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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqbal_neha91

i am really sry guys for not posting the episode yesterday, there was something wrong with my computer................................ and i may not be able to comtinue until this thursday because i have exams................if anyone else (specially nomi)wants to continue until then, then it is fine with me.........

THANX yaars.... and sry for the trouble

thats alrite it happens
cotinue as soon as u can plz
and good luck on ur exams

luv mira
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gotta_luv_KYPH

thats alrite it happens
cotinue as soon as u can plz
and good luck on ur exams

luv mira

thanx yaar...........today i just finished my chemiestry and physics exams(yessssssss)😛.........and my literature is on thrusday, but for that u dont really need t o study since it is an openbook exam..............but anyways..............i will be free after 7pm today, so maybe i can rite the next part then........................depends on if my fater doesnt come home and start screaming at me to tell me to switch off the computer😆

so just wait and watch (well maybe read)😆the next part which will be either posted after 7 or maybe even tmr

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Posted: 19 years ago
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and guys, please write comment, otherwise i wont know how u like my fan-fic, and if u dont like maybe in wont even bother to write it anymore

PS.....did any of u watch the yesterday's criket match between india&pakistan??? Vaah!!! dhoni ne kya batting ki yaar!!!!!I just love M.S. Dhoni😊

Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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*****RECAP*****

Kripa: Angad, vaisa tum itne bhi bure nahin ho jaisa maine pehle socha. Aur haanh, Thanx!
Angad: Kisliye?
Kripa: Mukhe ghar tak lift dene ke liye.
Angad: Oh haan. You're welcome.

Saying this, Kripa walks off.

(NOW)~~~~~EPISODE 4~~~~~

Angad stares at Kripa as she walks off, and thinks to himself that somehow, he will have to make this girl fall for him.

Kripa goes up to the floor she stays on, and opens the door with her set of keys. She then goes towards the dinigs table and sees that her parents have left a note for her. The note says: Kripa beti, Main aur tumhare papa do din ke liye Nainital gaye hai. Wahan kuch kaam baaki rahe gaya hai. Hum jaldi vapis aayenge, chinta mat karna. Aur haan agar koi bhi tumhe pareshaan karen, toh humhe bas ek phone lagaana, aur hum fauran aagayenge. Tumhari Mummy. Kripa smiles when she reads the note and says to herself that my parents care so much for me, I should also do something for them, and I am, waiting for that moment when I can make them the most proud parents in the whole wide world.

Meanwhile, Angad has reached his home, and is sitting on his bed thinking about Kripa.

Angad(to himself): Vaah! Kripa kya ladki hai. Aur mujhe isko apni girlfriend banana hai. Aur humari pehli mulakat se toh nahin lagta hai ki voh meri girlfriend banna chahti hai. Toh, isiliye, pehle main uska dost banoonga aur phir use pyaar karne lagoonga, aur phir.....

As Angad is thinking about this, they show a flashback in his mind, one that happened a few moments ago.

~~FLASHBACK~~

It is the mid-day break, and Angad is sitting in the hall chatting with his friends. They are discussing about how the new girl Kripa dared to slap him, and how this is one girl who doesnt run after him.

Josh: Arre Angad, uski ladki Kripa ki himmat ki toh daat deni padhegi. Usne toh tujhe saare college ke saamne thappad mara. Aur voh toh pehli ladki hai jo tumhare pyaar mein nahin padhi.

Angad: Haan, aur us thappad ka badla toh main lekar hi rahoonga. Itna hi nahin, woh mujhse pyaar bhin karne lagegi.

Josh: Toh tumhara kya plan hai?

Angad: Sunna chahti ho??? Toh suno..... (Angad then tells Josh about his plan.....but we cant hear anything)

~~END OF FLASHBACK~~

Angad now opens his eyes and smiles to himself. He is thinking on what to do next................



Edited by iqbal_neha91 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey PPL, agar aap mein kisi ne kal tak koi comments nahin likhi, then i swear that main ek gandaa chappal nikalkar tum sab ko maaroongi.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
hey,
it was a gr8 part and as i have given my comments hope u will not hit me .but pls try and make the parts a bit longer. cont soon
ruch
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Posted: 19 years ago
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amazing parts
cont soon and plz make them a bit longer parts
cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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It was a rly good part!!! becuz it cleared the confusion i had that how can angad be so sensible as to like kripa by the fact the fact that she slapped him?? 😃 😉 anyways, this is an overall a rly good fanfic and THANK YOU very much for trying to update regularly and frequently!! (btw, i write a fanfic myself, and know that it can be quite discouraging if ppl don't leave their comments! it feels like no one is reading the part u wrote!, so ppl a request for all, do leave comments!!)
CONTINUE SOON AS I CAN'T WAIT FOR ANGAD TO FALL FOR KRIPA!!! (i hope that happens)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i lubed all the parts! continue soon!

lub,
Prakriti
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
thanx guys for all yur comments..........oh yeah...........and nabz8888, i luv yur fan-fic..............wait for the next part..............it is coming soon............

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