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Posted: 19 years ago
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Please cont. soon can't wait for the next part!!!!!
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K: we have to go now bye
Z: bye
Kripa grabs khusi and rahuls hand and leaves.
Z: we meet again kripa nice..I guess u betrayed so many guys that u didn't recognize me that I am angad, angad khanna.( he gets teary remembering kripa)
Z: just wait and watch how Im going to make ur life a living hell…I will take u away from my family so u wont harm them than I will give u the punishment u deserve ( smiles evilly)

Angad leaves to his car and drives toured his home.

Kripa goes to others
All: kripa
K: goes to them) yes what?
J: did u see angad, he is back
H: im so happy
K: he is not angad he is zaib
Pt: u didn't recognized him he is angad
K: I did recognize him and I know what he wants and so do u guys… make him think that u guys think he is zaib to not angad
P: why is that?
K: becz I want him to get his revenge the way he want
J: how many times should we tell u it was not ur fault
K: it is and always will be…that's final I don't want to talk about it anymore
Rahul and kushi where playing and didn't know what they where talking about

Next day like always kripa went to office along with two devils.

K: ok u to be good im going for meeting
R,Ku)ok bye di
K: bye
Kripa goes to meeting

Meeting:

K: so who did u pick for the next singer
Guy: we got one great singer who is willing to sing for us
K: who is that
G: his name is Zaib
K: oh ok yes what did he say
G: plez come in sir
Zaib opens the door and inters
K: gets up and shakes hand with him) hello
Z: smiles) hi
K: they both sit) would u like to sing in our next concert that is about a month
Z: I would love to

They agree and kripa asks him to sign a contract so he has to go to her cabin to sign it

The meeting is over
K: plez come this way
Z: after u

They reach close to kripas office
Secretary: mam can u sign her
K: oh yea I forgot.. excuse me zaib plez go ahead I will be there in a mint
Z: sure (and he leaves
Kripa signs and rushes toured her office
K: thinking) oh shit I forgot that if he opens the door he will get wet oh god nooo..
Zaib was about to open the door when kripa yells behind him
K: yells) zaib don't…( it was to late he opened the door
As zaib opened the door the bucket of water fall on his had and got him wet
Z:aaaaaaaaaa ..what the hell
K: bits her tong and rushes to him) im soo sorry im really sorry
Z: what was this for
K: im really sorry I was trying to tell u about this but u already opened the door
Z: is this how u always put in ur door so no one could come to ur office
K: no..no…im really sorry..plez sit her( takes him to the couch..she runs to the bathroom and brings him a towel) here
Z: thanks
K: Rahul, khushi come out and look what u did to ur star
R,Ku: bets their tong and runs to zaib and holds their ears) we are sorry we thought it was di
Z: its ok…so u to do this everyday to ur di
R,ku: yessss
Z: and what does she do to u guys back
R: she throws water back at us
Z: smiles evilly) than I guess I should do the same
Zaib takes the same bucket which still had some water in it and pores it in top of kushi and rahul and starts laughing. They all laugh a lot
K: excuse me zaib here is the doc plez sign here
Z: yes ok
He sings the contract
Z: ok I have to leave now
R: can u stay with us a little longer
Ku: plezzzzzzzzzzzzz
Z: I don't know
R: plez didi tell him to stay
K: will u stay with us for launch
Z: smiles) sure
R,Ku: yahoooooooo
R: lets go for launch
K: where do u want to go zaib
Z: anywhere u guys go
R: we always go to the restaurant that is our uncles favorite
Z: uncle
Ku: yes kripa di loves him
K: khushiiiii
Z: laughs) ok lets go

They go for launch and after that zaib leaves.
Z: to him self) so she is just faking it that she still loves angad so she could stay at their home



At kripas home:

They are all eating dinner
K: I found the new singer and its zaib
J: that cool cant wait till I could sing with him
Pt: I guess this show will rock
H: when is the next show
P: in month right
K: yes di
H: call him for dinner tomorrow night
K: why
P: to eat of course
K: he could eat at his own house
P: don't be rude kripa
K: im not
R,Ku: star is coming to our house tomorrow
K: no
H: yes
K: fine whatever
J: why don't u want him to come
K: becz I don't want him to know that I still love him
Pt: what does it go to do by coming to dinner
K: will if he comes he will go around the house and see his room
R: I think didi is afraid he might find uncles pic under her pillow
K: Rahullllllll
R: ops sorry didi
H: u have angads pic under ur pillow
Ku: of course she does..she always says good night to the pic when she sleeps and when she weaks up she kisses iy again and says good morning
K: why u to ( gets up and runs behind rahul and kushi)
Kripa chasses them around the house laughing till they reach their bed room. When they get there all three jump in the bed laughing
R: didi why are u soo cool
K: what do u mean?
Ku: ur not like other aunts who are mean and strike
K: will that's becz I don't want to be mean I want to be cool
R, ku: hugs her) we love u a lot
K: hugs them back) me to
K: apart) wana eat ice cream u guys
R,Ku: screams) yessssssssssssss
K: ok lets go
They sneak in the kitchen so no one will see them.
K: shhhh u guys wait here I will get it so cover for me
R: good luck
K: thanks
Kripa sneaks till she gets to the refrigerator then opens it slowly and gets out a box of ice creams and all three runs to their bedroom. When they reach their bed room they lock the door and gets under the blanket turns on a flash light and dig in the ice cream.

In the morning all three weak up holding their teeth
K,R,Ku: aaaaaaaaa
Harshini, josh,prithvi, priya runs to their bed room
All: what happen
k,ku,R: our tooth hurts
P: what happen to ur tooth
K,Ku,R: we don't know
Josh sees ice cream box that all three are trying to hid behind them self.
J: I think I know what happen to them
ALL: what happen
J: should I tell them
K,R,Ku: noooooooooooooo we didn't eat ice cream
J: I never said that
H,P: oh so u guys eat ice cream
K,R,Ku: their heads down and shaking) noooo
Pt: then what the box doing behind u guys
K,R,Ku: what box there is no box ( trying to hid it)
H: I guess u guys have to go to dentil
K,Ku,R: scared and screams all same time) nooooooooooooooooooo
H: why not
K,Ku,R: we are scared of them
R: yes they take out ur tooth
Ku: and it hurts
K: alotttt
P: will u guys should have think about that before u eat ice cream
R,Ku: it was not our fault didi was the one who forced us to eat
K: what when did I force u to..
They pinch kripa meaning that they don't want to get in trouble and listen to their lecture
K: aaaaaa…. oh yes it was my fault actually the idea was rahuls
R: no it was kushis
Ku: no it was didis and rahuls
K: nooo it was u two who begged me
All shakes their heads and leaves them so they could argue alone
R: yes they are gone
K: fewww that was close
Ku; we almost got caught
K: I think they wont buy ice cream anymore for us
R,ku: its ok u will
K: nice try I wont
R,Ku: making puppy face) u wont
K: don't give me that face
R,Ku: still puppy face
K: fineeeeeeee
Ku,R: yeaaaaaaaaay( hugs kripa and their side that hurt hit each other)
k,R,Ku: holding their teeth again) ouuuuuuuchhhhhhhhh


Few days passes by zaib becomes close to them and always talks to them and makes them believe that he is zaib by telling them lies about his life. But they always listen to him but not believing him no matter how much he tries. They do the show and they become really successful the show rocks. After a week later zaib goes to kripas house and have dinner with them. After dinner they all sit together but kripa and the two devils go to their room playing again. Zaib talks to others and asks them
Z: I want to ask for kripas hand
All shocked
Z: yes I want to marry kripa if u guys allow me
They don't know what to say they look at each other
Pt: we have to ask kripa about this first
Z: smiles) of course..I know it will take time for her to decide and im ok with what ever she wishes there is no forcing
Z: looks at his watch) I must be leaving now
J: plez site for a awhile
Z: oh thank you but I have to go, thank you so much the dinner was delicious…bye
All: bye
Zaib leaves . Kripa hears this and gets really mad. She runs down and tries to go after him but she was to late he left. Kripa goes back in said
Pt: kripa we have to talk to u
K: really mad) never I will never marry him.. What does he think of himself just asking for my hand
P: kripa..some day u have to marry and zaib is a good person
K: I don't want to marry im happy the way I am
H: kripa plez try to understand
K: I don't want to marry and that's final ( leaves to her room)
Rahul and kushi goes to her
R: what's wrong didi
K: smiles) nothing dear
Ku: why where u screaming
K: nothing is wrong that was becz u know me I sometimes like to scream ( laughs)
K: who want to pillow fight
R,Ku: meeeeee
Kripa ignores about what happened and plays with rahul and kushi

Next day kripa goes to zaibs house

Kripa nocks on the door and a maid opens it
K: I would like to see Mr. Zaib
M: plez have a seat he will be down in a mint
The maid leaves and kripa waits for him but he doesn't come down. Zaib wanted her to come to his room so he didn't go down. Kripa was mad and gets even more mad when she waits for him for long time. Kripa gets up and goes to the stairs and to his room. Kripa nocks on the door
Z: come in
Kripa inter the room and zaib smiles
Z: hi
K: mad) I want to talk to u
Z: plez come and sit
K: im not here to sit I just want to say I don't want to marry u get it
Kripa was about to leave. She opens the door but zaib comes from behind and shuts the door and lens on the door
K: open the door
Z: smiles) no I wont
K: really mad) what the hell is this about
Z: I love u
K: mad) I don't now open the door
Z: I wont
Kripa ties to push him and open the door but he just leans at the door and wont move
K: move
Z: nope
K: what do u want
Z: u of course ( starts to walk forward
K: walking backward) don't come close to me
Kripa hit's the wall and zaib puts his hands around her to the wall. Kripa pushes him hard
K: what the hell is wrong with u
Z: u have to marry me
K: what if I don't
Z: u will
K: what makes u think that
Z: smiles evilly) let me see ( he takes a pic from his table) u guys look really cute together u love this two kids a lot
K: what do u mean
Zaib shows her a pic of kripa and rahul and kushi with her
K: takes the pic from his hand) where did u get this
Z: oh I took this pic when u guys whent to the park and were playing
K: looks at him)
Z: I heard that they are ur jaan
K: what do u want to say
Z: u know exactly what im trying to say….if u don't marry me than I guess u will never see them again
K: shocked and yells) what?
Z: smiles and hugs her from behind) u see I want to marry u but u are refusing and no one refuses to me so if u do u will not see them again
K: pushes him) u cant do this
Z: oh yes I could…what makes u think I wont
K: gets teary) angad plez don't they are ur nephew
Z: looks around him) I don't see anyone named angad around here
K: holds from his shirt) stop this..they are just a kid they are ur nephew u cant hurt them
Z: smiles to her) what makes u think I wont
K: I know ur angad stop pretending ur not
Z: hold from her hands and looks in her eyes angry) yes I am angad so what, what if I am
K: why are u doing this
Z: smiles again) im not doing anything kripa..u where the one who started all this…do u know how much I been trough after when u left me and handed me over to Mishti just becz of…just becz of some money…if u wanted money why didn't u ask me I would give u as much as u want….I hate u..(screams)I hate u a lot
Kripa was crying in silent
Z: u don't need to show ur fake cries…u started the game and I will finish it by marrying u and make ur life a living hell
Z: oh one more thing don't think that just becz they are my nephew I wont do anything to them…….u may leave now
K: wipes her tears) u will not do anything to them u get it and I will never marry u
Kripa runs from his house and drives home.
Kripa goes to her room and the rahul and kushi comes to her
R: didi whats wrong
Ku: u seem sad
K: fake smile) no im not I just missed u to a lot
R: can we go to park plezz
K: sights) ok lets go

They where at park and playing.
R: can we buy ice cream plezz didi
K: ok wait here don't go anywhere ok
R,Ku: ok
Kripa goes to the ice cream truck and buys ice cream. When she gets back she cant find rahul and kushi. She starts yelling their name but cant find them anywhere.



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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey, good job! they story is getting very, very interesting. 👏
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WOW...AMAZING PART.............CONTINUE SOOOOOOOOOOOONNNN 👏
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Amazing!!!!!!!! one of the things that make a fanfic interesting, i guess is that the writer updates regularly or frequently and u do that!!!!!!!!!! so bravo for the good work and yeah, plz do continue soon!!!!!!!!!
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thank you guys alot i will cont tomorrow i guess
sorry 😭
thanks again 😛 😉
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Kripa remembers angad's words and gets worried. After looking everywhere she sits down on the bench and holds her face starts crying when someone comes form behind
S: boooooooooooo
Kripa jerks up and gets shocked to see rahul and kushi with him
Kripa falls down in front of them and hugs them tight and continues crying
R: what happen didi
Ku: we are sorry didi we wanted to just play a game
K: apart and wipes her tears) u guys scared me allot
R: got u di
K: evil smile) oh u will see now who will get who
Rahul and kushi runs and kripa after them chasing them laughing.

Kripas cell rings
K: hello
C: hello jaan
K: who is this
C: u forgot my voice so fast impressive
K: angad
A: so u still remember
K: how can I forget ur voice
A: where u scared and thought that I took them (laughs)
K: why did u call
A: nothing jaan just wanted to worn u..u have 2 days to decide than after that I will decide what I want..bye
K: mad) whatever (and hangs up)

At night they are at dinner table
R: mom
H: what dear
R: can we go with our friend to camping
Pt: who is that
H: he is talking about Mr. Raj's family
Pt: oh them yes of course
R: so can we go
H: how long is the trip
R: only 4 days
Pt: ok don't be a trouble
R: I wont dad
Ku: can I to
P: no beta
Ku: plez mom
J: let her go priya
P: she will be homesick and cry
Ku: no I wont..plez mom plez ( puppy face)
P:I guess so
Ku: hugs priya thank you mom
K: u guys are leaving me
R,Ku: we are sorry didi
K: its ok…but in one condition
R,Ku: what?
K: can I have a hug
R,Ku: smiles big) of course ( they run to her and hug her)
After few mints
P: have you decided yet kripa
K: looks angry at all of them and gets up and leaves saying) no no and no for the last time NO I WILL NOT MARRY HIM ( goes to her room)
P: god this girl will never change
J: I will go and talk to her
All: ok
Josh goes to kripas room and opens the door. Sees kripa standing by the window her eyes closed and hugging angad's pic
J: puts his hand on her shoulder
K: still eyes closed) what is it josh
J: thinking) how did she know its me
K: becz I know from ur hands
J: how did you know what I was thinking
K: opens her eyes and smiles facing him) becz u always think the same thing
J: what?
K: joking
J: can I talk to you kripa
K: sure ( both sits on the bed and talk
J: u love him a lot
K: looks at angads pic and smiles) yes
J: then why don't you marry him
K: he hates me and I don't want him to marry me becz he hates me
J: he is not going to hate you for long..some day he will know the truth
K: I don't want him to know the truth
J: why not
K: there is something I want to tell you promise me that you wont tell anyone
J: promise what is it?
Kripa tells josh something and josh gets shocked
J: kr..kripa ( gets teary)
K: smiles) why are you crying it's a good news
J: how can this be a good news
K: I don't want you to face everyone like this.. If you do they will know that something is wrong. ..now cheer up
J: first you tell me something terrible and then tell me to cheer up

Next day:
Kripa was at office and was working on some paper
Someone came in and locked the door behind him
K: with out looking up) what do u want angad
A: u of course
K: go away
A: what if I don't
K: uff..(ignores him and continues his work
Angad walk around her table and stops next to her. He turns her chair and makes her face him. He sits on his knees and smiles.
K: what do u want
A: how many times should I tell u that I only want u and u.
K: tries to get up but angad holds her hand and makes her sit back) leave me
A: how are u jaan? ( leans up to kiss her on cheek)
K: moves her face back so he doesn't kiss her)
A: smiles and kisses her neck)
K: pushes him) stop it
A: why you don't like it
K: looks at him mad)
A: you cant stop me from kissing you anymore...remember when we where together and you asked me not to touch you and I didn't becz I loved you a lot and respected what you asked me. But now I hate you ( holds her hand tighter)n I really hate you a lot ( smiles again) but im sorry becz now I cant listen to what you don't want me to do ( leans up to kisses her cheek and down her neck
K: tries a lot to free her hand but his grips are tight
K: leave me ( starts to push him and free her self)
A: continues to kisses
Kripa doesn't know what to do she just kicks him hard in the stomach with her knees
Angad lets go of her hand and backs up holding his stomach
A: laughs) how long more are u going to try to hit me and escape…you wont be able to save your self that long…( goes nears her and holds her hand and pushes he to the wall)
A: what's going to happen if I rape u
K: looks at him shocked)
A: you don't want me to that do you…so why don't you just let the ego of the money out of your maind and marry me…than like that you could save your izat…oh I forgot ( holds his mouth ) I forgot who know how many guys u slept with…(laughs) you don't have any izat right ( laughs again)
K: really hurt but doesn't show )
K: shuts her eyes and then opens it and smiles) you want to marry me right…lets see whoes life is going to be a living hell..im ready to marry you ( smiles)
A: shocked and surprised that she agreed) very will then…im going to come toyour house tonight to talk about the marrige..bye ( opens the door and shuts it tight and leaves)
Kripa just turns around and puts her head on the window then she remembers something and runs to her car and drives off.
After 10 mints she stops by hospital and goes to the doctor
D: plez have a seat
K: thank you..doctor the reports
D: yes I need to talk to you about that
K: whats on the reports doctor
D: im sorry but on the reports it shows that you…….( u cant hear what they are talking about)
After when they are done talking kripa smiles to doctor
K: than you doctor
D: if you fallow the midicen then it might help
K: can I ask you for a favor
D: sure what can I do for you
K: can you plez don't tell anyone or my family about this..plez doctor
D: ok Ms. Kripa
K: thank you doctor..I will take my leave now
D: take care
K: I will ..thank you again

Kripa leaves back home. Every one was sitting in the living room talking. Kripa goes to them.
K: you guys I have decided that…that Im ready to marry zaib
All: happy) what that's a great news
Pt: how did this happen
K: lies) today at office zaib proposed to me and I said " yes" to him
P:,H: gets up and hugs her) im really happy for u
K: thank you ( they apart)
K: im really tied im going to fresh up…oh and zaib is coming over tonight
All: ok ( they where really happy)
Josh just looked at kripa and didn't say a thing. He knew she was lying. He gets up and goes to her room. Goes to the door and knocks.
K: come in
J: do you have a mint
K: of course common in ( she holds her neck with her left hand
J: why are you holding your neck
K: oh nothing my neck hurts that's why
J: can I see
K: its nothing josh
J: holds her hand and moves it and sees some marks on her neck and around her hand)
J: you cant hid the marks in ur neck form me you know..I saw it down stair and didn't ask and no one notice it to
J: did angad do this
K: puts her head down looking at ground) vo…she tells him what he did to her and what he said to her
J: so u just said you will marry him so u could make his life a living hell
K: I didn't mean it..I just said so he could get mad
J: why do you want him to hurt you
K: becz you know..I want to get punished for what I did
J: kri..( gets cut of)
K: plez don't tell anyone about this
J: sights) I wont
K: thanks jiju

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Amazing part!!!!! wow, there r soooo many things to look forward to: kripa's and zaib's marriage, kripa's medical condition, zaib finally learning the truth.... wow, so plz continue soon, cuz i want to know more and fast!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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gr8 story. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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amazing this story is getting good day by day i cant wait to see what happens next plz cont soon

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