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Zohamaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#571

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

Thank you!
The story is proceeding and I have changed him a little but not fully
He is only chaned for Geet lol but in front of other he is still a Shetan
So enjoy it as much as you can😆😆😆
Lets see what happens in the future lol

me waiting for it
dying to read ur updates yaar
the shaitan which u created in name of maan im in love with this ff

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#572

Originally posted by: spvd
part 30
nice part...
Maan is mellowing to Geet...
good for him and make Geet sure of her feelings for Maan...
Maan for sure cant live without her but Geet?
curious to know who Maan is punishing and hope he or they are not related to Geet in any way...
cont soon dear...

Thanks Deepa!

I still have to deveolp Geet and her feelings so idk lol

you will find out ...can't reveal the guy yet😆

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: -afsha-
That was shweet update
Loved how Maan was gentle n soothed her pain
Loved it
Waise ye banda hai kaun jiske peeche Maan haath muh dohkar pad gaya😆😆😆

Tahnks Afsha!

haha can't say the guy yet...you guys will find out

Story abhhi baaki hai mere dost😆

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: payalpari
hey dear his father was living his home so may be he was having an some one else in his life and the person maan wanna strangal is his step bro or may be his father who is relished from jail ...just a guess ...!

Good guess Payal

so all I will say is that keep guessing

and yeah I will update soon!

I have to write the part😆

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: zohafarheen

me waiting for it
dying to read ur updates yaar
the shaitan which u created in name of maan im in love with this ff

Thanks!

will update soon!

Stil have to write the part

Yay! Gald you like this Shetan..this is my first attempt to write a dark shade of maan😆😆

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

Thanks!
will update soon!
Stil have to write the part
Yay! Gald you like this Shetan..this is my first attempt to write a dark shade of maan😆😆

ur calling this as dark shade
i mean no wat u have created ppl are loving this ff and greedy fro more updates from u simi
omg and ur attempt has given u fruit by our comments and lovable liking
ready to do anything for ur regular updates👏
u have b fab gal(born with box)
⭐️

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#577

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

Thanks!
will update soon!
Stil have to write the part
Yay! Gald you like this Shetan..this is my first attempt to write a dark shade of maan😆😆

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: zohafarheen

ur calling this as dark shade
i mean no wat u have created ppl are loving this ff and greedy fro more updates from u simi
omg and ur attempt has given u fruit by our comments and lovable liking
ready to do anything for ur regular updates👏
u have b fab gal(born with box)
⭐️

haha yeah I know

I have spoiled you guys with regular updates and I can't (won't) back up from it cuz you guys will kill me lol

I stick to my promises 😉

Thanks you very much! Reading comments like these makes me happy and makes me want to write more lol

So I will...with another part soon!😳😆😆