FF:Maurya- The Samrat [Part23 updated on pg 56] - Page 3

good character sketch !!!!!!!!

Cool yaar Jayati...👏
Grt characters...perfect for the roles👏

Thanks 4 sharing

Part-1

The rise of new sun…

Megasthenes: Toh Shriman!!! Bataaiye aap kya batana chahte hain… Haan agar wahi jaani pehchaani kahaani hai….matlab dhana dwara Chanakya ka tiraskar… chanakya dwara Chandragupta ki khoj aur phir uska prashikshan ityadi…. Phir main aapko bata dun ki aap apna keval samay barbaad kar rahen hain…

The stranger: Nahin….. Nahin….[gives a smile] Jaisa ki maine kaha aapka gyaan abhi adhoora hai…Satya to yeh hai ke Chanakya ke akhand bharat ka sapna aur dhana ko apadast karne ka nischay unke bachpan se hi tha…

[A sign of surprise comes on the faces of both Megasthenes and Cornelia, who was hiding behind the wall close to them]

Cornelia: [to herself] Aakhir ye hai kaun jo magadh ke are mein itna jaanta hai?? Kya mujhe saamne jaakar dekhna chahiye?? Parantu agar use dekhne ke prayatna mein kahin main use dikh gayi toh??? Mujhe yahin chip kar un dono ke vartalap ko sunna hoga…. Ufff!!! Ye tivra varsha!!! Iski dhwani se to us insaan ki dhwani bhi swach sunai nahi de rahi jisse use pehchan paaun…..

The stranger: Yeh kahhani shuru hoti hai tab jab Dhananand naya naya raja bana tha… Us samay Magadh ke Maha Amatya the Amatya Shakhtar… Acharya Chanak unke ghanisht mitra the.. Wo dono hi galat ko nahi seh sakte the aur magadh ki janta ki bhalaai chaahte the… Parantu Dhana ke kuch aur hi vichaar the… Use to keval dhan batorne mein ruchi thi…Jaise hi Chanak aur Shakhtar ko ye baat paata chali..unhone iss baat ka virodh karne ka faisla liya aur janta mein soochna faila di… Parantu Dhana ko is baat ka abhaas ho gaya… isse pehle ki Amatya Shakhtar aur Acharya Chanak kuch kar pate Amatya Rakshas wahaan apne sainikon ke saath pahunch gaye aur Amatya Shakhtar ko badhi bana liya gaya… Isse pehle ki Acharya chanak ko bhi bandhi banaya jaata, unhone senapati Katyayan ke haathon Kusumpura, jahaan unki patni aur Putra, Vishnu rehte the , ek Sandesh bhijvaya jisme unhone Patliputra mein chal rahi saari sthiti ke bare mein bataaya aur us gaaon ke mukhiya se apne parivaar ki suraksha ka agraha kiya… Par Amatya Rakshas ke haathon jo ab Amatya Pramukh ban gaye the, Acharya Chanak zyaada der tak bach nahi paaye… Dhananand ne badi hi berehmi se Achaeya Chanak ka mastishk katvakar Sheher ke mukhya chaurahe par latka diya… Senapati Katyayan jo Chanak ke samarthak the, unhone unke antim sanskaar ka prabandh karvaya aur Vishnu ko iski suchna di… Parantu Vishnu ko apne pita ka who kata hua shish bhi chahiye tha…aur jab wo use mila tab who apne pita ke liye khub roya aur man hi man ek pratigya li, dhananand ko apadast karne ki aur us din se usne apna naam rakha Chanak ka putra Chanakya… Is paratigya ki agni par ghee dala dhana ke tiraskar ne…phir kya hua…aapko pata hi hai…

Megasthenes: Toh ye sab tab se shuru hua??? AAge kya hua wo toh mujhe pata hai par kya aap mujhe us raat ke bare mein bata sakte hain jis raat Chandragupta raja bana?

The Stranger: Haan… avashya… balki us raat ki yaadein toh mere mastishk mein ab bhi hari bhari hain… uss raat Magadha mein kuch zyaada hi shaanti thi… ye shaayad aane wali badlav ki aandhi ka nishaan tha… raat ko acharya Chanakya aur Chandragupta apni sena ki choti si tukdi ke saath Mahal par aakraman karne ke liye tiyaar the… Unhone raat ka samay isliye chuna tha kyounki wo jaante the ki Dhananda raat ke samay akraman ka kabhi aadesh nahi dega…Kintu kuch to galat tha… asal mein Mahal mein upasthit Dhanananda, Amatya Rakshas aur Dhana ki putrid Kalyani ko iss baat ka gyan tha ki Chandragupta unpar akraman karne wala hai… Aisa hote huye bhi jab Chandragupta ne aakraman kiya tab who uske josh aur dhrid nischay ke saamne tik nahi paye… aur Chandragupta ne senapati Katyayan ki sahayata se Amatya Shaktar ko bandhi grih se chuda liya aur Magadh ke Mahal par apni vijaya pataka ko fehraya… Agli subah Magadh ne na sirf dekhi nayi subah par dekha ek naya suraj jo unhe andhkaar ke andhere se mukt karrane aa gaya tha…….

Part 1 kaisa laga???? plz comment!! tried to make it as short as possible...😉

Nice start

yar everything was happening in front of my eyes...awesome dear

wow! Jayathi ur narration of story is excellent. superb 👏 not able to get any more words to express 😆. gr8 start. go ahead.

really??? And I was thinking that I ve made it boring...!!!!

@just jayathi gud job!! and i liked it! but in 2nd part u mentioned abt attacking at nite by CGM & chanyakya but in ancient India no1 ever attacked at nite bcoz it was considered not gud 2 attack at nite even on arch rival. these were considered as bad attiquetes of war. but still i may b wrong so try 2 find out abt it!!

@ tiny15