~*~PYAAR KA EK NAGHMA~*~ thrd2 smal prts pg 32

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Tyro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Congrats on the new thread...

awesome part...

loved how the friendship of handa n khurana revived...

continue soon...

thnx for PM..

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thabassum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

fantastic update yaara.

long ago broken frendship was re unioned ..tats cool..

so cute maan and geet moments😳..

ma beti dono churail hain shayad😡..

u r self line ws more gud😆

awsum update

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roopali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

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Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Loved the update

Hope geet and maan get married

please update soon and pm me

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

dear...😛

4 pm me ..😃.

4 new thread...

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ur updates...really

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savie_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

PARt 30

geet goes back to the party hall ... maan folloows her ..
the bride was called down ..
all the lights went off except the light at the mandap and the stairs from where arohi was coming down ..
arjun got lost in her beauty ...
she was loking like a tru angel ..
wid the veil resting on her head ..
on her side was geet ..
holding her hand and helping her to walk as it was difficult for her to walk wid a heavy lehnga ..
maan luked towards geet and was awestruck wid her beauty ..
her skin was glowing more in the spotlight ..
she too looked up and found maan staring her widout a blink ..
she too got lost in his eyes but breaked the eye contact and looked towrds arohi ..
when arohi found arjun staring at her she blushed a liitlle and drooped her eyes down ..
her face became more red..
everyone were praising the bride .. the choice of arjun singhania ..
she came down and sat on the mandap ..
arjun and arohi looked towards each other ..
and passed a smile to each other ..
the mantras started ..
dey took all the 7 pheras ...
promisng each and every thing ..
finally arohi was now arohi arjun singhania ...
both of dem took the blessings of the elders ..
mr. handa , mr. khurana , mrs. khurana ..
dey came to geet .. geet hugged arohi tightly ..while maan hugged arjun ..
geet - congrats aru ... ab toh tere life pe singhania ji ka tag lag gaya ...
arohi blushed .. while arjun holded arohi's hand tightly promising her dat he will never leave her side and wil always be dere for her no matter wat the circumstances will be ..
maan - congo buddy .. abhi banna tum joru ka gulam ..
arjun looking towards arohi - hum toh zindagi bhar arohi ka gulam bannne ko taiyar hai ..
arohi blushed listening dis while geet maan and sum frends of dem cheered for the couple ...
it was the tym for biddaaiii ...
arohi was in a totally emotional mood ..
arohi went forward she looked back and came forward and hugged geet tightly sobbing like a child ..
geet - aru aese nhi rote ..
mr. handa came forward keeps his hand on her head and says - aessee nhi rote baccha yeh tumhari zindagii ki nayi shuruat hai .. iska khushiyon se swagat karo .. ansuon se nhi ..
arohi nodded .. geet wiped her tears..
she toook her hand and helped her to sit in the care ..
even arjun sat
maan sat in the driving seat while geet sat on the passenger seat beside the driving seat ..
( well it was tym for geet to do the ceremonies from arjun's side )
dey reached the singhania mansion ..
it was decorated like a bride..
full of lights ..
the car stopped in front of the main door ..
maan steeped out of the care ..
opened the car doors for geet and arohi ..
arjun also came out and helped arohi in stepping out of the car ..
dey came in front of the gate ...
geet went inside ..took the thaal from the servant and performed the aarti of the couple..
she aaplied tika to arjun and den arohi ..
she brought the pot full of rice and placed it on front of arohi ..
arohi kicked the pot and the rice spreaded ..
the next waas the thal full of sinddoor and wateer..
arjun holded arohi's hand and her sholuder to give her support ..
she walked in the thal..
stooped for few seconds in the plate and den moved forward ..
her foot prints came on a white cloth ..
arjun wanted to keep dose foot prints wid him ..
he ordered the servant to pick up the cloth later and keep it safely ...
next arjun picked arohi in his arms ..
arohi blushed seeing everyone commenting on dem and how girls were teasing her ..
arjun moved forward wid arohi in his arms ..
he moved towards the wall where the hand inmpressions of arohi have to be taken ..
the thal filled wid sindoor and water was brought again ..
arohi placed her hands in the hall..
and lifted dem .. and placed dem on the wall..
she removed dose hands ..
den dey moved forward for the other ritalus ..
but seeing the tym and arohi' condition .. dey thought of continuing the rituals in the nesxt morning ...
girls helped arohi in standing and dey toook her to the room ..
the room was decorated beautifuuly wid candles and flowers ..

the giirls helped arohi sitting in the middle of the bed ..
dey covered her head wid veil .
and moved out giggling ..
geet was still dere and she sat near arohi and said - hm.. aru raaat ko thik se sona han .. kal subah baki rasmon ke liye tumhe uthna hai ..
she started teasing arohi ..
arohi blished listening dis ..
geet continued - agar tu bole toh mai jiju se baat karke aaj raat tere saath ruk jaati hun taki tujhe koi problem na ho ... ruk mai abhi jake jiju se baat karti hun ..
arohi suddenly said - geet ..
geet stopped smirking .. and says - han aru ..
arohi - t..tu.. rehne de ... tu bhi toh thak gayi hogi jaake ke so ja .. arj..arjun meri help kar denge ..
geet laughing seeing her stummering ..and says - hahhaa .. tu chinta mat kar mai teri aur jiju ki pehle raat kharab nhi karungi .. she winked arohi and again continued enjoy aru .. bbyee ..
saying dis geet moved out of the room ..
and went downstairs .. she went and ssat near arjun and says - chaliye bhai ab aapki bari .. she said giggling ...
arjun - hass hass le .. jab teri bari ayegi mai bhi tujhe aese hi chidaunga ..
geet continued her laugh ..
arjun and geet stoood up ..
dey started moving towards the room ..
as dey reached outside the room..
geet suddenly came before the door and spreaded her hands not allowing arjun to move inside ..
arjun wid a ques. mark on his face - kya hua ..??
geet brought her palm forward ..
arjun was stilll not able to understand anything ..
he again asked - wat ...??
geet - paise ..
arjun - paise par kyun ..??
an elder lady came from behind and says - yeh toh shagun hota hai beta .. agar bahu rani ke paas jana hai toh geet bitiya ko paise de do .. varna tumhe apni biwi ka chehra dekhna naseeb nhi hoga ..
arjun - ooo..
geet - hmm hmmm doo ..
arjun took out a 100 rs note from his pocket and gave it to geet ..
arjun - yeh lo..
geet fluttered the note and gave it back in arjun's hand and says - isse kuch nhi hoga .. apne paa rakhiye mujhe chahiye ek..
arjun - kya chahiye .?
geet - blank cheqhue ..
arjun coughed ..
geet - jaldi di jiye .. jitna let karenge utna late jayenge aru ke paas ..
geet turned away her face ..
arjun - apni aru ke liye toh kuch bhi ..
arjun called a servant and told him to bring the cheque book from his study ..
the servant did the same ..
he signed the cheque and tore it from the cheque book and says - yeh lo .. ab kya mai andar jaa sakta hun ..
geet - hmm.. y not ..?
geet moves aside while arjun checking out his sherwani and dupata moves inside ..
geet goes from dere giggling ..

precap - the next day..

srry gyz .. i wont be able to give the SR as i dont have written any of the adult part .. if anyone of u can do it for me .. it will be great i will add it ..

do comment ..
thanks to all

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

awesome... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...

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x- afreen-x

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Superb update

I would have helped but imagination is all over the place

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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

awesome one
waiting for so long

so, finally the marriage took place, hope to see MANEET only now (trust me when it comes to MANEET, i hardly pay attention to any other) ... waiting for the next part

do cont soon & do PM me

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savie_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: miss_giggles

<font color="#660066">Superb update </font>
<font color="#660066">I would have helped but imagination is all over the place</font>

y dont u ryt wat u think ..
if any changes will be made i will make accordingly ..
pm me if u can write it for me ..
ur wish .. i m nt forcing u