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Posted: 19 years ago
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**RECAP**
Angad drops Kripa home, and then goes back to his own house. He is lying down on his bed when he closes his eyes and remembers something. They show a flashback......and they show Angad promising to himself that he will get revenge for Krips on for that slap that she gave him by making her fall in love with him, and then breaking her heart.

~~~~~EPISODE 5~~~~~

The next day, Angad and Kripa both go to college. That day, Anagd and Kripa don't have any classes together so, he doesnt get a chance to see her or talk to her. Kripa meets Mishti, in that class, and she becomes her best friend almost right away. After classes, Mishti and Kripa are walking together along the hallway and hatting away when Kripa bumps into someone and all her papers fall down. She bends down and starts to speak angrily to that person with even looking at him.

Kripa: Uff! Dekhkar nahin chal sakte kya tum? (Kripa then looks up and sees that person is none other than Angad)

Kripa: Oh Angad! Tum! Sorry maine tumhe nahin dekha. I am so sorry.

Angad: Its okay. You're forgiven.

Kripa: Theek hai, toh bye Angad. Hum phir kabhi milte hain.

Kripa leaves from there with Mishti. Mishti is surprised that this is one girl who has not fallen for my BF Kartik's brother.😆 Kripa and Mishti go to Mishti's house to finish some project work together. Since Kripa's parents are not at home, Mishti invites Kripa to stay with her over the weekend, since the next day is a Saturday. They both finish their work that day, so they decide to spend the next day relaxing and going out.

~*~*THE NEXT DAY*~*~

Since it is a Saturday, Mishti decides to take Kripa out and show her around the city. She decides to take her out for a picnic. She tells Kripa to get up @7am, and be ready by8am in casual wear. Kripa gets ready by 7.30am, and decides to knock on Mishti's door to see if she is ready.

Kripa: Mishti? Main toh taiyaar hoon. Tumhe taiyaar hone mein kitna der lagega?

Mishti: Bas 15minute aur Kripa.

Kripa: Theek hai. Main humara picnic ka saamaan lekar neeche lahh mein tumhara wait karti hoon. Tum jaldi aanaa.

Mishti: Okay Kripa. Aur haan, agar koi teen baar lagaataar darvaje ki ghanti bajayega, toh darvaza kholna. Shaayad Kartik ya mera koi dost hoga. Voh humein pickup karne vala hai.

After Mishti days this, Kirpa goes down and wait for Mishti. But before Mishti comes, the doorbell rings 3times non-stop. Kripa thinks that it is Mishti's friend and goes to open the door. She is surprised to see that person, and that person is also surprised to see her.

Kripa & that person: TUM!!!

***PREVIEW***They all go on a picnic.....and play a game of Truth, Dare or Promise. (i dunno if this type of game really exists, but i just added on to the promise part to make it more interesting)

-----PS> please leave yur comments, i want to know how u all like my story.-----



Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
hey it realy good plz contt soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i have heard of truth or dare but truth or dare and promise sounds very interesting!!!!! a good part as let the world know that kripa is not going ga ga over angad, so that when she does fall for him, and he breaks her heart, all the sympathy will be for her!!!! continue soon, as the preview was very interesting!!! i wonder who the other person could be?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey..love ur story so far...cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i don't like ur fan fic, i LOVE IT!!!!
and continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Posted: 19 years ago
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jusr read it...
gotta say it was fab...
i'm lovin it so far...
plz try to cont. soon...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys, thanx for leaving yur comments.......i juzt wanna say, that i luv the fan-fics u all rite, especially yurs Pooja922...........and wait for teh next part.........it is coming out soon..........
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~~~~~EPISODE 5~~~~~

Kripa opens the door and she is shocked to see Angad there. She is just about to shout at Angad to ask him why he is there, and why he is floolowing her like almost everywhere when Mishti comes down the stairs.

Mishti: Arre Angad. Tum!

Kripa: Mishti, tum isse jaanti ho?

Mishti: (to Kripa) Haan, voh mere boyfriend Kartik ka chota bhai hai. (now to Angad) Toh Angad! Tum yahan kaise? Kartik nahin aaya?

Angad: Mishti voh Kartik bhai tumhara gaadi mein intazaar kar rahaa hai. Voh gaadi se nikalna hi nahin chahta tha.

Mishti: Tooh chalo? Hum chalte hai! Mujhe bas apna saamaan lena hai.

Mishti takes the picnic stuff, and Kripa helps her to carry it to the car. When they get there, they notice that it is actually a mini van, which Kartik has hired, since there are about ten people going on the picnic. All of Mishti's friends are here too. Most of them are couples.

Prithvi--Aliya (Angad's couzin)

Kartik--Mishti

Josh--Simone

Ronit (Angad's friend)--Pooja (Mishti's friend)

Kavya (Angad's friend)--Anjali (Mishti's friend)

So, since Angad was the only one who didnt have a girlfriend, he had to sit with Kripa as there waas no other option left. The picnic spot was on a small hill, and it took about half and an hour to get there. When they got there, the girl laid out the picnic mat, and then the food on top of it. Everybody sat down to eat their breakfast as they had not eaten anything since dinner the previous day. They finished their breakfast @about 9.30, and had loots of time left before they all went home in the evening, so they decided to take a hike. All the couples decided to go ahead, but Kripa and Angad decided to stay back and help clear out the place since they were both tired and not in the mood to talk. After the place was cleared up, Angad and Kripa both sat down on rocks, facing each other. There was a awkward moment of silence between the two of them. Both of them were getting bored, so they just decided to break the silence.

Kripa-Angad: Toh tumhe kya kya acha lagta hai.

Both of them laugh as they both said the same thing at the same time.

Kripa: Pehle tum bolo.

Angad: Mujhe books padhna accha lagta hai.

Kripa: Really! Kaunsi?

Angad: Jeffry Archer, aur Dan Brown ki sab books.

Kripa: Sach! Mujhe bhi. Aur mujhe music bhi accha lagta hai.

Angad: Mujhe bhi. Aur mere favourite singer toh Abhijeet Sawant aur Sunidhi Chauhan hai.

Kripa: Yeh nahin ho sakta.

Angad: Par kyon?

Kripa: Arre yeh toh mere bhi favourtie singers hai.

Angad: Toh iska matlab hai ki hamari pasand ki cheeze kitni mitli hai!

Kripa: Haan.

They carry on talking for some more, and realise that they have much more in common. As they are talking to each other, they are staring at each other too. Then, the talking stops and the staring continues. They stare at each other for quite a long time, and as they looks into each other's eyes, they realisr that they are both falling in love with the other. (Well, maybe only Kripa, but Angad is just pretending to do so.) They staring still continues, but only till when the couples come back. They realise that Angad and Kripa are both lost in each other. Mishti goes up to Kripa and snaps her fingers in front of her. Kripa and Angad then come out of their trance. It is almost lucnh time, so they all decide to have lunch. After lunch, they get bored and tired, so they decide to play a game during which they dont have to move around much. Pooja gets and idea.

Pooja: Toh guys, kyun na hum Truth, Dare or Promise khelen?

Kripa: Theek hai, par yeh kya hota hai?

Pooja: Yeh a khel hota hai jisme sab khiladiyan ek circle mein bethtein hai. Then they spin the bottle, and whoever the bottle is pointing towards when it stops, has to choose to answer to a question, which is either a truth, dare or promise. Get it?

Everybody: Got it.

They all sit in a circle. This is how they sit. Angad-Kripa-Mishti-Kartik-Kavya-Anjali-Pooja-Ronit-Prithvi-A liya-(then Angad again). First, Pooja spins the bottle and it stops and points towards Kripa.

Kripa: Oh no! Ab mujhe kya karna padhega?

*****PREVIEW:Angad admits in front of the whole gang that he likes Kripa, and proposes to her to become his GF. Kripa accepts as she also likes Angad. The whole gang is confused as to how can Angad fall in love, and that so, so fast, since he met Kripa only a few days ago. He explains that it was love at first sight. But then the flashback is shown again. Is Angad speaking the truth or not??? Does he really love Kripa???*****

Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ohhhhhhhh gosh!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope mr. angad realizes soon enough that what started out as a bet isn't one anymore, that he is actually falling for kripa ( becuz i hope he does)!!!!!!!!!!!!oh well, even if this doesn't happen then the story is as interesting as it always was soooooooooooooooo plz continue soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx guys for yur loverly responses and thoughts abt my story.............but i am sorry to say that i may not be able to continue till next friday.........since my maths, geography, history and hindi exams are going on...............i really nee to study for them

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