FF-Mahsoos. Maan & GEET.- THREAD 3- (note pg 142) - Page 18

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i love this possessive wifey.
She was blaming poor Maan's shirts out of her annoyance.
Geet is definitely falling head over heels for Maan.
She completely forgot about college trip.
she is definitely seeing him everywhere
Mrs MSK shopping was so good.
Wonder how Maan will put up with everything.
I cant imagine what will be his plight if the wifey decides to try all 20 shopping bags on him right away
Waiting for the next part
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MahsooosssPart 28



As they arrived home, maan quickly went somewhere, while geet, emptied out maans cupboard, calling avantika. She only kept few that was special, or was gifted by some special one otherwise she threw each one of them way... Avantika stood there admiring her daughter in law... Then left her to do her husband stuff. She have brought everything new and matching...

"now that's perfect!" she can almost imagine him In his new clots, and specially how hot and happening he will look...

Maan came back a bit late, it was the first time, geet served dinner and both ate, without pari! Which she was happy about, actually to be honest she haven't seen her all day...
Maan walked in, took his nightdress along with a fresh towel from the cupboard... All his cloths felt different... "umm..." he could tell it was new, they didn't have it's usual smell also the texture of the cloths...

As he walked out, geet was all busy packing... Her eyes fell on her husband, drying his hair. Gosh how she will survive 5 day without him, every morning, waking up listening to his rapid breathing then, observing him hungrily... Then imagining him swatting under then over... Uff! To much...
"umm..." geet murmured... She came close... Geet wanted maan to sleep on the bed, not on the sofa any more, she wanted observe him day and night, just admire and dissolve in his beauty...
"I - I..." she wasn't sure how to ask... "I really get scared at night!" geet spoke in one breath. Hoping he to understand,And maan did understand... But, "umm..."
"I want us to sleep together!" she staies quit a bit, thinking all the different meaning out of that sentence, then opens her lips again "I mean sleep on the same bed!"... ... "I mean not that type of sleep, like I want you to sleep on the bed. Comfier!"
Maan kept quit, he actually didn't know what she meant by sleeping together, he had some idea about physical attraction, special what it does with her touch and somewhere devs words were making sense... He does not say anything as he heads towards bed, and what a surprise, round midnight, geet was in his arm... She smelled of fresh lavenda, and her little wet hair was sending chile... He removed her hair a little... Geet adjusts her cheek on his arm, while hand over his chest, leg in-between his, and her thigh gently touching his manhood...

Next morning, maan drops her off to the coach, much as maan hating to let his wife go, geet was the same... He carried her hand luggage while geet stood at the back... Gazing upon him with his new cloths, looking handsome then ever...

"umm..."
"au..." she had nothing to say yet allot to express while maan was worried. He made a list of what to do and what to be careful off... He never have been this much worried about anyone as he is worried about geet...
"look after your self..."
"you to..." she whispered out... The coach was about to leave, god knows why, geet spines around just before leaving, she came around and kissed his cheek... "I will miss you..."



Maan stood there shocked, surprised, happy... A weird sensation ran passed his body & he felt speechless... Oh how this 5 days will go by now? 5 days of hell without his wife... Maan stood there... his black eyes gazing upon the coach as he stood by, no one guessed he is blind.
He stood, holding his ground for few minutes before drove off to limo...

As he walked in, the room was oddly silent, it wasn't the same without his wife, and it's only been few hours, there was feeling of loneliness inside, and that something new, it never existed before, it's first time & there was something completely different, he hated it...


Maan stood up and started his normal exercise to waste some time, whole day, he have been doing something to keep him self busy but seems like time did not go very fast, it was only lunch time, everyone was busy with there thing while maan sat there silent, no wife to serve his lunch... Lunch turned in to dinner, it felt rather odd, he was used to for past week he and geet have been having there own dinner, by them self and now, it's all gone... He felt desperate to here her voice, to feel her, to smell her... His becani was only increasing...
"I think bhi is missing bhabi..." maan did look depressed and everyone took there time to tease,
"I had enough of this dinner..."
He slowly walked in to his room, helped pari a little, then realized how much his wife hates when he is near pari, or even taking to pari, so he said goodnight... & god dam, why didn't he have her number? He can't even call... Oh what have he done?
Again stupid thought came up, if he ask his owns wife number from anyone they will surly suspect... "hmm..."

Night came by, after almost 10000s of years. He looked at his left, then right, lying In the middle, he was thinking about there last night, how she was in his arm, sleeping so peacefully, how she should be sleeping now? Somewhere far, he fancied going to the place, to hold her in his arm, to mahsoos her... But...

The ahsaas b/w us
the undescribd relatn
i want to say
i want to gt ur ahsaas
to mahsoos u wd my fingrs
like an open brail book.
The book of geet
with d music of ur moan nd desire
i cnt see i knw bt i cn f3l u nd dats d important
wht if i cnt see ur beutiful eyes bt i cn feel it whenevr thy glance at me
i cn feel d heat of ur eyes on my face.
I cnt see ur rosy lips
bt i feel dm whn dy wantz to kis ma cheeks
wht if i cnt see ur slim long legs
i cn feel dm whnevr dy want to cme at dier place
d place whre dy desrve to be
i cnt see ur long beutiful fingrs bt
i cn f3l dm whn dy r on my heart.
Wht if i my eyes unable to see you
my heart cn see million times clear dn my eyes.
It cn feel u
it gves me ur ehsaas
nd i cn feel u.

by angelic analyst



Maans hand slowly came up, and touched his cheek where early morning his wife kissed. Then, then those sweet words "I will miss you" was buzzing like a new in his ears, oh sweet lord, he was missing her, and this night, how it will go by? Maan surly couldn't ... He wanted her...



Day 2

...
No geet...

Day 3

No geet...

Day 4

No geet...



few more parts coming :)
pls pls pls comment it means allot...


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Posted: 13 years ago
WHATTT??????? *FAINTS* *THUD*...Am the First one to Comment!!!!!...Again *Faints* THUD...Awww!! I hurt My Leg...

Once Again...Ummmhhhaaa!!!!!...

👏Good... Going kemya!!!!...I'm Loving this Slow pace of their Love story...Can't wait for their Intimate😳 Moments...you are killing us!! god!!! ...Ummhaaa⭐️!!!! this is for your HANDS which are writing Such a wonderful stuffs... 👏
Edited by Gurti_Rocks - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww...m loving this possessive Geet...
Maan is enjoying herself alot with being around him...😛
Oopps...Geet Mega shopping...😊

Waiting for next part...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome kemya
thanx for update
waiting for ur more update
continue soon
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
love u for this itne update ek saath vo bi itne lovely lovely
u r awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum no words to say
adorable dear
loved it
so she said she miss him
oh they are in love
and he is missing her too
great deear
i m enjoying
want to see much love between them
hope we may get one more
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Loved the way geet was taking control slowly over everything related to Maan.
Avantika must have been really happy seeing her blessings and wishes come true.
Geet wanting Maan close to her day and night was so sweet.
There was a time when she used to hate his presence.
Even his shadow would irritate her.
Maan had put up with all of that so patiently and his patience really paid off.
Geet gave a parting kiss too which is lingering around Maan i suppose.
He is completely lost in her and missing her.
Wonder what her condition is
Waiting for the next part.

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