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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1101

Dear Lyraa,

I have read this story few times. I read it again today. It's a wonderful story.

The initial chapters are so painful to read... It was heartbreaking to read about Khushi's hurt, sadness, depression..,

But later, my heart was filled with joy reading about Arnav's undying love for Khushi. The way his life revolves around Khushi. The epilogue was beautiful.

The terrace scene, where all 3 couples are relaxing under moonlight and having fun.. Was so beautifully written. I loved your writing and this story.

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1102

Beautiful story
you made cry
emotional and intense
at least shyam role is less

well written
beautiful ending

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Natalia

@Natalia

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#1103

Loved the story

Continue writing please. I like your style of expression - simple yet eloquent

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Aakanksha

@ina_saahil

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#1104

Read the FF in one go and I simply loved it..
You aptly justified the title of this FF - Behind that Smile.. coz' literally behind that smile, Khushi hid so manybhings. Her pain, her tears, hrr anguish everything. I literally cried whole reading the pain that Khushi had to go through and which ultimately made her devoid of any emotions. She turned to a stone and that was the last blow to Arnav. He realised his mistake and then eventualky he did make up for it.
I was also happy seeing Anjali moving on in life and accepting Shaurya.
All in all it was a great FF. Loved it.
Looking forward to reading your other works..
Keep up the good work..

Lots Of Love.. 😊 😊

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#1105

I loved rereading this wonderful story..can't get enough of it

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coderlady

@coderlady

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#1106

Very sensitive portrayal of the agony Khushi goes through. Well done.

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212121

@212121

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#1107

Oh my god!!!!

This was one of the best stories I've read not only of ipkknd but out of all the stories.

I've never ever read a whole story all together but girl you forced me to do so

Believe me I've read your story in a single go by locking my room for 3 hours and after posting this I will read this beautiful journey once again from the beginning

God bless you

Keep writing as there are really few good ones left😊

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Ritu

@rituluvrshi

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1108

You are freaking awesome writer... I Dnt knw how many times I have read this ff... Ten times??? Perhaps .
Nt kidding...really...each time I read this..it never fails to touch my heart ever so deeply.. That I feel the heartache when our khushi was going through the dark phase of her .
I love arnav here more after looking at his way of redemption.
I m also glad that u showed anjali a brave n strong character .
some lines are there that I really love and can relate to my life..
Thanks for the treat.. N hope to see much more of ffs frm yur side
Love you