Savage (AR) Chapter 1-17 Link#2 Page 153 - Page 89

hey 1st of all happy new year...

NOTE:

This note is a very important one. As you all know that I am continuing this FF on IF for readers who for me are the true readers of this fiction.

And because of my "ARROGANT" attitude many have stopped reading. Many have stopped replying also i.e. they have turned silent because of whatsoever the reason is. I am not asking for any reasons. You wish to read and comment. I'll be more than happy and in case you wish to remain silent I am happy too. No problems from my side anymore.

But I have problem with the PMing thing. I don't think there's a single person out here who loves PMing and I am no exception. The note is to inform the readers who are in my BUDDY LIST and wanted the PM. More than 50% are silent and from the last few Chapters the number is increasing after every Chapter (includes the readers who presses only the LIKE button) and because there's no response from your side I don't know whether you are reading or not. It feels quite awkward to PM because I feel like I am forcing you to read. And that is something I hate doing. So any reader who don't want the PM or wish to remain silent, I want you to delete me from the buddy list. It will make both our work easier. I am not going to feel bad.I have been through a lot more here on IF. The end result will be the best for both of us- I am not going to feel like forcing you and you won't have to delete the MSG anymore because there won't be any PM.

Now if you are too lazy to do this, I can do this work also. I will PM all the readers this time and I'll wait for any kind of conformation from your side. If you can't comment, at least PM or Scrap me. Still there's no response, before posting the next Chapter I am going to delete the readers from the list.

Who all will be deleted:-

1) Readers who were only reading MBS because the FF is no longer on IF anymore.

2)Readers who haven't replied from a LONG time or who show their presence once in blue moon on the thread.

3) Readers who are only pressing the LIKE button from a long time. I am sorry to say but pressing LIKE button for me= being silent. How am I to know you are even reading the Chapter or pressing for the sake of it? Pressing LIKE hardly takes a second. And I believe that even if I don't PM it would hardly make any difference.

You can bookmark the link and keep a tab on the future updates. At any point you feel like you have time to reply now and wish to receive PM, send me the BUDDY REQUEST and I'll add you.

This was regarding my FF.

Another NOTE posted Below :😊

The note posted below is not related to my FF but this is something that I have observed here and I want to express my views on this.

From a writer's POV I need to say something and I believe that other writers who are reading this will agree with my statements. This platform, that IF have provided for the budding writers is an excellent platform for individuals who like creative writing and have an interest in writing. Each writer who gets 50 comments/ LIKES or 10 comments/Likes, each writer out here puts in the same effort for every Chapter. If you have never written any Fiction, try writing and you'll know what exactly I am talking about. It's not an EASY thing to come up with a storyline and take it further.

When a writer posts the Chapter and expects feedback, it's because it helps them to improve. Your one comment makes a lot of difference. And by remaining silent the immediate feedback you are sending the writer is that her/his work is not worth reading. And it's not worth enough to be replied. Nobody is forcing/asking you for a one page long feedback and there isn't a single writer who is against criticism but yes BAD- MOUTHING and terming it as "CRITICISM" is wrong. There's a BIG DIFFERENCE between these words.

IF have given the opportunity for you as a reader to help the writer and improve her/him in writing. If the writer is taking time out to write a Chapter, reply to comments and even PM about the updates. Than what is so hard in giving a feedback. Because as a writer I can assure you that writing the Chapter takes more time than reading and replying both. You have time to read but when it comes to replying ..YOU ARE TOO BUSY TO REPLY. Tell this to any sane person and her/his immediate reply will be on the lines like you can't be serious about this. Because it doesn't make any sense. This has to be one of the most pathetic excuses. And I am saying this w.r.t to my opinion. Other writer's can differ on this statement of mine.

But I would also like to ADD one more thing that YES..We have life outside IF and that should be our FIRST preference. As a writer, sometimes the Chapters get delayed because of busy schedule. As a reader you get late in replying because of the same reasons. And as a writer we all understand but NOBODY can be too busy to not reply at all. You may not be regular but can't you reply when you are free. Is it so HARD?

Also why is it that when a NOTE is posted you take time out to reply and from next Chapter onwards things goes back to the way they were like BEFORE. Like nothing Happened. I felt like a FOOL after seeing the response the next Chapter onwards. I was like Why did I even thought of posting a note to put my point across. But this time I am not going to feel it that way because I have not set any expectations.

These are few of the many things that I have observed w.r.t to the response on my thread. I am writing this because my writing has been getting affected because of this and for me the last few Chapters are a proof of that.

Your feedback can make or break a writer's writing. Try not to let her/him feel the latter one. Give Feedback, it's what a writer hopes and asks for.

Lastly don't give a feedback on this thread w.r.t this note, just for the sake of it. And truth to be told I am not even expecting anything. Because I have understood my lesson and in a very GOOD way. I am still going to continue with Savage no matter what and finish it.

I wanted to put this point across from last few days and now that I have put it, my work is done. As a writer my work ends here and now it's up to you how you perceive it.

Cheers,

Priyanka

PS: I have not written this note to hurt you in any form. But as a writer I believe you should know what exactly by being silent your actions result into.

P.P.S: If this note was wastage of time for you than I am not going to say anything.

Hey dear...Wow just love the update to the core...Gosh Riddhima is so vulnerable yaar...But I like her fighting attitude...No matter how much pain she have to bear still she is ever ready to fight at least once...I can see the concerned and soft side of Armaan in this chapter...Love the way you describe the word PAIN...Lets see when this pain is going to end...One more thing...I am just falling in love with this FF with every chapter...You are just Amazing writer...Waiting for more so do try to continue soon...Thanks for the PM...Take care

PS: Just read both your notes and want to say just one thing...I am your regular reader and commenter and will remain thought-out this journey.😳

PSS: Wish you a very Happy New year dear...<3<3<3

Lots of Love

Geet

I fully understand and agree with your note :)

it was a nice chapter...liked it overall...but i seriously want to know more of armaan;s pov now...it gets confusing knowing only 1 pov

Awsum update luvd it
plzz update soon fanx 4 da pm x

happy new year x

sorry for the late reply...just caught up with the last two chapters and even ur notes...i think i will go to ur delete list (which i certainly don't want...)..but i can't blame u also...u have right 2 b angry and u ARE for sure...i dont want to give any excuse bcoz at the end of the day its just that ..an excuse..

hey dear whats up!!
thank god you updated soon or else i would have comment in the end of jan
dear before comment i wana tell you
i am in 11 whole year i do fun but from 10 jan me gonna have my tests then pre board and then board..i read updates through my mobile but will comment once i will be online pls forgive me for that..
but one thing for sure when ever i will be online i will comment!
about update!!!
well this update was quite nice ..me dont know but after quite long time i read quite such part..i dont know what thing i like about this part may be hmm i dont know but compare to other i like this part much ...
the way you describing riddhima feeling or her condition marvellous dear...
thankx for pm
continue soon
lov
maria:)