ArHi: A Vivid Array (OS Gall) [Blog Link : Pg 33]

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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: PurpleRain
P.S I know the comment is super short, compared to the ones I usually give, but you OS is too high for me to even write about it! =P

Excuse banana koi tere se seekhe 🤣 I kid; I forgive you 😆

Love youu <3

xoxo

Aanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

Wow I usually read just ar but man this was awesome! Loved it yaar! Cnt love is soon pleAseee lol

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

Excuse banana koi tere se seekhe 🤣 I kid; I forgive you 😆

Love youu <3

xoxo
Aanya

Nhn, woh excuse nhn hai. . I'm ACTUALLY speechless after reading that! =P

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

brilliantly written...it felt so real and so true to life...really really loved it...pure excellence...thanks for the pm

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nyxx

@nyxx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

Edited my comment on the previous page =)

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ahenseven

@ahenseven

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

Aanya !!!! .. That was a beautifully written os 😊 .. I loved how you've maintained the essence of their romance👍🏼 .. Even though it's three years later it's nice to see that they are still the same in so many ways .. The whole lovey-dovey thing thing does not work for them as well as this does ! Hope you got what I'm trying to say .. Loved it to bits ❤️ .. Loads of love Neha 🤗

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ahenseven

@ahenseven

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

Oh I completely for to add
Her life was no longer black and white; the good and the bad had merged for her a long time ago, turning the threads of her life into a quiet gray.

I loved this line ❤️

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#178

Hey Aanya...Lovely OS...Beautifully written...The way you show ArHi Relationship after three years...Loved it...The way Khushi Express her feeling ...So hesitantly...And Arnav Reply to that...Awwiee Amazing...

" individually they were a mess, but together they made sense"

...I just love this line to the core for some unknown reason...All and all The OS is just a Brilliant piece of work ..Do write more..Thanks for the PM...Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

Edited by sweetdesire - 14 years ago