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Sara

@immayurfan

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Nice start

Please pm me when you update

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Woah just came across this! Looks amazing! Loving your description of things, and the way you are progressing with the story. Also I love how you use correct grammar and punctuation. It just makes the story that tad bit more enjoyable :)

The pain you've described for Khushi is so realistic, and this line: "Arnav and I are the two banks of the river that can never meet." was amazing. Loved it!

Hoping to read more! Please add me to the PM list! Shall buddy you :)

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AquaBluez17

@AquaBluez17

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

amazing work Lyraa!! aww she is w/ some1 else :( how sad

well she will totally come back to hm so it is all good :D

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Ann

@ipkkndank

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

hmmm ... can't gather my words after reading this😆 😆 😆 😆

looking forward to read next parts~~~~~~~~~~~

pls update sooonnn ...

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Thanks for the PM

Ohhh that's lovely so Aryan ha... how long is this going to last...

ArShi of course has no control when they meet so I seriously doubt...

Loved the way you showed how much Aryan loves Khushi and on the other side Arnav too... Reminds me of Anurag & Rishabh... on Prerna...

But hope true love conquers everything

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517072

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

woww...loved Aryan's character..obviuosly he is much much better dan Arnav..😳 I hope u do proper justice to Aryan..thanx 4 PM..🤗

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

It's a nice start dear!! I loved the way you written it.. All scenarios it was like worth imagining..
Thanks for the PM!

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Wow this was good! Thansk for the PM!

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

is she with someone else????

great update...i am eagerly waiting for chapter 2

thanks fpr the pm

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Badra

@SublimeSanaya

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

😳res

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lets see how much u have been able to make me addicted to ur ff .. by this chap ..

as always the beginning is superb ... the way u have connected with the surrounding is simply amazing ... i guess this statement isnt new coming from me .. but cannt help repeating the sane thing .. it is simply touchy ..

and the song .. is fab ... and matches perfectly .. btw i havent listen to it before .. so u-tubed it and it is so ... no words to express it .. perfect choice ..

i thought La was too out of the pic .. my bad ... should have thought about her .. it slipped my mind ...

" Every thing had changed and yet every thing was still the same " -- this statement explain a lot ... past and present colliding .. nicly wriiten .. love the pool scenes .. wow .. the last para is superb .. u are good sugar .. dam good

the song is fab ...

waiting for ur next update .. and btw u were capable of making me more addicted to it ..

continue soon .. will be waiting

- -badra

Edited by 143badra - 13 years ago