MayurSS: ISHQ (updated part 5 on pg No 24) - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
WB! Congos 4 ur marriage!
wil b waitin 4 ur updates!
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Posted: 13 years ago
a very heartly congratulations for your marriage..

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i want you to continue this ff..

please please please..
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Posted: 13 years ago
i will be waiting for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u so much guys for your great response InshaAllah I will try to update it as soon as possible😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
i am just waiting for your next part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Thank u so much guys for your great response InshaAllah I will try to update it as soon as possible😊


Sacchi!!!!!!!😃
i though ke apka Nikah ho gaya toh ap humey bhul gayi waise ho gayi kya???
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz continue... please update

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Posted: 12 years ago

Asalam alikum Guys hope U all are fine.

I know U all wanna kill me .I am really really really very sorry friends I know I am too much late but Guys what can I do this marriage thing is na so much time taking and need so much of time and attention for adjustment in your new life.

But as I got a little chance so I decided to write a small update. Taka kuch to anso pochay😆

So Guys here is the Update hope U will like it

One More Thing I am converting this FF in SS as because of shortage of time Sorry again

Sorry for all mistakes

😊

PART :5

Mayank left the city He don't know what happening with him. Why this happening with him. Suddenly he felt suffocation around him .He start hating him. He wana hide from him but he don't know how.

He never thought that life will change in this way .He don't feeling guilty he is feeling disgusting. He wants to change what ever happened in past. He wants to Change that day. The day which changed every thing, his life every once life most especially her life.

Yes she. The girl who changed his life suddenly and completely. The Girl whose life becomes hell just because of his ego. He don't no what will he do how will he do.

In this all confusion whole one week passed finally he gathered himself and decided to face all situation and went back home.

He knocked the door and after few minutes door opened by his little sister Gunjan.

Gunjan (shout in excited voice): Bhaia'''.

She hugged him and starts crying. All the family members gathered there and starts meeting him every one was so happy and worried for him .They take him inside the room and start inquiring about him.

Nupur's father: Mayank beta humay maf kar do hum jantay ha ka huamray or humari beti ki wajha sa tumhay bohat takleef hoi ha tum na humari or is ghar ki izzat rakhna ka lia nupur sa shadi to kar li .Per mujha malom ha ka kisi badchalan larki ko or khas tor pa kisi or ki olad ko apnana koi asan kam nahi ha ma janta ho ka tum pa kya guzarti ho gr jab tumha her lamha us larki ko bardasht karna parta ho ga jo ka hum sab ki ruswai ka bais bani or

Mayank wasn't able to listen more worst things against Nupur .He interrupted Mr Ahmad

Mayank: Plz Uncle bus kary asi koi bat nhai ha or job he hoe wo sab ma ba bhol chukka ho bus mujha itna pata ha ka Nupur meri biwi ha or wo bacha mera ha sirf mera.

Mayank's Mom (in taunting tone): Acha shukar ha ka tumha yad ha ka wo bacha tumhara ha sirf tumhara or nupur tumhari biwi ha .

Mayank was little bit shocked after listening this tone of his mother but he ignored it .His eyes were searching every where that girl ho stole his all thoughts and calmness .suddenly her saw some one coming in the room with cups of tea. His eyes glued on that person. He was staring Nupur continuously his thoughts were stopped by Gunjan voice.

Gunjan : Bhaia ap ja kar aram kar la ab bohat thak gay ho ga wasa bhe ma nhai chati ka kuch logo kr shakal dakh kar ap ka mod phir sa kharab ho jay.

Mayank suddenly awake from his trance and nupur immediately goes from there.

IN ROOM:

After a while maynak goes back to his room and lie on bed and continuously thinking about Nupur and how to talk to her. After seeing the behavior of his family her understand it clearly that nupur is not in a good condition and only he is responsible for this.

He wanna talk to her but haven't got courage suddenly he hear the noise of door he open his eyes and saw her coming in room silently and start gathering her things from there .He was continuously watching her .She opened the cupboard and take her al clothes out from there and put them in suit case. Suddenly Maynak realizes the situation and asked her confusingly.

Maynak : Nupur ye sab kya kar rahi ho tum .

She didn't ans him and silently keep doing her work.

Mayank (in little louder voice): Nupur ma tum sa kuch poch raha ho Ye sab kya kar rahi ho tum.

Gunjan enter in room.

Gunjan: Ma na kaha ha is sa bhai ye sab karna ko.

Mayank : per ku.

Gunjan: ku ka ma nhai chati bhai ka ap subha sham is ka chera dakh ka taklef uthata raha is lia ma na he isa is room sa shift hona ko kaha ha taka ap sukon sa rh saka.

Mayanak (in anger): Tumha kis na ijazart di ka tum ye faisla kar sako ka nupur ka hona mujha taklef data ha ya sukon.

Gunjan: Bhai wo ma na .

Mayank : bus Gunjan mujha tumhari koi explanation nahi sunni.

Gunjan: Per bhai '

Mayank(angrily): I don't wanna listen any thing more. Nupur Is my legal wife and she have all rights to share this room with me .Do U understand?

Gunjan goes from there angrily from.

Mayank take a deep breath and turns towards Nupur.

Mayank : Nupur apna saman wapis rakho tum kahi nahi ja rahi .Ye room tumhara ha or kabhi kisi ko agar yaha sa jana ke zarorat pari to wo sirf ma hoga .

He goes from there leaving silent Nupur.

At Night:

Mayank was sleeping on sofa in his room suddenly he felt some movement in the room he opened her eyes slowly and search here and there in the room but didn't find Nupur .He got up immediately and go outside the room he search out whole hose but didn't find her he got so scared and start praying.

Mayank(in mind): Oh God Nupur kaha chali gai ha .Ma janta ho ka usa meri wajha sa bohat problems face karni par rahi ha or ho sakta ha is he wajha sa wo yaha sa chali gai ho .Per woa sa kasa khai ja sakti ha wo bhi akela kisi ko kuch batay bagair .Kahi usa kuch hogaya to nahi nahi asa nahi ho sakta ma abhe sab ghar walo ko uthata ho.

As he was about to go wake up every once Suddenly Nupur enter in room and he stuck on his place after seeing her.

PRECAPE:

Mayank: Plz nupur mujha batao ye sab kya ha or kasa hoa.Kuch to bolo warna ma pagal ho jao ga

Nupur smile slightly.

HOPE UL LIKE IT

WITH LOVE

GUL TAQI
😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update!!!!
please continue soon!!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
After..
so many many many...months...
you have updated it...

well in this update there was no Nupur dialog..

well let' see...

Mayank is feeling disgusting of himself..
and other family members are just blaming Nupur in every way...

eager for the next part

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