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tina_1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#671

nyc part but whose d security guy??

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#672

wowww yaar awsome update..loved its every bit.from the start to end,every word except that man head of security.that annoyed me..but part of story..so they accepted the relation without any contract..loved that..lets c where it goes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#673

aww girl! why do u have to write so well!

i loved that you touched on that first episode where we were left wondering about the anguish of this man. the fact tha it must have been difficult for him to enter that house again and witness the man who was responsible for so much heartache, was not portrayed well. i guess they wanted to concentrate on the cold and calculating, vengeful ASR.

i loved how you have read Garima so well. from the outset she has been all about Payal and rarely about Khushi. Bua was expected and the fact that they were grateful to Arnav for making an honest woman out of their daughter was a very clever twist and very realistic. it made it more painful and uncomfortable to read which is exactly what you must have een going for.

i loved the end too, and how both of them are so in-tuned to what the other is going through and what the other needs.

wonderful man! just frikking wonderful!

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#674

Wao loved this part my favorite

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nyxx

@nyxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#675

Awwh I love these twoo :)

Fab update, and yeah who is this new security dude? I hope no trouble...

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renee

@renee27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#676

another nice update...wow the contract is down the drains...cool...i love the understanding between these two...they'll fight for stupid reasons but in the end some sense has been knocked into their heads...glad. I love the way they understand n comfort each other.

the Gupta ladies proved once again that they are fit for a circus with layers of fats covering their unused brains.
Who is this head of security?...i got conphused😆...future updates will reveal that im sure

thaks for the PM...update soon😊

Edited by renee27 - 13 years ago

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Juicee Sushie

@Juicee_Sushie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#677

Hadn't read part 4 (no PM😭), just read it was great & set the scene perfectly for part 5!!!

Part 5 was simply BEAUTIFUL, your writing is amazing it evoked very strong emotions of sadness in me, for the treatment of Khushi at the hands of her so called family, in fact your writing evoked a lot more emotions than the scene in the show when the Gupta's find out about the bigamous snake!!!

I also loved the gentle side of Arnav the way he touches/holds her & little ways of caring, showing her how much he loves her although as expected from an Alpha Male not acting like a love sick fool but keeping a strong hold of his emotions; usually shown through intense passion which is fantastically portrayed by your superb writing of the under currents of feelings in this story!!!

I will say again, this needs to be turned into a book or you should be a romantic fiction author!!!

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Sunara

@princessunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#678

now that was a beauty!!!
both of them facing their most deeply rooted demons,,first him..having to be back at the place where he lost everything..where his life changed..
and her getting a repeat performance of her so called family's behavior towards her, emphasizing on their negligence and cruel disregard for her..
n finally in both nights, when either was down and was in nned of comfort the other became the stronger one..the better half of the moment..
di loved this update..n waiting 4 the next one once again!

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american_desi

@american_desi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#679

Very beautifully written! It was awesome!! Loved the way these two care of each other and support each other!!

Thanks for the update and the PM...

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#680

Loved it...they have so much to deal with...and it seems that they make some progress...and then bam...they end up taking 2 steps back...but I guess LIFE often works this way. Looking forward to more!!

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