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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
nice update...
but story is not going anywhere noteven a inch/...sorry to say but its the fact...
every part has threating maan n crying geet nothing much or interesting...
story will b only interesting when there is clash of titans not in one sided match...
i am feeling like watching ind-canada cricket match where result is always clear... i want ind-pak match where every ball is soo thrilling...
i am not giving any advice/idea bcoz ultimately it is u who have to flow in the direction of story n decide wht is next...
thanks for coming out and letting me know dear...i always love to improve, and its just possible with the criticism...
im trying to keep a balance between who is winning between geet and maan... but the reason why geet is loosing is because she doesnt want to get married to maan and even if maan's ways are wrong, but its a fact that he wants to get married to her!!!
once they will be married, the balance will return... and dont forget maan has remorse in front of him too😉
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