A Beautiful Mess OS Gal(AR SS Pg7) (4/3/12)

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

People with Reserves : Jojo and Shru, please edit!! Waiting for your replies!

Bisous,

Neha

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

OMG Neha! That was amazing, have i ever told you i love the way you write? No? Yes? Well i want to say it again if i have, your writing style always catches my attention, it makes the plainest of things seem so interesting.

I love this drabble, so Armaan has Asperger's Syndrome, i read about that and i found it so interesting, i was telling my friend about it and she just looked blank lol. I research random things that just pop up in to my head and i always have to tell someone even if they aren't listening 😆

Thw way you styled out this drabble was so good, i love how Armaan found someone who wouldn't judge him and love him for who he is. I noticed that many people always tend to stay away from people who has disabilities and i have always found that wrong. I once heard a girl make fun of a asmaetic person and i literally shouted in her face giving her a lecture. Yeah, she hates me now and is scared of me too :P

Riddhima is one of those unique people who look past all that, and sees the real him, the sweet him, and he totally deserves her in his life. I don't know how people can just walk off whilst having a conversation, i find it so rude.

All people who have and don't have disabilities, want to find something or someone that will make them feel like they are perfect, and they don't need anyone else, Armaan has found that in Riddhima :)

Truly beautiful Neha, well done :)

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Moron I didn't even know you posted it!! And then I remembered that you wrote the OS for me in the first place!! 🤣

LOL!!

I shall edit tonight promise :( check your scraps!!

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

I just replied!😆

And you've written : "I'll remember to edit this one." on the first comment for the first OS. LMAO 🤣

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Nehaa <3 Oh my! I love this OS!! Seriously, it's BRILLIANT!

I love how you write, the way you weaved his condition into the story without making it sound like a charity case or something! The whole piece was crisp and although we didn't know what happened before/after, you've managed to convey everything perfectly! <3 I liked how the simple act of listening made him open up to her 😳 It was very subtle, yet had so much depth <3 And despite the fact that there were no confessions/admissions of love love from her, their relationship was perfect <3

I loved loved loved this, really! <3

Miss you!

xoxo

Aanya

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Idiot go comment on my drabbles, then I'll edit 🤣

And my memory's like a goldfish, don't rely on it!! ;p

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett
Idiot go comment on my drabbles, then I'll edit 🤣

And my memory's like a goldfish, don't rely on it!! ;p

Pinhead go and reply to my comment and then I'll comment on the drabbles though I already commented on the AR one when you PMed it to me about a month ago!!😆

Even your brain's the size of a goldfish's brain so I get the point.😎

@ Aanya: I'll reply to your comment with all the others soon! Miss you too <3

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Rhea

@Rhea.KaJen

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

OMG!
Neha? THIS was EXCELLENT!
Seriously!
It was so beautifully written..
Each and everything sounded really cute u know?
It made me go "Awww..." <3
I loved it!
Please do write more..
Love,
Rhea

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amruta04

@amruta04

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

hey Neha this was awesome very well written take care and thanks for the pm.

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

OMG HAWW :O Neha I love you <3

This was beautiful. I loved it so much that I hoped it was a story of your FF :| but obviously I know its not possible : (kyunki aap busy hain.

But it was a different concept, and I loved every bit of it. It's not so easy to write a story when you have to write in something in a few words. Even though we don't know what was wrong but your writing makes us picture the story. And the way you've expressed his situation in the story and made it even more beautiful. Loved the ending especially.

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