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Posted: 13 years ago
awesooome...
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Condition Completed..150+ likes n 8 pages of comments...Plzzz COME BACK...😭
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Originally posted by: sarzah



No way!! I want real different people comments this time... 😆 but dont worry, once I decide to start a new thread, you can be my guest!!!😆



😆 ok dear your wish is my command. At your service ji 😳 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
pls update soon...dying to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago

FANTASY

CHAPTER- 28

Warning:- 18+


He looked into her eyes, searching for any kind of denial, or rejection, or unwillingness, but all he saw was love, devotion, trust, passion and relief. She lay under him, as if that's where she belonged, and he moved closer to her, tucking the loose strands of wet hair, behind her ears. She closed her eyes, as Maan moved his lips towards her ears and whispered, " Batao, Geet ussne tumhe kaha chua!!"

He kissed her forehead lightly and asked, " Yahaan?". She nodded her head for a no, without opening her eyes. Maan moved to her eyes, kissing them softly and whispered," Yahaan?". Tears flowed down her cheeks as she nodded her head for a no again. Maan moved down kissing her on the cheek and asked again, " Yahaan?". As Maan kissed her cheeks, Geet had the vision of the man running his filthy hands over them. She nodded her head for a yes, her eyes still closed tightly, and tears streaming down. Maan kissed her cheeks aggressively, and started sucking on the soft flesh, as if wiping away all traces of the vile man's touch from his Geet's skin forever. He kissed her open-mouthed on her cheeks, inviting a small moan from her lips. He rubbed his rough stubble on her cheeks gently, and finally, when he was satisfied that he had re- established his claim on her, moved to her lips. He placed a small peck on her lips, and whispered harshly, " Yahaan?". Geet's lower lip trembled as the visions came in front of her eyes again, and she slowly nodded her head for a yes. Suddenly, she felt light-headed, as Maan pulled her lips into his for a searing kiss. He pushed his tongue into her mouth, probing all the delightful secrets within. He traced all contours of her mouth hungrily, causing Geet to moan softly. She twisted her hands into his hair, and pulled him closer to herself, kissing back as passionately as she could. But somehow, she couldn't match Maan's passion which was close to madness. He continued kissing her, and even when Geet broke off, gasping hungrily for air, he still continued biting her lips and licking them gently. Geet deepened the kiss again after regaining her breath, and Maan started licking her tongue and teeth desperately. He caught hold of her tongue between his own, and started caressing it. Geet moaned out loud into his mouth, as saliva started trickling down her chin, but Maan didn't care. He finally broke the kiss, after planting several small pecks on her ,already swollen lips, and looked deep into her open eyes, seeking permission. As she stared back at him, without breaking eye-contact, he dipped his head into her neck, kissing her passionately, madly. Geet arched her back giving him more access, and he held onto her waist tightly, kissing any exposed skin he could find. He pulled her dupatta off, and threw it aside. Geet's eyes snapped open as the feeling of deja-vu coursed through her veins, but when she looked at her husband on top of her, who looked back with deep love and care at her, she forgot her inhibitions and hesitations. She tucked his shirt out, pulling it over his head, so that his upper body was exposed to her. She traced the ripples on his perfect muscular chest slowly, causing a low growl to escape his lips. She leaned forward and kissed him on his chest, where his heart lay. Maan pulled her up in a jerk, causing Geet to gasp in surprise. He opened the dori of her kameez, and pushed the sleeves down, biting her shoulders aggressively. Geet cried out loud, and as Maan laid her down on the bed again, pulling the kameez off her completely, she saw passion and endless desire in his eyes. She was scared momentarily, as she felt his eyes devour her, but somehow, she felt she could trust this man blindly. He couldn't even hurt her in his dreams.

Maan felt Geet stiffen when he pulled her kameez off, and quickly looked into her eyes, preparing to withdraw immediately, if she wanted. But all he saw was love and desire, and somehow, that set free the monster in him. The monster which was born to love Geet irrevocably. He bent down and kissed her on the chest, the visions playing in front of his eyes. His kisses became more aggressive, as he moved down to her navel, dipping his tongue into it. Geet shuddered, as she felt herself getting more wet and aroused very minute. Maan unhooked her bra, and buried his head between her breasts, kissing her furiously. Geet clutched hold of the pillow tightly, as Maan sucked and licked her nipples, transporting her to a whole new world of pleasure. She hissed out when he bit her breasts, and licked them to soothe the pain. He moved down and kissed her on her navel wetly, before undoing the string of her salwar. He moved it down, and looked at his delectable wife, as she lay there under him, in only very thin panties. He traced his fingers over the lace of her panties, and slowly touched the most sensitive spot of her body. She moaned loudly, clutching hold of the bed sheets even more tightly, as Maan took off the rest of his clothes, ripped off her panties, and entered her in one swift motion.

Her loud pleasurable moan was quickly engulfed by Maan's hungry lips, as he began moving within her strongly. He placed light kisses all over her body, as the room filled with her moans. She lay under him, with her eyes closed, as he continued pushing into her lovingly. But, suddenly, the visions of the incident earlier that day flashed in front of Maan again. He started pushing even more aggressively, causing Geet to moan out louder..As soon as she was about to reach her peak, Maan withdrew himself. She grunted slightly underneath his weight, and looked at him with complaining eyes. Maan looked back at her with a scorching look, and murmured, " Tum sirf meri ho, you are only mine!!! Say you're mine, Geet, say you're mine"

Geet looked into his almost pleading eyes, breathlessly, and felt the turmoil within him clearly. He looked at her desperately, urging her to say that she was his. Urging her to state the most obvious fact in the world. She looked him into the eye, and whispered, " Main sirf aapki hoon, sirf aapki!!" She closed her eyes, and continued chanting, " sirf aapki, sirf aapki!!" when Maan thrusted into her again, this time, more forcefully. She continued chanting the two words between labored breaths, while Maan looked at her lovingly, and finally when he took her to satiety, she let him fill her with his love and fell back on the pillow with a thud, still saying the words. Maan moved out of her, and kissed her full on the lips, putting a stop to her mutterings. As they broke the kiss, Geet looked at Maan, and wiped the sweat off his brow lovingly, She hugged him to herself tightly, and they lay there tangled into each other, their heart beats in sync, speaking volumes.

Maan felt tears on his back, and he jerked out of the hug instantly. Geet looked at him with tears in her eyes, and whispered, "MAAN!!"

Maan immediately moved, covering her up securely in the sheets and held her close in his arms. He looked at her tears anxiously, and tried to wipe them away, when she stopped him and said, " Maan, I am sorry… pichle kuch dino se humare beech jo kuch bhi hua, uske liye… I shouldn't have done that to you… I shouldn't have considered you separate from me. Main yeh kaise bhul gayii ke aap mujhse kitna pyaar karte hain… jo aapka hain woh sab kuch mera bhi hain… maine aapke saath bohut galat kiya… I am really sorry Maan.. agar aaj aap waqt par nahin aate toh pata nahin kya…."

" Sshh!! Calm down Jaan…"he soothed her, running his fingers lightly on her spine, tracing reassuring patterns. " Mere hote huye tumhe kuch nahin ho sakta, samjhi tum? Maine bhi toh tumhare saath accha nahin kiya… itna pyaar karta hoon tumse, lekin sirf dard diya hain maine tumhe… kitne pyaar se kheyal rakhti thi tum mera, lekin main?? Maine bohut bura bartav kiya tumhare saath… tumne saahi kaha tha, main bohut bura hoon… bohut bura hoon main!!"

" Ha aur aapne bhi saahi kaha tha, ke aap jaise bhi ho, sirf mere ho… samjhe?" Geet hugged herself closer to him, and he engulfed her completely into his arms.

They fell asleep in each other's arms, exhausted with the events of the day. Maan looked at Geet sleepily, as she snuggled closer to him, and he held her soft, petite body closer to his own, smiling lovingly at his beautiful wife. However, he thought of something and sobered down immediately. Their differences were sorted out, but they had forgotten something very important… No not they… HE… HE had forgotten something very important.

He tightened his grip on Geet, who moaned slightly in her sleep and whispered groggily, " Maan!!"

He knew she was in deep sleep, but still replied, " Yes love, I am right here!! Sleep…"

" I will do it first thing tomorrow morning" he said to himself, as he drifted into sleep.

PRECAP: Her face was flushed, her lips were swollen, and she held on to him tightly, digging her nails into his shoulder,

" Am I too strong for you?? Do I hurt you, Geet??"

She moaned louder under his weight, and slowly managed to whisper out breathlessly, " No you're perfect!! Just perfect!!"


Thank you all for the likes and comments!😃

I hope this part meets your expectations. It took me a LOT of time to write!!😳

So, fill it up to 170 likes, and ( since this is an 18+ part,) 10 pages of comments, and I will be back with another update.

Before I forget, I THINK the next update is also gonna be 18+.😳 It's a treat for you guys for being such lovely readers and friends!!

Love

Sarzah


P.S. Anyone wanting to be a part of my PM list, please mention it in your comments!

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Posted: 13 years ago
yeeyyy me 1st to comment 🥳🥳
wow😊
that was a passion filled update😳
😳loved it to core😳
i m wondering what they forgot...😉😉

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Edited by tinu.jindal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it it was hot😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res

Edited 😃
Oho me third 😆

Haayeee lovely update Sarzu :D
You left me all blushing 😳
Beautifully written 👏
I adored the part where Maan was erasing the devil's touch with his love 😳
Maan was fully charged 😆 😳 he left geet breathless 😉
Too hot to handle.

Leaving her in the middle of peak 😆 thats bad Maan 😛
Challo finally a passionate reunion. They have at last sort out their differences 😃
What did Maan forgot ? Hmmm
Cant wait for the next part yaar.

Love ya

Humera 🤗
Edited by sonu4ever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superrbbb! 😃 loved it 😉 it was hot 😳 will be waiting for the next update😊

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