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Posted: 13 years ago
great work...sad but awesomely written.. do continue soon and please let dadi interfere before its too late
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Posted: 13 years ago
i read all the updates again...

Sanju... i really loved the way you made the plot of the events leading to divorce...

as such its just due to their miscommunication and ego... and more over they never doubted each other's love and the rumors... Just the pain of misunderstanding each others act...

The divorce decision is not due to mistrust... more due to the pain of love... she loves him totally ...

thanks for all the three updates... am waiting for the next one soon...
Edited by shrutheAjay - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 81 is just fabulous..
cant believe sasha's clever mind..
i know maan won't believe..
di,thanks a lot..
praying 4 our lil angel's well being..
u too take care..
really missed u and ur ff most...
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Posted: 13 years ago
welcome backkk dear...
lots of huggiiisss n kisssiiisss to u n angel🤗⭐️


i was eagely waiting for ur awsmmm update
u made my day sweety... love u sooommm...mmmuch...🤗👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
di,again thanks 4 ur double dhamakadar update...
but am sad,why maan believed that???
maan,who believe geet blindly,now the time geet most need him...
i know di,u'll do something...
so cont soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjeevani09

the prologue is there in part83. they have not been separated for 3yrs. after 3 yrs of marriage they have reached this stage. i hope im clear to all...



yes dear i kow they have separated recently not for 3 yers

i just want a sever punishment for sasha😡

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 84

I Miss U

As days passed his temper lessened and he thought of talking and sorting things with geet. Many questions cropped in his mind. Her behaviour had surprised him. Her not coming to london. Her training, her not making calls'. He wanted to know what was bugging her so badly' wat was the reason of her sudden behavioural change'. was she really interested in karan...did she really believed the gossip of her and sasha...

Detrmined to clarify things he returned home that day to find divorce papers clipped with the bangles. He touched the intricate design of the bangle with his thumb.

So this is what she wants' she is decided without talking with me and she has left too.. if this is what she wants im not gonna chase her'. Let her go I dnt need her too if she doesn't..

He shoved the papers in the drawer along with the bangles.

Come and beg for divorce' I wont sign these'. Call me to the court and I will see what u say there'..

Each passing day no matter how much he tried he missed her. He tried to make an iron image to shield the pain in his eyes but his heart ached as he missed her in simple things. Every corner of home and office was painted with her memories'' this ache made him bitter. His anger knew no bounds. He was like terror in office and home. He was more surprised as he got very cold behaviour at home.. daadi, dev and even NT avoided and ignored him completely. It had grown to such extent that they left the room he came to. The separation and its pain brought the worst in him.

~.~.~

Geet felt cold lying in the bed alone.

This was her new home. Initially she shifted with Nuts untill she got her new job. Once she had the job she had set up a small household with help of her friends. It was nothing compared to what she had got since childhood or maan had given her but it was hers. She had earned it. But today she had sneaked her settled in this small one room kitchen. She had to leave overnite with all her things and come here as she didn't want even her friends toknow her whereabout. All this happened after that dreaded phonecall.

She closed her eyes and thought how things changed since she left him.

Every night she missed him. Every day she wished that he wud come searching for her and their baby and then she wud question him, shout on him, punish him' how she wud be angry and things she will make him do to ask forgivness. But everynight she wud realise that he wont come. He hadnt signed the papers. She had left the note for him to hand it over to karan. Which he never did. She didn't go asking as she never wanted to face him after that day. On one hand she hated him for running away on the other she still loved him.

She touched her soft bulge. I wanted so much for u.. but cant give u a father' we will be one strong family.. u and me' its not that ur father is bad but he has gone mad.

It was good that daadi presumed u r not there else every day that poor old woman wud have suffered.

~.~.~

It was yet another hell of a day. When maan entered the KM he saw full family drama running there. Daadi was all tears sobbing in her bed, NT pacifying her, Dev trying to calm her and all the servants present in attention.

Maan looked at Nakul.

Nakul ' madam ka BP high hai

D ' dev inse kaho yahan se jae'.. mein inka chehra nahi dekhna chahti.. I feel ashamed I have brought up this boy. When he was young he wud hold my pallu and smile at me and I thought what wonderful boy he is. His smile has cheated me' he is not innocent he broke all my trust.

Initially maan had thought daadi has planned another drama but the dialoges were too harsh and he knew something has hurt daadi. He signaled servants to leave.

Kya baat hai daadi? Aap saaf boliye.

Geet she whimpered before she started to sob again. NT wiped her tears.

Im not going to talk about it. She went on her own wish.

U forced her to do so.

I wont talk about it.

That's the only thing u can talk to me else we have nothing more to talk.

Daadi''. Dev mujhe daadi se akele mein baat karni hai. He wanted NT to leave as she cud any moment turn into a gossip mill.

N ' ab chipane ko aisa kya bacha hai.. sab jaante hain hum.

NT bahar jao.

D ' koi nahi jaega. Aap chilana band kijiye.

Daadi aap kya chahti hain. Mein NT se baat karu.

N ' kya burai hai humme' jo aap baat nahi kar sakte' kya galat kiya hai' jo kiya hai aapse kam hai'

NT tameez se baat karo' jaanti ho tumhare saare nakhre mere bal par chalte hain

Kyu kya karenege aap mere credit cards block kar denge.. mujhe bhi ghar se nikal denge'. Paise sab kuch nahi milta' ye lijiye' she threw the cards on bed.

Dev ' NT bas karo'

N ' kyu inhe kuch bhi karne ka haq hai''.

D ' apne credit cards wapas rakhiye NT ye mera ghar hai.. meine buisness maan ko diya.. aapka haq hai is paise par'

Daadi aap NT ko support kar rahi hai wo bhi mere khilaaf.

Kyu mein kitni buri hu''. Itni nahi ki apne bache ko maar du'..

NT'

Chilaiye nahi maan mujhe apse ye umeed nahi thi.

kal geet ko hospital mein dekh mujhe apko apna pota kahne mein bhi sharam aa rahi hai'

daadi ap kya kah rahi hai hai mujhe samajh nahi aa raha.

Dev aap inse kahiye ki ye yahan se jaye warna mein medicines nahi lungi.

Maan saw it was no use arguing with daadi and the whole house was in her support. But what was this pregnancy issue'. He needed to know. Later that day he got hold of dev.

Dev tum mujhe thik se batao daadi kya bol rahi thi.

Bro aapne thik nahi iya'.

Meine ab kya kiya' wil u pls tell me.

Bro kal dr singh ne phone kiya tha.. our gynae was taking care of geet, but she didn't inform daadi when when geet was admitted. Geet had fainted again so she was brought to the hospital second time in a week. Last time she had called daadi and NT but this time daadi wasn't informed. When daadi went there Dr refused to give patient details as geet had asked for this. Daadi ne geet se pucha to geet ne baby kebaare mein baat karne se refuse kar diya. She told she will take care of baby on her own and do the best possible. Daadi saw her admitted in the hospital and geet must have aborted the baby.

ABORTED?

Haan.

When was she pregnant'

Bro dnt tell me u dnt know..

I dnt know' whats all this'

Dev then told him all the hospital incidence.. when they had called to inform him and sasha'

Oh crap.. tell me the date..

but I was drunk that day..

nothing as such had happened as u r telling me.

Bro then make things look the way they are' geet was waiting for u so desperately'. Bro u both lost ur baby in this confusion.

Lost? Y?

Geet was very weak. This miscommunication was hurting her from within. First time also she had fainted in office. Then when she left home she became more worked up with the work pressure and the emotional stress. She became more weak. Last time she fainted and nuts brought her to hospital. Dr told daadi that if she remains so weak it is better to rmove the baby than to carry on. The baby's health was being affected. Daadi wanted geet to come to us.. maybe our other house with daadi to take care of her. She refused. She even refused to go to her maternal place as she hasn't told them about ur impending divorce. This time daadi thinks she has taken the decision and aborted as she refused to tell daadi about it. She was admitted.

I will meet her now.

Where bro? she has left. Daadi and NT went today morning she has been discharged today.

But how can she be so quite about it?she knows me' no amount of anger can let me ignore my baby. Oh geet y did nt u try once more.

so another one is here... hope to do another update soon...

PART 85 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/51940459
Edited by sanjeevani09 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay

i read all the updates again...


Sanju... i really loved the way you made the plot of the events leading to divorce...

as such its just due to their miscommunication and ego... and more over they never doubted each other's love and the rumors... Just the pain of misunderstanding each others act...

The divorce decision is not due to mistrust... more due to the pain of love... she loves him totally ...

thanks for all the three updates... am waiting for the next one soon...

yes they are totally in love but their egos and lack of communication has made them drift apart. this happens in many relation. all they need to do is hear the other one out...
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Posted: 13 years ago
now read part 83..thanks again di..
di kuch karo...we cant see this lovely couple get divorced..,...plj some how clear their stupid misunderstanding...
awesome update..but really cant imagine their this situation...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg.. Days heartbreaking:( dre separated,, urghh sasha😡 hope they resolve things soon.. X

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