Sleeping beauty FF Maaneet Last Part

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Posted: 13 years ago
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P1:pg1

P2:pg 6

P3:Pg 10

P4:Pg 16

P5:pg 21

P6:pg 25

Pt7:Pg 29

Pt8:Pg 32

Pt9:Pg 38
pt 10:Pg 43
pt11:Pg 47
p12:pg52
pt13:Pg 56
pt14:pg 61
Pt 15:Pg 67
Pt 16:Pg 72
Pt 17:pg 77
Pt 18:Pg 81
pt 19:pg 87
pt 20:pg 92
Pt 21:Pg 97
Pt22:pg 102
pt23:pg 107
pt24:Pg112
Pt25:Pg 118
pt26:pg 122
pt27:pg 127
Pt28:Pg 132

Sleeping beauty Part 1

Swimming is Geet's hobby.She loves swimming.But this time she lost her concentration.She does'nt know why.She drowned.She cried for help.
"Help!I will die now".
Suddenly there came a savior who carried her in his arms.
She gazed at him.For some reason she could not take her eyes off him.
They were lost in each other.

"Is it love at first sight",her heart beat very fast.
Her mouth was opened seeing his hot appearance.

He put her on the shore softly and walked away.
She kept looking at him.
"He is so hot.My God!I did'nt even thank him.He saved my life.But instead of thanking him i was enjoying his looks.I'm so foolish".

Geet shared her experience with Nandini;her best friend.
"I could not take my eyes off him.He was that hot.He was the combination of Hrithik Roshan and John Abraham.I felt that in my previous life he was my husband".
"Seriously..i feel that it is love at first sight.I have never seen you like this before".
"Yes Nandini..No man has made me feel like this.It is a special feeling..you know..but i did a big blunder.I did not thank him".
"You did'nt thank him?You stupid!He saved your life".
"Ya..but i was lost in him.I was in a dream world".
"You took his mobile number?"
"No yaar.I did not even ask his name".
"Oh!Crazy girl!"
"Anyways..somehow i feel that i will meet him again".
"Yes Geet.I also feel that you will meet him".
Geet is thrilled,"Are you sure Nandini?"
"Yes,I'm sure".
"That's so sweet of you".Geet smiled.
"Ok then let me go home.If i become late bhaiyya and bhabhi will be tense".
"Ok.But don't forget to come tomorrow for my birthday party".
"How can i not attend your birthday party?I will come".
They smiled.

Geet wore a glittering white saree and diamond accessories for the party.
She went for the party.Geet gave Nandini her favourite teddy bear.
Nandini blew the candles and cut the cake.
Geet eyes struck a handsome chap at the party.She could not believe her eyes.
"That's him",she told Nandini.
"Who?" Nandini asked.
Geet was so excited that she could not say anything.
"Common Geet..tell".
"He is the one who saved me".
Nandini looked at him.She smiled.
"Oh!He?What a surprise!He is Maan Singh Khurana".
"Maan?How do you know him?"
"I met him at the air port".
"Wow!I'm so excited.Is he married?".
"I don't know.But i don't think he is married".
"Does he have a girl friend?"
"No idea".
"Anyways your prediction was true.I could meet him again.I'm so excited".

The song "Sholon si sholon si
tere ankhon ki yeh roshni
kiske liye hai kiske liye hai
chandni chandni, tere chere ki yeh chandni
kiske liye hai kiske liye hai
tera muskurana nazar yun jhukana
tera muskurana nazar yun jhukana
mere liye hai bas mere liye hai.." {Shabd}is played.
All the cpuples are dancing on the dance floor.
Geet went towards Maan.
"Hi.."
"Hi",Maan wished her back.
"Hope you remember me.I am.."
"I know".
Geet became happy.
"I'm happy that you remember me".She smiled at him showing her cute dimples.
"Shall we dance?"
"Ok",Maan replied.
Maan and Geet swayed to the music...'Shalon si.."

They were sizzling.
After the dance Geet told him,"I had a nice time dancing with you.You danced very well".
He smiled.
"Me too.You are a fantastic dancer".
"Thank you.I'm Geet Nanda.You are Maan.Right?"
"Ya..by the way you look gorgeous.Your saree...your onaments...everything is too good on you".
Geet was on the top of the world.Her dream man was carried away by her beauty.What else can she demand in the initial period?
"I only designed this saree.I'm a fashion designer".
"Really?Amazing work",Maan appreciated her.
"Thank you so much".
Geet extended her hand.
"Shall we be friends?"
He held her hand.
She smiled happily.
They exchanged their mobile number.
Geet ran towards Nandini.
"Nandini..i'm so excited.I got his number".
"Wow!You are proceeding so fast Geet.I hope very soon i will be able to see you both as a couple".
Geet blushed.
Maan came towards them.
"Hi Nandini..the party was grand.I had a nice time here.I have to go now".
"Ok bye".Nandini bid him 'bye'.
Maan looked at Geet,"Bye Geet".
"Bye Maan",Geet smiled.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! interesting...
superbbb yaar...
continue sooon...looking fwd...

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really interesting. plz update soon. add me to ur friends list and pm me abt the update.
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Congrats on the new ff...

nice start...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome , beautiful part
loved it
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part 1
nice part...
thanks for the pm...
cont soon...
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wow... Awesome
Fabulous update...

Excellent
Keep writing
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awwwhh this sound sso amazing omg maan n geet already friends and he complimented her n wowow this is so awesome!
cant wait for the next part
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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wow awesome dear...
loved it...
wow they r friends... n maan complimented geet...
interesting...
continue soon..
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wow!superb start..!
bt maan dont feel anything??

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