FF-Mahsoos. Maan & GEET.- THREAD 3- (note pg 142) - Page 26

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Posted: 13 years ago
most probably bechara maan does not know what is expected of him as a husband...so i think u just need to make geet realise that fact and let her take the reigns of this relationship..like taking it to the 😳next level...hehe..its will be the first time in any FF i have ever read that the girl takes the initiative...looved the mahsooo while geet left...for trip...awww
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Posted: 13 years ago

MahsooosssPart 29





Day 5

Maans geet return...

He didn't sleep... The excitement took over his body, millions of butterfly ran through him, it's 12 hours way when she will return but the excitement did not let him rest. Specially when he will see his wife after 5 whole days...
Maan impatiently waited outside of the limo, the coach was late, which killed him even further... He walked up and down the limo , past 5 days he haven't spoken to her, not even a hi,
Not even a hello, he surly this time will have her phone number locked in his phone, oh how can't he have her number!!!! Then the thought collage had her number kicked in. That just created more agony in his body... COLLaGE had her number... How she will react, he haven't called! The coach arrived at last, he waited, because obvious his eyes couldn't see... His thud heart couldn't beat any louder, pounding without any limitation, no stopping, just pounding way...
But then suddenly a huge warm hug with small tears covered his shirt, maan knew it was her, it was his wife, his hand held her tight, promising never to let go, promising how could he... Geet held him tighter and tighter compressing her self in his heart, closing her big eye lash... Maan touches her small cheek for little second, then wipes her tears off, her warm cheek was enough to engulf him there, a unknown satisfaction covered his body, a unknown love... He wanted to play his card in this love, no matter what's the consequence is, no matter how painful it is, he wanted to love her...

Geet wiped her teases off and flowed by her anger... She pushes him way and then walks in to the limo in Silent..

Maan flowed in, driver took the luggage from the coach and there they went, drive was silent, she fell sleep on maans arm... He stroked her hair gently, to sooth her comfort her further...

As they arrived in the haveli, everyone hugged, observed maans happiness like a child... They all giggled...

Geet took a warm shower and then was straight to bed, she still haven't spoken to maan... Which worried him, but he was more happy, that she was back in his arm, sleeping "peacefully...

Geet woke up early to see him, resting her hand on his hand, gently stroking his soft cheek, god dam, she didn't enjoy anything on the trip, everything looked so rubbish with out him... Everything, nothing looked nice... Geet slowly comes on top of him, gently kissing his cheek, then the other, his body warmness is different, his body love is uncontrolled... She bends down and pecks his cheek, then lips, then the chin... Maan woke up with her soft lips... He knows it or not, she will make love to him now...
"geet..."
"shhh..." she rests her index finger on his lips... Gently taking his button off. Trailing her lips over his exposed chest... His hand came by, gently held her waist, stroking with love... "I missed you so much..."


Maan smiled. Because he have to...
"and?"
"and you?"
"hamko tomhari adat ho gye hi geet" geets eyes lit up and how she wished he could see her, how she wished he could feel this special feeling in her eyes...
Her hand trailed down to his tracky, gently pushing it down until she could feel his flesh manhood against her thigh... Maan jerked instantly, realizing how hard it have became, how fragile it was to him... "I have been imagining you for so long, every second, every moment... To see you panting under me...
"and..." his long finger came up, stroking her straight wavy hair behind her ears... Gently kissing back.. A return of her kiss...
"and... She sits up, taking her top off... Then... Then... Then... Oops...

Geet was stroking a empty bed, no maan... Where is her husband... She instantly sat up, wearing a teddy nighty... The morning sun just came out, and here her husband was working out. His wife came back after almost 5 days, he may forget his wife probably having wet dream about him but exercise... Uff... "so unromantic!" she snaps her hand. And stands up on the bed, she tried to jump off, and for got how those ski boots was killing her leg... "ahh!" she screamed while maan ran towards the room... "what happen?"
He wondered around the room, then realized when she moaned again in pain , she was lying on the floor...
He leaned forward and picked her up. "how did this happen?"
"ap toh hamse bath hi math kijye." she snaps his hand of in anger... She called home everyday, 2ice and every-time he either wasn't home or in there room... And obviously she had to lie in few of them , "oh she already have spoken to maan!" & couldn't he ring either! Uff... "ullu! Gadhe! Dum...pata nahi kha se aye hi... Romance ki toh r bhi nahi hi isme!" she snaps her bare leg off of his lap, when he felt the bump...
"what happen here?"
There was red bruse from the shoes... "umm... Ski booths!" geet again snaps her leg off when maan firmly holds it...
"leave me. I don't want to talk to you!" she made a face.


Maan gave her a confusing face, wasn't he suppose to act like that, he have been out of his mind, couldn't drink, couldn't sleep, couldn't work properly and here she is, acting like it's all his fault.
"curse the trip!" both whispered at the same time. Maan picked her up, slowly rests her on the bed... He took the first aid box out and applied the medicine while geet observed his uncomfortable eyes, how it wasn't looking at her,
"I will tell someone to bring our breakfast... You don't have to go out..."
Geet nodes and angrily lies back under the spread. She was so irritated, he wasn't even talking or taking things clear... Did he even miss her? Like the way she have... Wondering each second what he must be doing...
She spins around, found maan sitting by her, doing something... She observed him, then gently holds his hand... Was she over thinking... He probably have... "I missed you..." she mumbled... Maan left his file, leaving it on the side table, geet sat up and hugged him from the back... "I hated that trip..." her hand crawled to his chest, and maan rests his on the top... gently stroking, comforting... "I have missed you allot..."
"I want my kiss back," she mumbled... It was odd, maan never done this before when he spines around and kissed her cheek... It felt oddly nice for geet, as she rests her self completely on maan...


One of the servant brought there breakfast then everyone came in to see if geet was alright... Whole day went by, one after another relative coming in to see she was fine...

After long time, rano called... Avantika insist to speak to her, but geet had no mood, she was still angry that they married her off to a blind man, it's another thing that she have feeling for her husband now, but they did merry her off to a blind man...

Geet was back to collage, and maan as usal dropped her, she observed him from the side, somewhere comfortable with his closeness... She still haven't forgotten there kiss, curse the family, it just became odd after that, they did not speak at all... And here they are silent, closed yet not sure what to say... Past 5 days have been hell to her... Living hell...

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of alll...
Me jumping, me sooo happy I am first 😃😆

Another awesome update 🤗👏

Loved Maans bechaini whilst waiting for Geet, it shows just how much affect Geet has made in his life in such a short time, and I loved this line : "a unknown love... He wanted to play his card in this love, no matter what's the consequence is, no matter how painful it is, he wanted to love her..."

It shows just how far his mahsoos has come for Geet... 😳
And loved their little reunion, they both missed each other sooo much, I think they both actually can't live without each other, because they are so attached to one another...
Hmmm... Geet is heavily attracted to Maan she is even dreaming about their closeness ☺️ For a minute I thought it was real then I thought, it is too soon yet... 😆
At least they both know that they missed each other, and loved the kiss that Maan gave back to Geet 😳

It is right for Geet to not forgive her family so seen if she has feelings for Maan as she was cheated, and when she went back to them, instead of them helping or even calmly advising their daughter they told her that she doesn't belong in their house because she is married now... 😒

Thanks for the fabulous update...
As always can't wait till your next update 😍
Loving this mahsoos ❤️ And especially the way you are writing about it... 👏

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Edited by humz_786 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice gripping I wait for ur update..very good going. I wish it was a book and could read in one go..can't wait please update soon. Thx for writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Grrr 3rd

But
Omg omg omg
This words are so sweet and cute I want that maan. He is perfect and
Amazing
I just love geet with her cuteness
Lol
To good and I want more please please
Edited by love-water - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES
HOPE IN NEXT UPDATE
WE CAN HAVE KISS DEAR
ON THE LIPS
PLSSS
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Posted: 13 years ago
love it do next as soon as possible
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow superb.
Wow u updating more. Thnks
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Posted: 13 years ago
out of the world.really i am loving this change,loving this maan-geet.they are just awesome.
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Posted: 13 years ago
im in love with mahsoos... its just awesome

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