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Addie07

@Addie07

Inactive

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#581

awesome zee.. loved the way u mingled the current plot in the story in a complete different but a better way... loved it

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Chhaya

@arhi-fan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#582

Hey zee!
Loved the way made them meet. U mingled the current track with it so nicely. I really like both of them naughty. If he's upto all this on night before wedding then wat will happen on wedding night. Thanx for pm.

Edited by arhi-fan - 13 years ago

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Chhaya

@arhi-fan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#583

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#584

OMGGG THAT WAS SOO :D :D :D

SR SR SR waiting fr the 1st night

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#585

awww... zeee... that was soo, damn, cute!!!

can't wait for their suhaag raat, now!!

harshu being greedy now!! :D

thanks for the PM!! :D

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#586

lovely dear

waiting for SR

serilously dear

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#587

wow i loved the pretty long update and it was superb romantic and passionate ...

gr8...sneak peak game of the two raizada boys were awesome and fantastic the man who slid into anjali's room was prem right???

hot hot of arhi poor buaji is at off guard about them

do cont soon

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ashna27

@ashna27

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#588

great update... ;-P

except for the part about "khushi whimpered with munchkin fury and arnav smiled in their kiss"

🤣 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

on a serious note though - i really do like it :O)

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Ann

@ipkkndank

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#589

Awww what a nicey update

Well the update was superb dear very well written

Continue soonnn...

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#590

Originally posted by: Divvy
great update... ;-P

except for the part about "khushi whimpered with munchkin fury and arnav smiled in their kiss"
🤣 🤣

on a serious note though - i really do like it :O)

LOL😆 yes after i wrote that i was like...😕...then 😆 so i kept it in for a giggle,lol

thanks for commenting

xxx