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Posted: 13 years ago
dear u give the update after so long and that to a shocking one😲 misunderstanding gosh now what will happen ?
waiting for geet's reaction when she come to know that maan is leaving with that eveil😈 god plz don't let this mu continue long want geet to barge in maan's london apartment and clear all the doubts and then geet teaching that chudail a good leason for comming btw them gosh i hate her and now i wanna kill her plz plz plzzz update the next part soon...😭me said with this part as i wanted some sweet maaneet moments but got this mu 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 82

SEPARATION

Both missed each other but at times ego becomes too large and blocks ur true feelings. They waited eagerly for the other to call. Each tried to keep their mind engaged in work to forget missing.

Geet overworked herself and maan was too tough for sasha to handle. He never talked always busy in work even back home and never got swayed by her chit chats.

Days passed and it was 2 months for maan gone to london. Geet was finishing off with her training. Few more days and she wud be relieved of office and will settle for her viva based on her training and end of her MBA.

Geet went to Khurana office one of the days to catch up on IE. It was late preparing for the next event and she felt weak and fainted. Everyone panicked and rushed to a doc. She announced geet to be 10 weeks pregnant after check up. The news spread like wild fire in the office. adi and pinky didn't interfere to stop the gossip as they wanted maan to handle it. There interference in his private life may not be approved by him.

Daadi was extremely happy and soon came alongwith NT and Dev to the hospital. Doc kept geet overnight for observation as she was too week for pregnancy. Geet was anaemic and too stressed but the news made her extremely happy.

Dev ' dnt u think we shud inform bro.

Daadi - Yeah.

NT ' but geet wud like to do it.

Geet smiled. She tried calling him when everyone left. Maan was busy in a meeting so sasha took his phone outside and didn't receive it. She had info from tasha about geet's pregnancy and rumor that it must be maan's. she told maan that it was call from office which she has dealt with.

Next day daadi enquired about maan's reaction. NT was super excited to know maan's reacton.

Actually kal baat nahi hua.

Dev ' ok lets call him now.

That day maan was missing geet badly and he drank miserably. To add to it sasha added a few lines from her side telling how well things are going at office. geet is handling IE very well alongwith Karan. She praised her in a sarcastic way telling about her rapo with Karan.

I love her and not a word about her. he slurred in his drunk state.

MK u may love her but she is interested in Karan. This is so obvious. The whole office runs with their romance gossip, how well they glue together. Dnt u think they seem perfect for each other. As it is mk u r never interested in girls like her. so move on. She doesn't care for u. see she didn't even apply for training under u. all the girls run to u but she loves him thats y even after having a option to work with u she chose karan.

Not a word I said and he stumbled into his room and crashed into bed.

Maan's phone rang in the hall and sasha received it.

NT ' now we all will listen when u will tell veerji. This ur punishment as u didn't tell him.

Daadi ' tumlog badmaashi kar rahe ho.

NT ' ok only option is u can tell veerji that speaker is on.

Dev called maan from his mobile and waited for him to receive.

Hello.

Haan geet bolo. MK is busy.

Mujhe maan se baat karni hai. Unko phone de do.

Wo so rahe hai.

Sasha tum unke room mein kya kar rahi ho.

We stay in the same apartment. Ek sath rah rahe hai. tumhe koi problem hai?

Geet gulped in she looked at daadi who had a disapproving look on her face. geet tried to fasten it.

Sasha maan ko phone do.

Ok I will try. She smiled as she had already set the stage.

She entered maan's room and saw him sleeping. She kept a pillow near his ear and said on the phone.

Mk geet ka phone hai. She wants to talk to u.she removed the pillow. Mk geet..

Not a word. Mujhe geet k baarein mein ek shabd nahi sunana hai. He mumbled in his sleep.

Sun liya geet.

Tears started to fill in geet's eyes.

She came out and told her. geet agar tum maan ko apni pregnancy k baare baatana chahti ho to he knows. Office mein kaafi log hai baatane ko. he is upset about it.

Agar unko malum hota to he wud have called me. give him the phone.

Itna confidence. Chalo mein fir se try karti hu but dnt think he wants to talk to u.

She entered his room.

Mk geet.

I told u no geet. he wasn't liking her talking all sorts of things about geet. Maan lost his temper and dragged sasha out of his room.

Mk u r hurting me. sasha squealed.

U need this.

Mk it pains she purpusfully said on the phone.

He threw her out and closed the door. Sasha got what she wanted. A perfect opportunity.

In the silence of the hall she spoke what she wanted geet to hear.

Maan let me atleast cut the phone.

Geet will listen. Plzz stop this.

I need to cut.

Dev cut the phone before she said more.

Daadi ' I will talk to maan. This is no way. I just dnt like this sasha.

Daadi y r u believing sasha. And talking to him on phone wudnt be right. It is a matter of 15 days and he will be here. I will talk to him. waise bhi aap kahti hai na ki husband wife aapas mein problem solve karein to better hai. Let him come I will talk to him. itna bharosa hai mujhe apne rishtey par.

Thik hai geet aap kah rahi hai to hum wait kartein hai.

Geet waited for his return. As sasha planned her next move to ruin the relation completely. Each day she tried to be happy for the baby but somewhere deep her heart ached and sadness was visible in her eyes. This stress was working over her and making her weak. She lost weight instead of gaining.

The Last Act.

Sasha played her trumph card on the day they were to reach Delhi. She had got some photos taken in such manner that showed maan and sasha close. Like one in coffee shop where they were discussing over some file. the photo was taken so that the table and file werent there and it seemed they were leaning onto each other. Some more photos of this type. She got in touch with one of her friends working in a newspaper and got it printed as maan singh khurana getting cozy with his employee' is it the new budding romance''.

The news irked maan and he was angry as soon as he reached Delhi. He straight away went to office. he was sorting things out when sasha came to his room.

She apologised and stated how embarrased she is feeling with the news. She faked crying and stated that her family will react. She stated how sad she is with all this rumor.

It hardly matters to me sasha.

I dnt know how I will explain this to my family. Sir how will daadi ma means savitri madam react?

U dnt need to worry about my family. I dnt need to clarify to anyone and noone in my family needs it and wudnt ask. They trust me. u better handle ur family.

He walked out of the room to the main office in the hall.

Meanwhile geet rushed to office to meet him. she didn't want anyone in office to mention about her pregnancy to him. she wanted to be the first one to tell him. she had an inner believe that maan didn't know about this. She thot any type of gossip may spoil his mood and knowing about their baby by anyone else wudnt be appreciated by him. she walked into the hall and pinky beemed a smile at her.

Geet tum? Yahan? Hhhmm sir k aate hi tum office aa gayi. pinky blaabered thru her mouth filled with a burger.

Haan. Mujhe maan se milna hai vo kahan hai?

Vo apne cabin mein hai.

The news paper on the reception desk caught her attention. She hadnt seen this news. She started reading it there only.

Meine ye subh dekha hi nahi.

Chor na geet ye to jhooti gossip hai.

I know its gossip but atleast parh to sakti hu.

Just then maan entered the hall.

Geet, maan sir. Maan sir aa gae.

Geet just folded the paper in her hand and went behind him as he was moving in opposite direction.

Maan.

He turned after listening to her voice. It was so soothing to hear this after so many days.

Mujhe aapse baat karni hai'.kuch puchna.. nahi baatana hai.. she was fumbling with just the thot how to reveal the truth.

She nervously looked around.

Bolo..

Mein kah rahi thi.. she frantically moved her hand and maan caught site of the newspaper in her hand. His expression changed, he thot she is here to confront and question him about it. He crossed his hands across his chest and looked sternly at her.

Vo kuch personal hai..

Geet this is a proffessional place. no personal talks.

He turned to walk away. It took her by surprise. It was a rude shock for her and she lost all her patience.

Maan proffesional matlab'' mujhe aapse baat karni hai.

Abhi nahi'

Geet felt a pang of weakness. She felt like fainting. Everyone in office was looking at them. Tear burned in her eyes she stumbled. Karan had come there and seeing geet loose her balance rushed to hold her. he supported her and helped her stand.

Maan turned by the noise of newspaper falling and geet being held by karan.

He lost his temper. He raised his hand to hit Karan.

Maan' geet stopped him.. kya kar rahe hai?

Geet??

Aap jaante hai yahan kya hua? Nahi naa.. to

Mujhe jaanana bhi nahi hai.

Maan listen to geet' u r not getting it right.

Dnt interfere.

Maan problem kya hai?

Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni. Tum yahan kyu ayi?

Mein aaj ke baad yahan nahi aungi.

Mat aao. Leave.

geet was shocked she cudnt believe maan asked her to leave... he had already insulted her infront of the staff connecting her with karan...she was nervous what everyone wud think of her pregnancy... geet snapped her hand from karan. Geet turned and left hurriedly. Maan looked at everyone staring at them.

Back to work. mera muh dekhne kliye office nahi aate aaplog. Back to ur seats.

waiting for ur comments... if my sweetie pie, honey bunch sleeps a little more i will update one more part.

PART 83 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/51936704

Edited by sanjeevani09 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
superb
oh this bitch sasha i wann kill her
how cime she created the gap
not even once maan or geet thought abt it
i think she ll misuse the pics dear
oh sasha is with maan
wht is hapeneing dear
u gave after mant days with big twist
thinking wht ll be the next dear
take ur time and update the next part soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
haww i hate maan for this how can he blame geet and not even talk to her 😭
Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
welcome back..
happy to hear from u...
so the mu starts from here and this is how the prologue comes in picture...
so all the understanding they had for these couple of yrs went in drain with expectation and lack of communication...
well they have to go thro this to get to know more abt each other...
waiting for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
welcome back...

hope u n the baby r doing fine...

as for the update...

this is wrong...everything is going wrong...

i wonder what will happen next...this is breaking them apart...

n maan is not even listening...


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Posted: 13 years ago
r
aaa i hate this sasha...
she is such a 🤬
n what a cum back di..
aate hi itna saara twist..😭
me feel so sad..
da communication gap is building up..
pleeejjj update soon...me cant wait

Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i just read the 2 nd part too
oh god i ll kill this sasha dear
hoe can she do that
maan nt even listrnrf to her dear
nw wht ll happen
itna bada twist dear...
hope he should knoe geet is pregnant dear
waiting for next part dear
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
😃

oh wow double updates...thanku thanku thanku



Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 83

Geet went back home tired and lost. She just cudnt understand maan's behaviour. she was stunned by his reaction and temper.

On the other hand maan was surprised that geet didn't trust him. she came to office and was questioning him publicly about his character. How can she question his integrity. And that too when he never did hers'. He believed her and helped her even when they werent close. And now when she knew all about him, they loved each other y didn't she just believe him and waited for him to return.

Sasha was the only one beaming from within.things had turned out better than she had expected. Everyone was surprised seeing maan's sudden outburst and geet's plight.

Maan lost his temper and scolded the staff for every small thing. He left very late. Maan didn't go home that day. Geet's reaction had shook him from within. He went to his farm house and stayed there that night.

Geet was very sad and looked pale.

Daadi was waiting for them to sort out as geet had already asked that she wanted to deal it her way. She liked her belief in the relation both shared. But wasn't able to estimate the damage both their ego were creating.

It was third day that maan didn't come home.

A 23yr old woman wearing a pink satin pj and white sphagetti top walks to the table. Puts on the music system as her daily ritual to listen to music before sleeping. She picks up a gold credit card kept on the table. She moves her finger over the card, her name G. Khurana embossed over it in golden letters. Tears trickle down her face. She moves to the terrace.

The song was playing n the background.

leja leja re...haay haay leja ni muiye..ni muiye..ni muiye...(leja leja re mehki raat mein churake saare rang leja raati raati main bheegun saath mein tu aisi mulakaat deja) - 2
she went to the terrace railing and lied over it gazing at the night sky. Wind was becoming stronger bringing clouds to hide the full moon she had been admiring.
ni muiye maila mann mera, kya karna aisa rang gora, jo piya na rijhaye ni muiye mann maila, mann maila kya karna, hai aisa.. na bhaye piya ko, tann gora kya karna, hai aisa.. leja leja.. churake saare rang leja.. raati raati main bheegun saath mein tu aisi mulakaat leja..
it started to rain. She didn't move. She closed her eyes so as to wash away all that happened in past 3 yrs. She wished to go back to her mother's lap. There was no way she cud do this. She had walked a long way alone. Yes alone coz he was never there even if he was physically present. was he there? She had to decide alone that she wanted a divorce or not? This was a milestone in her life. There wud be no turning back like she was not able to go back after her marriage...no one wanted her to turn back then. This decision decided the fate of many relations specially hers and maan. Shud she accept his no bonding relation or shud she start a new life...
leja leja.. leja leja re.. leja leja haan re.. chahoon paas paas aana, koi dhoondh ke bahana, tumhe apna banana chahe ruthe ye jamana, chahe maare jag taana, tumko hai pana ni muiye saari raaton ki, kahani koi to hogi.. jo jaage taare raaton ko, ya jaage jogi.. hoo.. ni muiye.. haay.. ni muiye hoti hia, kucch batein hoti hai, raaton mein jo jaage hai jogi ya taare jage hai, raaton mein.. leja leja re mehki raat mein churake saare rang leja raati raati main bheegun ... ni muiye.. ni muiye... leja leja re..bheegun re.. haaini muiye.. ni muiye.. ni muiye..

Does she want a divorce or not? Will he accept the divorce? She was confused...strings pulled from all sides and for the first time she thought i wish someone cud take this one decision for me. Babaji y hv u done this to me...he is everything to me...my life, my breath, my soul yet nothing to me.

Today what am i 23yr old girl starting a new life or a 23yr old woman living a life? Babaji u hv to help me show me what i must do? Plzz give me one indication...

when he didnt return she knew what she must do...Geet left home the morning. She left the papers in maan's cupboard in an envelope alongwith the bangles of her mother in law maan had given her.

i think im clearing many doubts about the divorce and the fight. some portion is a repeat from part 12. my angel is awake now. bye for now. will see when i can update next.

Edited by sanjeevani09 - 13 years ago

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