Originally posted by: araja1234
awesome part. Loved it and thanks for the pm
Thanks araja1234.
Originally posted by: -Dee-
Hey,
I am speechless. When I started reading, I was lost for once thinking weren't we at the dinner. Then, I realised what must have happened, I can totally understand R's emotion and her urge to run away from the hell which she thinks will kill her and destroy her soul. blue eyes I find intriguing - the way she addresses him or rather his eyes as well as the person himself. A seems to be a strange yet a curious person.
I loved the way you've described R's mental state and the part in the forest. It's almost funny how she is going back to the same place that she was escaping - a place where she bought and not brought.
Loved it <3..
Continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.
Love,
D.
Thanks D.
Riddhima has already suffered so much that running away seems to be the only option for her right now. but she couldn't succeeded till now.
Blue eyes.. I could have used his name. but for the time being this name sounds perfect for the character and definitely as a writer when I describe him by his eyes it adds volume to the character. 😊
I read this line of yours- "a place where she
bought and not brought." and I want to say that it's the perfect line for the current track. Maybe I can use it somewhere only if you permit?😊
Thank you for the lovely comment.
Originally posted by: simone_ksg
awesome update as usual...i love the whole mysterious element to the story...and i wonder who the blue eyed guy is...he wants to keep her trapped but yet hasnt done anything to riddhima yet...but i think he's not gonna leave her this time...fate never seems to be on riddhim's side...hope that he doesnt hurt her too much...cpntinue soon...and thanks for the pm..😊a
Thanks Simone.
Blue eyes guy is the same guy around which this whole fiction is based.😉 In your last comment you said that I haven't disclosed the identity of this guy and then I thought maybe I can change the guy to someone else..like introduce him as different character but it would have led to the change in the story so I am sticking to the same guy you think
blue eyes is.
I can't reveal much as to what
blue eyes will do to her. It's all in the next Chapter.
Thank you for the lovely comment.
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