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meina

@maryamdiggi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

OK where am gonna start??????

** first let. Start with the NAME of the SS "craving sanity" is absolutely perfect I love it!!!!!
NOW the family let me see if got this right. First is hallie who is 25,kyle the serious one who is 23,Michael and Dylan the first set of twins. 21 year of age, Colin who is 20 ,then come the triplets Nathan,ethan ,Philip who are 19 ,the second set of twins Tyler and Aaron then comes the last person of the house our very own ridhima WOW what a big family!!!!!

Any way I just love the concept of the story it's intriguing how they seem perfect and soOo their each other especially the small one in the family who is ridhima,I kinder feel sorry for armaan becouse he has convince his way through all of them which is not gonna be easy and if they don't bet him black and blue first that is, anywho these story is exciting as hell !!!!!!!! And I can't wait to read more of it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's so nice of ridhima's mother to force ridhima. To get to know were she came from!!!!!!!! Not many mother's will do that And I miss their father already it would have sooo much better with him around!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Hey Neha!!!
First of all congratulations ob staring one more thoufht of yours is penned down and thank you very much for the pm.
Coming to the story—
– It was a long, a very long introduction...don't take me wrong we as your readers always like more stuff to read.
– Riddhima is adopted by a British family is something unique in the first place and then having 10 siblings adds flavour to the story . [ :) ]
– Being the youngest and only girl present in the house to 9 brothers, who are so over-protective about her [hehehe...]
– the parts in between where Riddhima gives get thoughts about the girl-friends that her brothers date gives us the idea that the story's narrator is indeed a 15 years old
– Her mother is a woman from another world I suppose, he adopted Riddhima after having 10 kids of her own [shocked ]
– And her mother is so sweet she believes that her daughter should also know her real roots and her brother 's reaction to it is so cute and caring
– and what's with her mother, after her life to start dating and Riddhima, someone had rightly said, you may go away from your roots as far away as possible but they are embedded into you from birth

Luv
Nandi
P.S. writing this long comment, highlighting every point after sooo loong... [ :p ]

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Sanaa629
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Ohkkk..that is one UNIQUE plot woman...!! i've read a couple of stories with Big families..but WOW!! This tops the list..Oh I also watched a movie with a big family.. uhmmm...what's it called..Mehh forgot..but yeah..your writing caught my attention from the first word..!!😊

I loveee how there are currently 11 people living in ONE house..and I llovee how most of them are guys.!! and I lovee how Riddhima has got 9 older brothers who are sooo protective of her..and I looveee how two of them are like Fred and George Weasley..!! 😆 I wouldn't mind having brothers like those at all..!!! Gosh I envy Ginny..

Anyways..moving on from my Harry Potter dream land..Riddhima's life seems so colourful and cheerful.. guess that's the thing with having big families..!! Even though things can get up to boiling point with tempers and tantrums and what not..when you look back it's all always fun and games..😊 And By reading this I started missing home and my 'kid' days a bit too much..*sniffs* but don't worry..you can make it up to me..by updating soon..!!

I wanna know how Armaan will be introduced to her..I wanna know how Armaan will overcome that brothers defences if he will that is..and I wanna know..ahhh I just wanna know everything..!! So continue sooon..!!! 😃

Sanaa

PS - I'm glad you made it an AR SS..I might not have been too enthusiastic if it had been an Arhi SS..And before you ask..nope I'm not over Armaan Riddhima..😆

Talking about Weasleys, did you know Ginny's real name in the book was Ginevra? I didn't know for a long time and when I did, I realised that a friend of mine, who has the same name also has the same nickname! Awkward moment that.😳

Anyway thank you! For once, I like the setting too. 😆I don't come from a joint family but we're close enough, so I guess I can empathize with you :D How's UK treating you?

And I would never be able to write any story out of the serial setting for ArHi, it's just too weird. I mean making scenarios and plots for AR comes naturally while seeing ArHi out of IPKKND is kinda hard. 🤔At least I can't think of stories out of the real background for them; while with AR, it's quite easy and creative nonetheless.

Glad you find it interesting! Keep commenting. I miss you twin <3 :/

Oh and I reserved a spot of WK! Don't worry, I still stalk the story!

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Maitree

@..Maitree..

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

WHERE WERE YOU?

RES. 😳 🤔

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Nehaaa

Wow Just love the concept girl

Too unique and interesting

I just loved it to the core

The whole introductory part is too Awesome

want to read more

so do do continue soon

Thanks for the PM

Take care

PS: I just love the title to the core

Lots of Love

Geet

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Sorry 'bout the late comment, I was caught up! :)

Coming to the SS, this is awesome, really! I love reading about huge families and I think its going to take me a while to remember who's who in this SS 😆

I can't wait to see when/how Armaan is brought into this story and how they develop feelings for each other 😳

Thanks for the PM Neha, I'd never have seen this otherwise!!

xoxo

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MidnightMusings

@MidnightMusings

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Wow... That's a real different story and am already loving it!!! Dunno why, but i really like the name Nathan!!😍 😳Love the other characters, Riddhima's bros... N her mom... 😆

You write beautifully yaar!!! Thanks for the pm dear!!!

Update soon..

Love

Liashna

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Zirwa

@zirwa

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

the second OS Understanding...its very beautiful...though short but very unique...i just read AR stuff so i read that onli...very nice :)

write some more on AR...would love to read 😊

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Damn, I haven't edited a single spot on this thread. Don't kill me please? I promise to edit them by tonight, kapische.

But here's my comment on CS.

First - the title. Craving Sanity. Irshad! Irshad!

🤣

But really, jokes apart, I love it. And I don't know why, I feel like this one has a lot of you in it. From all our conversations put together, I know you crave for sanity too, so yea, I know Payton is probably a more improvised version of yourself. I know your family is not like her's though, but I just feel like Payton is you. Is it?

And yea, like I said, I'm pretty sure your family is nothing like her's. So BRAVO to having such tangent thinking. This one, I can positively say, hasn't been written about before. And the Know Your Culture classes. That is definitely YOU. You had told me how you were attending them! See, see, I remember!

Coming to the protagonist - may I say, I love the whole Payton thing? Its so...unique. At least for AR, or any other Indian couple story, such a background coverage hasn't been written. And I love how you're writing something so...intriguing.

9 brothers. How, like how is this female surviving? It must be crazy living in a complete mad house! But this 9 brothers thing reminds me of P.S. I Love You. The book. Holly had loads of brothers in that one, I remember. I love that book. Sigh. But anyhow, yea, I have feeling Payton's going to be a tomboy. Like a complete tomboy.

And she's defos going to meet Armaan in the Culture Classes.

I can't say which brother I love the most here. First, because they're too many of them, and I don't remember them just yet. But till now, I love the Fred-George wannabes. Or should I say Gred and Feorge? Get it? Get it? Get it? 🤣

Okay. My mad-ass comment is done. Happy? You should be.

And if I like this thing too much, then you're gonna have to convert this into a story and not an SS. You should know that. AEIP and LOL jayye tel lene. I love this story already. Period.

But, that doesn't mean I love AEIP and LOL any less, so uh-oh, here it comes -

UPDATE.

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

And oye. Don't you dare scrap off the SS. Its at least better than the response I got for my SS. I got like, what, 4 comments? I know its just the prelude, but whatever.

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