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Posted: 13 years ago
is he human being? i dnt think so.
such a coward man who even cant take right decision. hated him.
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Posted: 13 years ago
vryy nic update
loved it
aww poor nupur..
n mayank is so heartless i never knew
moreover her family tooo .never support her...
lovely update
next update plsss jaldi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi gul itne din baad comment Kar rahi hun toh comment ki size badi hogi mera pehla question hain Agar aap is speed se chalengi toh gaadi station pahunchegi ya nahin mera matlab aap ff complete karengi ya nahin aapne kahaan do mahine baad aapki shaadhi hain uske baad toh aap apni life main busy hojayengi toh isiliye poocha waise congrats once again
coming to update
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last but not least jaldi update kardo itna wait karwaana achi baat nahin hain
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Posted: 13 years ago
waititng.. for update...
please do update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
For the first time i found mayhak as a cowered
i really hate maynk here..
he ruined nuprs life..:(


plz update next part soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
its really very long...time
lease yaar..
agar ab aap thodi si.. free hain.. to..
please update...
i really want to read furthur
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Posted: 13 years ago
Please update..it..

I really wanna read more..
I liked your Previous ff..
And they were so good..
Please Please..
update...it..
I really wanna read More..
Please.. I want to see.. Next step of Mayank...
wanna see..
How love will happen...
please update...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Asalam alikum Guys hope U all are fine

I am so sorry for again late update

But I know u all are so sweet and forgive me.

Thank u so much for your all wishes and lovely response.

Here is the next part

Sorry for all mistakes.

😉

PART 4

Nupur was lying on her bed and thinking about all events those are happening in her life. She was astonished that just one night changed her life completely her one mistake make her life hell and now nothing in her hand whatever decision destiny will decided for her she have to accept it.

Suddenly her room's door opened and Gunjan entered in her room. Nupur immediately got up from her bed.

Nupur: Gunjan shukar ha khuda ka tum a gai mujha tum sa kuch bat karni ha.Wo ma keh rahi thi ka

Gunjan (rudly): nupur jaldi sa bahar chalo tumha sab bola raha ha .Kazi sahib a gay ha tumhara nikha ha.

Nupur (shockingly): What! What are u saying .Mera nikha achanak per kis ka sath.

Gunjan: Bhai ka sath Mayank bhai ka sath .

Nupur become stunt on listing this.

Gunjan: Tum is halat ma chay sari zindagi asa hi khari raho I don't care per is wakt sab ka pas tumhara intazar karana ka falto time nahi ha ais lia jaldi sa chalo.

Nupur said nothing and just start walking behind her silently .They entered in the hall where every one was waiting for them .Nupur's Dad was sitting with loosing expressions on his face and mayank with broad smile.

Nupur siti along with gunjan on chair .Kazi ji start The Nikkah and finally with both brise and groom accept ness Nikkah completed and both of them tie with the knot of marriage.

IN BED ROOM:

Nupur was standing near window and staring towards sky blankly. She don't know whatever happened with her that night was worst or whatever happened with her just few seconds ago was more worst.

She Become Mrs Nupur Mayank suddenly its looks like a worst night mare of her life. Suddenly she heard light sound of opening door followed by sound of some ones foot steps which are coming towards her.

Her breath tucked in her chest .She have to face that person whose face she never wanna see in her whole life .She felt warm breath on her back so immediately turned back and found Mayank was standing so much near to her.

Mayank smiled wickedly to see scared expressions on her face.

Mayank(in taunting tone): Kya hoa Nupur kesa lag raha ha tumha Mrs Mayank ban kar .Heran ho na ka ye sab kuch asa kesa achanak ho gaya .Chalo ab to tum meri wide ban chuki ho to tum say eh sab chhupana achi bat nahi ha.is lia bata hi data ho hoa kuch is tarha my dear wife ka'

FLAH BACK

Nupur's father was sitting on sofa helplessly .Nupur's mother come near him and put her hand on his shoulder.

ND: mujha kuch samajh nahi araha ab kya hoga .Mujha nupur sa ye umeed nahi thi wo bebak ha , nakhreely ha mo phat ha ye to ma humesha sa janta tha magar wo is had tak ja sakti ha ma na socha bhi nahi tha.Is larki na to mujha kahi mo dekhana ka laik nahi chora dil to cha raha ha ka ma khudh kashi kar lo.

NM: Allah ka wasta asi bata mat kara wasa hi is larki ki wajha sa sab tabha ho raha ha upper sa ap asi dil dehlana wali bata kar raha hay.

ND: To kya karo tum hi batao mujha is larki na to khai ka nahi chora ab kya hoga is ka socha ha tum na kon kara ga is sa shadi ab tak to ye bat adhiraj ka ghar ma bhi pata chal gai hogi or yakenan wo bhi is ko accept nahi kara ga.

NM: wo ma ap ko batana to nahi cha rahi thi magar ab batana para ga .un ka phone aya tha or unhana kaha ha ka apni bati or us ki gunhao ki potly ko apna pas hi rakha.

ND (Helplessly): Begum ab kya hoga is larki ka kon apnay ga ab isa.

Mayank: Ma apnao go usa ma karo ga Nupr sa shadi .

ND: Kya keh raha ho tum beta kya tum sach ma asa karo ga.

Mayank : Ji uncle ap ki izzat meri izzat ha ap ki taraf koi ungli uthay ye mujha bilkul bardasht nahi ha .Agar ap ko koi aitraz na ho to ma npur sa shadi kar ka s ka bacha ko apnana chata ho.

Mayank's Mom (angrily): Mayank tumhara demagh to kharab nahi ho gaya ha tum janta bhi ho ka kya kjeh rahua ho .Najana us ka pet ma kis gandi nali ka kera pal raha ha or tum kehta ho ka us sa shadi kana chatty ho.

Mayank(angrily): Plz Ma is ma us bacha ka kya ksor ha us ko bura bhala kehna ki koi zarorat nahi ha .Or ha ma na nupur sa shadi karna ka fasla kar lia ha or ab isa koi nahi badal sakta . Uncle ap kazi sahib ka intizam kara hum ai hi nikha kara ga.

Nupur's father hugs him immediately.

And finally nikha had done.

FLASH BACK ENDS

Mayank (smile cruelly): So Miss Nupur ahmad Oops I mean Mrs Nupur Khan kesa laga mera surprise tumha kya lagta tha ka tum jo chao krao or kaho or ma sab kuch khamoshi sa saho .Nahi nupur ji asa nahi ho sakta ab tumha pata chala ka Mayank khan kya chez ha.

Tears were start flowing from nupur's eyes.

Mayank grape her shoulders so tightly and said in so harsh tone.

Mayank:Ek bat kan khol kae sun lo kabhi bhi ye mat samajhna ka ma na tum pa ya tumhara gharwalo pa reham kha kar ya taras kha kart um sa shadi ki ha .Tum pa to agar tum akhri sasay bhi la rahi ho na to tub bhi mujha taras nahi ay ga .Meri tum sa shadi karna ki sirf or sirf ek hi wajha ha mera bacha jis ka is sab moamla ma koi kusor nahi ha . chay koi jana ya na jana magar ma to janta ho na ka wo bacha mera ha to koi us ka upper ungli uthay ye mujha bardasht nahi ha .Suna tum na .

With jerk her left her .Due to his this sudden act she fall on ground and he goes from there leaving nupur in shock.

NEXT DAY MORNING:

Every one was sitting on dinning table for break fast but no one was eating any thing.

Mrs Ahmad (Nupur's dad): Kya hogaya bhi khana shuru kara na.

Mrs Khan (Maynak's Mom): sab kuch to kha lia humara ap ki bati na ab kya baki bacha ha khilana ka lia.

Mrs Ahmad (Nupur's Mom): Bhabhi kasi batay kar rahi ha ap.

Mrs Khan: To or kya khao ma phela to ap ki bati na pata nahi apna mo kaha kala kar lia or us ka bad mera beta ko apna jal ma phasa kar shadi kar li or kal najany us ka sath kya kia ka subha sa mera beta ghar ma nahi ha najana kaha chala gaya.

Mr Ahmad: Kya matlab Mayank subha sa ghar ma nahi ha kaha gaya achanak . Begum ap jaye or foran ja kar nupur ko bola kar laye ma abhi us sa pochta ho.

Mrs Ahmad goes to nupur's room and call her out .She came in dining hall with lowering her eyes.

Mr Ahmad (in strict tone): Nupur hum ap sa koi bat nahi karna chata ku ka hum an ap sa sara rishta tor dia ha. magar ab humari majbori ye ha ka ap Mayank ki biwi bhi ha or us ka bara ma pochna ka lia huma ap sa hi bat karni para gi.

Tears were start coming from nupur's eyes.

Mr Ahmad: Mrs Mayank khan kya ap huma bata sakti ha ka humara beta Maynak kaha ha subha sa huma nazar nahi araha ha us ki ma bohat pareshan ho rahi ha.

Nupur (in lower tone): ji mujha nahi pata.

Mrs Khan (in insulting tone): Tumha nahi pata to or kisa pata hoga ha .Aray pehla mera masom beta pa pata nahi konsa jado jantar ker ka usa phasa lia or ab najan rat ko kya kia us ka sath ka wo subha sa hi gayab hoagya ha.Akhir tum mera beta sa chati kya ho.

Nupur(in teary voice): Mujha sach ma nahi pata ka'

Mr Ahmad: Tumha samajh nahi a rahi ka tum sa kuch pocha ja raha ha .Akhir Mayank kaha ha ..

Mayank : Ma yaha ho uncle kya hogaya ap itna naraz ku ho raha ha.

Mrs Khan: Hay shukar ha mera beta ghar agaya ma to samjhi thi ka is kalmohi ki wajha sa to hum sab sa naraz ho kar chala gaya ha.

Mayank : Ma plz kya keh rahi ha ap ma ku ap sab ko chor kar jao ga .ma to bus zara apna kam sa bahar gaya tha.

Mrs Khan : Ha ha mujha pata ha mera beta to bohat pyara ha wo mujha ku chora ga .Khot to sirf is karam jail ma ha.

Nupur wasn't able to stay there more and run from there and First time Mayank felt some thing bad.

Nupur came in her room and start crying badly.

Nupur's provision:

Why God Why this is happening with me kya ma itni buri thi ka mera sath asa sab ho akhir ku or agar ma buri bhi thi to is sab ma is bacha ka kya kosor ha .Akhir ku asa ho raha ha mera sath sab log mujha galat samjhta ha .Had to ye ha ka mera parents ko bhi mujh pa bharosa nahi ha Ay Khusa to hi meri madad kar to hi sab kuch janna wala ha to to janta ha ka ma be kosor ho ab to hi ha jo mujha surkhuro karway ga .Ay mera rab meri madad farma.

She was crying so badly. Suddenly she heard the voice of azan and she felt some type of strength in her body and got up immediately from bed and offer namaz (prayer) first time in her life.

After offering prayer she can feel power in her self just she got a new life new strength to face the world for her and for her child.

With passing time nupur start gathering herself .She never said any single word. She always did her work silently. All the family members' still hate her so much .Mayank's mother always taunts her. But she never answers her back.

Nupur's this attitude bothering Mayank so much .He wants her to shout and tell every one about his deeds but her calm attitude make him uncomfortable .when every one said bad to her He felt guilty because now he start realizing his mistake .He know Whatever he did was wrong .But he didn't get strength to tell this truth to every one.

But he also not able to see all of this in front of his eyes so he decided to get rid of all this pain and finally he left the house leaving behind another bundle of problem for Nupur.

After ages I finished this part .Thanks God

Hope U like it

WITH LOVE
GUL😊



Will Mayank has seriously left her..
or he will come back???


please do update soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Asalam alikum guys How are U all
I am really very sorry due to my marriage preparations I wasn't able to cont my story .As all the things settled now so I AM BACK here and wanna cont my story .If u wanna me to cont this story plz inform me.
WAIITING FOR YOUR'S RESPONSE
WITH LOVE
Mrs. GUL TAQI
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats for ur marriage
yes pls do continue it
waiting to read further parts😊

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