Kis Morrh pe milay ho/Thread # 1/Maan Geet FF - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
awesome parts
loved it
beautiful, emotional
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
nice part..

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
nice ss...
hmm interesting...
cant wait to c how maneet will meet..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Ya Buddies this is short part but due to hectic festiv season I m giving this.plz bear me..If u want more plz respond...u hav idea tel me ...comment n hit lk

Part 3

6 months later

Mohali

'U never meet me lik always in last six months…why u don't lov me any more ?'Girl said having tears in her eyes

'Plz I don't wanna give any answer ..it is better u should leave ..hamare rashtay aab alag ho chukke hai " He said .He had been turned to a stone hearted person.WhatHad happened in last six months.She was not able to understand what's wrong with Him. Whether She did any thing wrong to him or..She was wrong in choosing a partner .She knew Veer from her childhood days. They went to same school same college..n both of their families were happy to find such great partners for their kids.

'Ok if u want to move away fine…but could u give me reason ..what happened in these six months? I m same u r same'She busted in frustration

" No Geet nothing is same now every thing has been changed " at last Veer opened up

" Oh really so tell me ...the change..or I tell u …k is badlaav ki wajah Anjali hai "Geet said

' Nahi Geet Anjali nahi…Anjali came in my life when I had taken decision for our separation' He hesitated when he said separation

'Khud hi faisla kar liya u want me no more…this was ur lov….U always told me u lov me more then anything else' She was too much upset n she was jst about to shout when Veer stopped her

'Geet plz don't shout…it might b harmful for u ..u r not in good health'

'Veer still now u cares about my health then why?'

'Ya I care coz I don't want any thing wrong happens to u in my presence tum kaffi weak ho 'He said with in low volume

'Oh now I get the reason…my illness is the reason u don't want to move forward with me '

'Ha Geet agar tum yahi samjh rahi ho ya this is reason…but above all there is big reason I want to move'He was not able to look in her eyes

'Ok itna sabh keh diya hai to woh wajah bhi batta do' She folded her hands …as she had controlled her self

'Coz my family has doubt …that u ll never b mother in future…due to ur illness..n I m only son they need heir …so I hav to keep their wish…'

'Oh to ek waris k liye tum mujhko chod rahhe ho..shame on u Veet..tumhare jaisa ghatiya insaan koi ho he nahi sakkta…Main bimaar hue thi ….per aab theek hu…per accha hai tumhara asli chera samne aa gaya..' She cursed him

'Tumko jo samjhna hai samjho..but this is true..tumhara kya bhrosa agay chal kar kush ho gaya to ilzaam mujh per aayega'

'Ha theek hai jo maine samjha pehle woh galat tha per aab samjh gayi hu..tum woh nahi jo mere sath chal sakko..kis mor per tum mujho chod dogay kaya patta..tum kya shodogay..main tumko mukat karti hu..I don't want u any more'

She was much upset.But Veer's true face was in front of her n this made her to realize ..She was moving forward on her journey with this selfish man..But he left her today ..in the future it was also possible…n it happened today that was better.

How is this...Now Geet is here in frame..I hop u ll lik..n let mystery to b unfold in upcoming updates as it is demand to keep it as such...Plz comment n hit lik buddies..If any one want me to pm plz send request



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Jass


Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
Sonia.KN thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Update is here plz hav a look on this
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
loved it 😊
Jass pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
awesome update can't w8 for next part and how Maaneet will meet and fall in love
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
awesome
thanks for the updates
thar man was selfish n neves deserves our geet
wateing for the next
thanks for pm
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
that veer...dont he come up with a better excuse?
i hope geet stays strong
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
awesome update dearglad that geet came to know the true self of that manfinally geet is in the frame , loved it 😊waiting for maaneet to meet each othereagerly waiting for next partthanks for the pmplease continue soon

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