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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the PM. Khushi made the right decision of leaving.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Muffin...Muffin...Muffin... oh Muffin...

that was so fantastically written... it left me speechless... ⭐️👏

I could hear the sound my 🥺 while i was reading that...

poor... poor Khushi...

Anjali totally deserved what happened at the end... *smug smile*

as for Arnav... how I wish that Khushi doesn't forgive him so easily!!!!!


the dude needs to Suffer with a capital S!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
God i actually cried while reading this!
AHH too much pain. Can't handle it. Gosh never ever should anyone go through anything like this. I guess hell must be better than this.

Please do continue soon! waiting for you'r PM : )
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh man!! I nearly chocked while reading the chapter. The emotions were spot on. Beautifully written chapter, Dear :) Keep up the good work!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Amazing love it thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!!..👏...intense..romantic...dramatic and what not?!...it had everything...a splendid job muffin! Can't wait 2 read da next part...take care hun...tally ho! 😉
~SaPpHiRe aKa PrIaNkA~
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ah-mazing!!! Can't wait to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!!it was such a sad part..!
so hurtin for khushi..!!
anjali should deserve the pain for wat she did to khushi..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update. Poor khushi. I hate how anjali still blindly believed her husban until the very end. Cant wait to read what happens when arnav meets khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago

woah... THT WAS ONE HELL OF AN UPDATE!! it was so intense with hatred and pain! the flashbacks brought tears to my eyes!! i cannot believe that anjali actually tried to ask for forgiveness after wht she did to khushi!! ugh.. the brother and sister duo are soo effed up into their own little worlds... believing and giving their trust to all the wrong people and hurting the ones that are actually trust worthy and innocent!! anjali totally deserved shaksi's bashing after wht she did to khushi!! wht arnav did to khushi was just cruel and totally wrong... had tears streaming down my face when i read this part: He saw her stretch languidly with a smile on her face, he saw her sit up in bed and look at him with a shy smile playing at her lips, a deep blush creeping up her neck, filling her cheeks. She pulled the covers closer to hide her nakedness, the rays of the sun playing on her skin making her look mouth wateringly good.

He got up off his couch and walked towards the closet. He pulled out his suit jacket and a two big wads of cash. He flung the cash at her hard hitting her straight in the chest. She stared down at the money which had come to rest in her lap. She looked up, her gaze questioning yet reluctant to hear the answer.

"Arnav Singh Raizada never takes anything for free. That should be more than enough for you for the services you provided" and something snapped in her eyes. She kept looking at him but Khushi wasn't there anymore, not the one he had come to know. She didn't cry, she didn't scream, she didn't protest, she just gave him a blank look which held something that he couldn't decipher.Arnav chose to turn his back on her and leave.

but...loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved khushi's exit though!! it was perfect and the raizada's totally deserved it!! khushi's last line to arnav was the pefect touch to her exit!! thank you so much for the pm! the update was just amazing!! you are soo damn talented!! continue soon.. cant wait to find out how khushi reacts when she sees arnav in lucknow!!!

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