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hina_923

@hina_923

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Posted: 13 years ago

#351

awesome update...eagerly waiting what will maan do now to her...love your way of writing and expressing emotions.Keep writing God bless u

UPDATE SOON PLZZZ

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sandhyabanoj

@sandhyabanoj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#352

lovely update, want to see how geet love changes maans prospective towards love.
update soon.

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Opaldews

@Opaldews

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Posted: 13 years ago

#353

Hailaaa...hawt hawt update..with the hawt hawt DEVIL..=P

what a way to confess the feelings..UFF sensual..=D
that LOVE HURTS suits amzingly well in this DEVIL ANGEL love..=P

wese This DEVIL is so romantic anieee..^__^ considering this line *That day when I hugged your bare back.. I was dying to explore every bit of it with my tongue..*dreamyyy* =P <3

the comandin' thing actually desturbin' me...=| *fingers crossed*

Update soOonnn anieee...<3 =] Xx

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Bye_Bye_if

@Bye_Bye_if

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#354

That was for the new thread...

hehehe

i know i m late... it has reached 60 pages already.. but i cant help it... your threads fill up so fast...

and i believe in

Better late than never

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Bye_Bye_if

@Bye_Bye_if

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#355

wow... me totally fida on the update

Just loved this update alot... the confession was super brilliant...

I felt just...awww... when she in a flow confessed that she was not liking Rasika's nearness with him...

and then when Devil assured her that she need not to be jealou and he is all hers...have all rights on him etc etc...gosh he wasnt looking like a Devil atalll... he was like a caring lover asuring his partner...

So you were jealous..? he asked her while she felt him shaking a little.. she parted to see his expressions and realized he was laughing..😳😳😆

and when he said;

But never walk away from me.. they both looked at each other and got lost..
me too lost...

she wanted to change him... but now will he change... he wanted to change when he was shattered due to her suicide attempt... but now as he got her, will he try to change now...?

and the remaining part was just too passionate and sensuall😳😳

Is it hurting..? he asked tracing her lips with his fingers..

she nodded a little..

Good.. he answered

She looked at him in anger.. here she was hurting and he was saying GOOD..!!

What..????

Don't you know..? LOVE HURTS.. !

that was awesome... so rightly said in their case ...love hurts...

Devil is really unpredictable... that Zip scene was too good that was so romantic confession that;

Geet tried to stop him but her own senses want something else... and for Devil now it was like all hinderance are removed between them and now he has only one motive thats making her his forever...

and what will Geet refusal do now... will Devil come back in his Devil avtaar

One of the facts due to which she started falling for him, was him not crossing the limits... and now as Devil doesnt feel like there's any need of limits or controlling, will this create misunderstandings between them

Continue sooon Aineee...

@ Sneha

This poem is simply fabulous yaar,

Since when you are writing...? you just rock girl

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allibr

@allibr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#356

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#357

awe, anshru ... "no thanks" for the note

i simply love this devil (i told you before also) ... and specially when he show his emotion in its full mode ... the whole confession just made him go more wild ... and you know how beast become after getting more wild ... again, a superb update with so cute quote ... well, the fuel is just being added -- i mean the confession, her surrender & now denial ... she needs time but she also knows this untamed monster ... well, it's not easy to make him calm after so much & above all, it is not easy to change him in just a night ... overall, fab update

do cont soon & do PM me

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#358

plzz update plzz update

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thabassum

@Thabassum19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#359

hello all sab kaiasa ho??

eid kaisa gaya ???

yar anniee awsum update ...too hot ...

really respect geets point of view...he is not changed entirely !!!!

so she mush make him understand wat true love is...

aww sneeha ..my sexy ..is the heroine of the day ...loving u r poems very much

shru dee ...annie is eating u r brain?????

u dint tell us..lol...

ranji ..beta kya huva ???

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Sneha

@sneha.juneja

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: aziza_ahmed
hello all sab kaiasa ho??
eid kaisa gaya ???

yar anniee awsum update ...too hot ...

really respect geets point of view...he is not changed entirely !!!!

so she mush make him understand wat true love is...

aww sneeha ..my sexy ..is the heroine of the day ...loving u r poems very much

shru dee ...annie is eating u r brain?????

u dint tell us..lol...

ranji ..beta kya huva ???