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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

Wow what a painful way to learn the lesson of "What goes around comes around"!! He was so taken aback when threw in his face that she is sexually active... This will eat him up..and rightfully so!! He has hurt like NONE other...he may be paying now...but.

As much as I feel his pain... I cannot blame Khushi for her reaction to HIM...it is justified after all he has said to her...after the continual HURT he has doled out to her!!
You are simply an amazing writer...I love how you have literally incorporated the STAIRCASE thru much of the story... BUT I really love the ANALOGY of the SPIRAL STAIRCASE being the state of life...the twists and turns, the ascension and decension of different aspects of our live!!

Once Again... I love this story...looking forward to reading more!!😛

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HeadOverHeels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#272

Finally got to read your work. Great stuff!! Thanks for the PM... Am definitely stopping by again! ❤️

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soni_md

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

Damn, love. You've got me hooked! It was amazing ... she's really got the play down cold ... he's gonna have to push harder than that if he wants her back! Nice one 👏 Update soon, and thanks for the PM!

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#274

Great update! Khushi has turned exactly the way Arnav was,what goes around,comes around.⭐️👏

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christmas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#275

that was something. the end. was brilliant.

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AquaBluez17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#276

Whoot. I knew you wouldn't let me down my munchy!! It was awesome!!

Well I kinda wanted Arnav to rip tht maglesutrra out of her neck and say to hell with this but I guess that wouldn't happen since u don't like Arnav as much rofl

Anyway, that would have been interesting to see ritE?? No, I guess it would be for me lol.

I loved it and update soon!!

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#277

awesome update minimiffun!

Its time for payback!! i'm sure Khushi didn't had multiple partners but she was just saying to get square with him! She did really needed him, not sexually though!

its a pity what ASR turned her into. ruthless and cold.

Thel ast line was really brilliant. Sounded like a paradox though!

thanks a ton for the pM

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#278

omg thank you thank you thank you thank you so much for the wonderful update!! too bad for asr though... karma is a bitch!! so damn happy arnav is getting a taste of his own bitter medicine!!

thanks a ton for the pm!

continue soon!

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#279

wow, this update was truly fantastic...absolutely loving how the story is going...

so Arnav has finally realized what he's done...he's turned her life upside down and made another ASR out of her...this isn't going to be easy cuz Khushi isn't melting anytime soon...after all the trouble he gave her, he deserves it...

waiting for the next part...please continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#280

f**k.
holy shit man.
i mean. wow.

first of all, muchas gracias for that amazingly long and pleasurable update ;P

let's start at the top now.
so the spiral staircase, i love how you're using it.
in arnav's mind it's what takes him to khushi, it's the pathway for his redemption the only way into the room of a girl he knows he needs but cant achieve because- in khushi's mind their relationship has always been like the spiral staircase, it circles and circles and there's no place to stop unless you go all the way up or all the way down, theres no in between, no landing where you can sit and take a break no doors to the sides, you trudge on and on and climb yourself dizzy... i think that she consciously took the choice to stop trying, the staircase will keep going up, maybe it's easier to just jump over the railing?

^ wow^

then the ons. well, my my hasnt our little khushi grown up? although i'm pretty sure she's bullshitting him with that whole too many men to count thing, it hit where i was meant to -subconsciously on her part im guessing- it hit arnav babu in the gut and the man can now suffer like he made her suffer. the circle of karma but hopefully theyll break even soon and fall into a state of nirvana?

ok now im going completely off the charts and saying, this line:

"Is that the best you can do?" Khushi said a little disappointed. She had just begun to get pleasure out of the whole experience only to find him done.

has a bit of symbolism. go ahead, laugh. what im saying is, khushi has only been disappointed by him so far, she gave it her all and before she knew it it was over and for all she knew he'd taken what he'd wanted and didnt give a shit for her.

but then that's where arnav retorts,

"O I'm just getting started, my sweet" Arnav purred in her ear

as in, he may or may not have started this game. really when did it actually begin? but either way, he's in it for the long run and this time he's willing to do whatever it takes to win, now if its winning by winning or winning by losing, time will tell. but either way, the man is literally only getting started, or so im betting, ASR has more than a few tricks up his sleeve, he is after all ASR right?

ok now let's get seriously seriously, all that was just sex wasnt it *sigh* i'll live...
if you promise to update soon again 😛

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