ArHi: A Vivid Array (OS Gall) [Blog Link : Pg 33]

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

wow dat was jus totally amazin luvd it

all da emotions were beautifully discribed

fanx da pm plzz cont soon x

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654772

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

tp say i loved it would be an understatement!

the way you write and weave your story leaves me breathless!

i love the fact that they have such a mature relationship. they seriously need time apart for both of them to figure these things out!

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Aishwarya

@muffins2waffles

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Aanya!🤗

OMG, why didn't you ever told me you wrote stories? And insanely good ones at that! I'm so jealous now, you have this perfect way with words! So so so talented, I'm in love with your writing style <3

The story is sho cute. You're in line with the characters and you also manage to make them adorable. I love how Khushi's all smart and educated and everything, and aw, loved the romance in between. Amazing work! 🤗

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

its such an amazin os...loved it sooo much

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desikalakaar

@desikalakaar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG HI.

This was a piece of art, I'm telling you.

I think that THIS is by a LANDSLIDE your best work so far. The way you got the words in made me feel like it was actually happening.

I don't use too many words in my comments, but you already knew that. But today, seriously. I'm speechless.

Keep the up the great work!

Love,

Kriya <33

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

A splendid OS Aanya!

It was so captivating and beautiful to read.

I loved the subtlety in it with emotions felt, but not expressed.

Simply stunning sugar.

Thanks for the PM.

⭐️

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Hey Aanya!!!!🤗

I finally read the OS!

It was beautiful...the way u expressed their feelings about each other was rally very beautiful & it was so typical of ASR to say that he wouldn't say it again...

But the most beautiful line which made me go awww was this:"the way a new pen would be lying on her desk just when hers was about to finish." this was just super cute.

I just love this one & you would be shocked to know that i have read it 25 times(since my midterms are over i m totally velli)

Awesome work.

keep writing!

Edited by ...Doctor... - 13 years ago

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Aanyaaa :O OMG that was stunning :| so intriguing. I loved this one shot so much , I can't even express it :|

I am lost for words and amazed at how beautifully you've interpreted their emotions and written such a beautiful story.

I love the change you've shown in both the characters and it seems so natural that something like this shall happen. Arnav changed to be a calmer, and more loving person with Khushi in his life and Khushi changed to be a quieter and more reserved person with all the pressure and circumstances that came into her life. I've always felt that Arnav and Khushi's love story isn't the one they'll probably put in words. Even now they probably know the other loves them, but don't find the need to just say it in words. And you've taken that ahead here beautifully.

I almost cried when I read the way you've described all that happened in their life. Amazing :| I loveee it so much .

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MidnightMusings

@MidnightMusings

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#189

I'll make sure to read the OS... Sounds interesting by title😉

And It's you who wrote it... And it's ArHi... That's just a beautiful chocolate cake waiting to eaten..😆

Take Care

Liashna

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: nyxx
Wow! Aanya, how do you do this? Seriously!! I probably could never imagine Arnav and Khushi in circumstances or a situation like this 3 years down the road, but you definitely gave me the vision to exactly not only read, but see and feel them! I found the simplicity and the entire feeling of their relationship just so beautiful! Just like how you said, theyre a mess as individuals, but they made sense together. Youre dialogues once again are superb and spot on and just so relatable. Though they always take me away into this fairytale land, because theyre always so perfect and dream-like, but the way you protray them also make them so realistic at the same time. Perfecto like alwayss! I always knew you could always depict the characters of Armaan and Riddhima wonderfully, but with, Arnav and Khushi, you do wonderss girll! You make their characters stand out, and the way you've expressed their relationship in this OS says it all! I loved how Arnav read to Khushi and then, them pouring out their thoughts and feelings was just so adorablee..and left me quite speechless..especially, with what Arnav said.
But Finally, with this OS, youve once again gave Love a new meaning. Though Arnav and Khushi may not say "I love you" that often, but their care and action towards each other shows it all.

Oh and miss, you MUST start a fanfiction on Arnav and Khushi😳 Am i asking forr too much...yeahh probably, with your school work (Goodluck for that) lol But try 😳

Keep writing awayyy bunnyy 😊 <3

Devuuu <3

Thank You 😳 Pssht. You make me go red in the face :|

I have always felt that Arnav and Khushi don't express their love in words...kind of like the quiet couple; know what I mean? 😆

As for an ArHi FF...nope. Too much padhai atm, can't really start anything new! Maybe after I graduate 🤣

xoxo

Aanya