and more demonic that ever before.

damn girl i think arnav just met asr and it may have scared him wow love the update can't express my joy at reading your ff and stop putting your self down love it was perfect thanks for the pm can't wait for the next chapter

Edited by dumas - 13 years ago

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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

this one paragraph left me completely numbed yet for some strange reason teary eyed!

"He was surprised that he hadn't recognized it before. It was the same look he had seen in the mirror since the age of sixteen staring back at him, it was the look he wore for the world. It appeared that the day he had exorcised his demons they had found a new vessel to call home. ASR stared back at him through Khushis eyes, ruthless, cold and more demonic that ever before."

whoaa...that was one hell of an update and all i can say it was more than worth the wait!! an amazing update! simply fabulous!! looking forward to the next update even more anxiously than ever before!

wow wow wow!

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#264

i know i may be mean but...i'm glad this happened. arnav needs the taste of his own medicane. i even wished she shoved money in his face for the night too.well done khushi. i hope theres also another man for arnav to get jealous over. even i got angry when that lady was saying khushi was just making accusations about arnav being godless and mean. i felt her frustation. arnav needs to take the pain before he can build into khushi's heart.

thanks for the brilliant part and hope to see another real soon!

xxx

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anusha.nush

@anusha.nush

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#265

wow zats too good...i love it !!!
now plzzz update soon...am too eager to knw more about arnav and khushi!!👏

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egle

@egle

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

" It appeared that the day he had exorcised his demons they had found a new vessel to call home."

Wonderfully written! 👏 This sentence just cinched it for me!

Please do continue soon! And thank you so much for the PM! 😊

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: harsh42
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First of all, Thanks a ton, Muffin.
For giving such a terrific update!!!

Man, what an update it was!!!

Double the amount of "ASR"ness and you'll get the present Khushi!! Phew!!!

ASR stared back at him through Khushis eyes, ruthless, cold and more demonic that ever before.

This line just gave me serious creeps!!!

Continue soon, love. . . . . 😳

Thanks for the PM. . . . . 😊

Ditto for me. You really have written a wonderful update. Of course that was bound to happen. Now Khushi has turned in ASR- cold and ruthless. Eagerly waiting to see what ASR will do now to get back the sweet caring Khushi. Thanks for the pm. Continue soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#268

So,ASR is getting a taste of his own medicine.😆 The way he behaved,it was horrible.M luving it how Khushi is behaving wid him,I hope it continues,till da score is equal.😆 U r da best writer till date.👍🏼 but plz update 'The Big Bang'!! 😃

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#269

awesome chapter...wat m shocked abt is arnav believes her tht she's sexually active wid others...though he let go abt it...but still he believes it...m agn disappointed in arnav...staircase explanation he very nicely given

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Posted: 13 years ago

#270

Loved it soo much! And still again so realistic and non-filmy (ie this would never happen on the show and Khushi would just fall straight back into Arnav's arms).

Although I would like to see some Khushi-Anjali interaction just because I cruelly want Khushi to treat Anjali horribly for saying and doing what she did.