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Posted: 13 years ago
one year leap but still only mere attraction...when love will spread all over...
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Posted: 13 years ago
So the girl has a distinctive feeling of losing herself in those eyes ?!! Thats great news indeed ! And she terms it filmy 😆

Loved the vivid portrayal of emotions in Maan's mind regarding Geet and his new parents...

Loving the new character Vardaan too..
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Posted: 13 years ago
is it to early to sratr begging here????????
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
too good
love the girls teasing session
and maan wants to have the same handa atmosphere at his home...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

One year! One darn year and Ruby and Rahul are still persistent? Goodness! What a chipku people. Yes, Yes, till Y'day I always said I don't hate Rahul..YET but raaton raat mein Jadu ho gaya. Now i hate him as much as I hate exams. Ok that was a weird comparison. I figured.😆

Geet's musings and doubts about Love and if it really happens in real life.. was sweet and cute and of course realistic. But what captured my attention were these lines.!

Her mind drifted to that one moment when time had stood still. All she had registered was that his eyes were like an enigma. The eyes which were so hard that nothing could be let out were unguarded and beckoning in that one particular moment.

I really loved it how she got back to thinking of "the moment" with even a slightest mention of anything closely related to it. When Ruby used a word called moment, she went back to the "moment" they shared. Hayyee!This was dreammyyy!
And next part.. Vardaan.. I like him so so so so much. He is one strong person and I am really really glad he finally achieved what he wanted. It didn't strike me that this "Manish" is our very own "Manish-aaa" until I read Nidha's comment. ROFL.
Good to see him here. And I could as well imagine Harman and Meha's discomfort. ROFL. Am loving it <3
And coming to our beloved Handa sisters, I was grinning. Aww that was an adorable punishment. Of course it'd be adorable until i would not be on the receiving end. Hu ha ha. Anyways I laughed out loud reading Geet's disorder. I too have the same but kind of different disorder. I feel sleepy whenever i catch my text books but can read other stuff all night. 😆 And Geet's explanation steal the show. To explain why I'd quote Sam's words.

"in one single breath Kakku, you went on from scolding him to defending him."

Can i see something change in our Kakku? Sure that one word stirred something. Isn't it?

And coming back to Sam, I adore her. It's more like a reverence and as usual I salute to her attitude. She does wish to have a partner but she wouldn't sit at home and pine for him! Bravo!👏
Such a strong persona! I am being my usual excited self to read Vardaan-Sameera's story 😃


You can't base a relationship on mere attraction.

And he was being driven by attraction.

He needed to stop. But was that an option?

Right. You can't base a relationship based only on Attraction. But unless given a chance to your relationship how'd you know if this relationship will stop here, at the phase of attraction or would grow deeper? As we all know Geet's beauty is not just skin deep and there's be no one who'd not love her. Maan ji is just being his usual be-in-control, stop-yourself mode.😆

"Would you explain how it is a practical decision to take a train till Amritsar which is five hours away from Chandigarh than taking one to Ambala which is only one hour away?"

BTW did i tell you I loved the underlined lines? I love Savitri Ji for more than one reasons. She is the one who had thrown some light upon how special the decision was. Five hours : One hour. Wooow! 🥳Way to Go Maan ji😆

It was true that he did choose Amritsar out of both practical and emotional reasons. And he was driven by an urge to meet Bauji and Ma too. They were to be his parents too. And he felt a sense of duty towards them too. But that one moment that he stood in front of those pair of deep honey eyes, he credited the whole purpose to her. Almost credited the whole purpose to her.

This once again is the best part of the update. Almost credited.. True, the man he was, it would sound ridiculous for him to give credit to her wholly and solely. But Maan babu i've one thing for this "Everything is fair in Love and war"😆
And this is my dedication to Maan.
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QKzRoT81sHA[/YOUTUBE]


Glad you liked the update sakhi! And you know I am too happy to say anything much today ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

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atleast moi commnted first so do we get something special next time..Ok jokes apart
and moi doesnt like this ruby woman..
and tujhe punishmnet ka tareeqa nahi mila tha..chottu band di..ouch thinking of that hurts my hair..
and i am seriously dying to know wht was Maan's rn when he comes to know after marriage that geet has such a cute disorder..i suppose thts in second child of the house..my sis is same..she cant read beyond a page...hehe
hum bechare writers/readers ki toh zindagi he books hain..😆.
Chalo bahut lamba ho gaya hai..
waise last line pakka..
Savithri aunty..moi still not like her..😭
Give me something to start liking her..😆Lalitha pawar


Phew! Itna lamba comment! Kya baat hai!!😆

Bingo on one point...maan's reaction will be worth watching when he gets to know her disorder!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Eowyn

So far I don't think there is any change in definition for Mushy Jazz ji...

And this chapter definitely doesn't qualify as mushy...
It was perfectly natural and well plotted...
Enjoyed every moment of it...


Glad you did😳

Originally posted by: Eowyn

You have a fascination for eyes just like I do I guess...or is it that all writers love eyes (a very complicated structure medically I say)...

Geet is allergic to novels! Oh my! Poor Maan yaar kithni energy waste kiya tha gift selection main😆
Honestly I would absolutely love it if some one gifted me a book...total bookworm you see...
Vardaan and Sameera have started a fresh chapter in their lives...waiting for their destinies to unfold...
Glad to meet Manish-a😆...
Wow! What a novel idea for punishment...plaits ko chair se baandh dho (Thank god my hair is not long enough for a plait and I am the eldest in the family)
Waiting for more dear...


Eyes are the windows to the soul?

And the best creative tool when words fail or lack luster.

Glad you have liked the new character Vardaan too :)


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

i just love this FF and last update just awesome

I am not sure about Ruby and Rahul who seem vile but other than that it was very very sweet


Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update
loved it

i m not sure about ruby and rahul though


Originally posted by: mandymore

Luvly prt..omg kya tareeka h punish krne ka...u r such a devil..
ruby aur uska veer maarkhana chate h...
maan driven by emotions 4 geet wowww...
vardhan ki kahani b badi thodi si...nice prt


Ruby and Rahul are not done yet guys! So brace up for more.

Glad you enjoyed the update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -memorable-

all is well in everybody's life 😊


Originally posted by: Maaneet_Vidu

awesome.

Ruby and Rahul...eww...i hate them.


Originally posted by: shalini_s

loved Sameera's punishment.. totally cracked me up...


Originally posted by: ammu5

lovely update. poor geet she cant read novels. hw unromantic maan is to gift her books on her b'day.


Thank you for the appreciation guys :)

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