FF-Mahsoos. Maan & GEET.- THREAD 3- (note pg 142) - Page 25

Awesome update.. me too faint!!! Haai maan waiting for his mishti,, how cute, m restless now!! N geet's feelings??? U said next part coming soon!! M waiting.. Fast fast

part 25
nice part...
they had a good time...

part 27
nice part...
Geet is at times silly...

part 28
oh Maan and Geet both are missing each other...
cont soon...

👏 👏 Thank u for these beautiful parts,really enjoy it...waiting for geets return!

Thanks for the updates ...

So sorry that I have not been able to comment so far...

But what can I say about this ff? I love it just as much as I haved loved your others, but this a tad bit more, because it is so different...
I love the way you are portraying M&G's emotions through mahsoos, and how they feel for each other!!

Most love stories always explain how a couple feels thorugh their eyes as they show love lust etc., and this is so different as it explores feelings in much more depth which is what makes it all the more interesting, and captivating!! 😃

Coming back to the updates, love how you are taking the story nice and slow, and although Geet's reaction at first was quite rude and hurtful, but that is obviously how she would feel as she felt cheated, but as time is going by she is falling for Maan,and at the moment she is extremely attracted towards him 😳 And she also is feeling jealous about Pari, because she feels that Pari talks with ther husband more than she does, and it is so sweet that she is learning brail 😳 Can't wait to know Maan's reaction when he finds out that she is learning brail, for him..

And he is missing his wife soo much, he misses her scent her warmth everything, and he even remembers the fact that she doesn't like Pari, so he spends less time with her 😆😳
I wonder how Geet is feeling though, with this separation...

Can't wait for the next update, will Maan go to meet her, or will he have a surprise in place for her?
All questions will be answered in your next update... 😍

x

where's the few more parts?u promised to give it.

Wow awsum going
waiting 4 more

Awesome parts..loved geet shopping poor maan waiting.. Loved geet telling maan to sleep together oops i mean on same bed.. Love the way they were sleeping on the bed..loved her kissing his cheek n telling she will miss him..love his restlessness and not talking to pari..