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ravenheart

@ravenheart

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Update karo !!!! I want to know what happens next! I hate suspense. It is killing me...arrrgggh!

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#172

plzzz plzzz update soon!!

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#173

my heart literleey clenched when she walked out. like it was what she should've done, but the fact that it was at the very moment when arnav stopped living in a haze and anjali realized what had gone wrong...it was horrible.

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Pissa99

@Pissa99

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Wowww...a great piece of writing :) Plsss update soon..

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Reserved..

*Edited*

Hey there,

I finally caught up with the chapter. Apologies for the delay.😊

So, finally The Spiral Staircase. The chapter has a great number of revelations. I just can't believe that Khushi would spit upon love the way she did. She never was the one to hold grudges and be unforgiving. I think hurt is great catalyst to stimulate such reactions. Did she really stop believing Devi Mayyia, I can't believe that either. She really has turned cold. May be Arnav and his newly-found warmth and love will warm her up..

Love is the most destructive and useless emotion on the planet. It is a festering disease and the limb that gets it should be hacked off so it doesn't infect the rest of the body! Love is only a tool that people use against you jiji, so it's best to take the budding feeling and strangle it with your own bare hands before someone else gets to know about it! Love is for pathetic losers and you should run away from it jiji, not embrace it like a fool!"

Loved it<3
Please Continue Soon.
Thanks for the PM.

Love,
Dee.

P.S. - *yay* I am first...😆

Edited by -Dee- - 13 years ago

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AquaBluez17

@AquaBluez17

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#176

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first damn im 2nd! GRGRGRGRG! MUNCHY.

anyway, great update hun. as you know, I have joined ASR in his despair. Poor baby.
Well at least Khushi wasn't mean...
Don't make her too mean to him😕 Well I guess but, Ugh I love Arnie too much!! !😭😭 This should be a crime. Grr. So biased I am.

Anyway, great update as always. I liked the fight khushi had w. Payal honestly it was much better then the " AWW JIJI GO AHEAD!"

Edited by AquaBluez17 - 13 years ago

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Brilliant update Sahar [I read your name somewhere, did I get it right? :D]

I loved the way you've portrayed the change in Arnav, and my my the way Khushi's changed is staggering! Can't wait to see how he reaches out to her <3

xoxo

Aanya

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bhavnah

@bhavnah

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#178

great update

continue soon

thnxx for the pm

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#179

*sitting still, staring at my screen, blood rushing fast to my brain, feeling a weird feeling of hot and cold at the back of my head...

B.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l...

Thanks for the pm... Do continue soon... Waiting eagerly...

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#180

Woah!!!

Its gonna be fun. . .Watching Arnav run behind Khushi!!

The update, as usual, was awesome!! 😃
I like the fact that Arnav has started believing in God!!
And the fact that Khushi has stopped it!!

And their characters seems to be interchanged!!
TOtally AWEsome!!!
Update soon, muffin. . .
And thanks for the PM 😳