FF-Mahsoos. Maan & GEET.- THREAD 3- (note pg 142) - Page 27

Thanks for the update dear...

Updated comment on page 48 😊
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Mind blowing update, hope maan also tells his feelings to geet as she is misunderstanding him, want to see their SR soon.

amazing updates

Loved their reunion..loved geet ka dream and how boldly she asked for her kiss to be returned by maan..moi loving their closeness..pls continue soon..

Three OUTSTANDING updates. I really have no words to praise you.
I am not writing in detail as I am still in your FF, not getting any words and also reading again and again
Hope to get more and more updates. Wish this beautiful FF of yours was a movie or a book.

Originally posted by: humz_786

So sorry that I have not been able to comment so far...

But what can I say about this ff? I love it just as much as I haved loved your others, but this a tad bit more, because it is so different...
I love the way you are portraying M&G's emotions through mahsoos, and how they feel for each other!!

Most love stories always explain how a couple feels thorugh their eyes as they show love lust etc., and this is so different as it explores feelings in much more depth which is what makes it all the more interesting, and captivating!! 😃

Coming back to the updates, love how you are taking the story nice and slow, and although Geet's reaction at first was quite rude and hurtful, but that is obviously how she would feel as she felt cheated, but as time is going by she is falling for Maan,and at the moment she is extremely attracted towards him 😳 And she also is feeling jealous about Pari, because she feels that Pari talks with ther husband more than she does, and it is so sweet that she is learning brail 😳 Can't wait to know Maan's reaction when he finds out that she is learning brail, for him..

And he is missing his wife soo much, he misses her scent her warmth everything, and he even remembers the fact that she doesn't like Pari, so he spends less time with her 😆😳
I wonder how Geet is feeling though, with this separation...

Can't wait for the next update, will Maan go to meet her, or will he have a surprise in place for her?
All questions will be answered in your next update... 😍

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Even o enjoy reading comments in this site I wonder how Safi feels lol

this FF is getting really good now like the geet is now feeling for maan! when you updating enigma...love animosity by the way nice work 😊

How come i missed one part...

I'm loving this ff...
Such a sweet, soft, innocent story...
And the way its moving...kudos to you...

Knowingly, unknowingly they are falling for each other...

Aww...both missed each other so much...

Ohh...Geet was imagining Maan...lol
Lovely...