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Posted: 13 years ago
oh,.goshh.. U stop it in a good point continues it soon can't wait to read...
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was very nice😊
lekin ye kya!rokh diya?!
arre uss shyam ne kya kar diya..kya pee liya khushi ne?!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome ArHilicious Update Mya..!

Totally Loved it and do continue soon pleaseee 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
hai

this is nice
arnav married khusi
and the whole set up is shyam
lovedthe way arnav threatened shyam ji
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey mya

Sorry for the late comment.

But I absolutely loved this part.

I really what shyam is upto now and what will happen to khushi after drinking that stuff.

Waiting for your next update

thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohhh it was hot , sexy amazing and at end a hillarious update !

LOve it so much :)

anc cant wait to knw whats in the drink :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
You Changed Your Username ?! : O 😆 Looks More Stylishhh Hon :] 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyaa awesome update bless ya i had a bit of catchin up to do thanks for the llink though bless ya
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Posted: 13 years ago
very very nice mya
cont soon n others too update😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

so so sorry for nt commenting earlier .. i meant sorry being so late .. was stuck in exams .. but read ur update in the mids of it ... and i totally forgot tht i didnt comment on it .. i was going through ur ff when i noticed tht i forgot to comment .. so sorry about tht and so hear goes my comment ... by the way it was nt bad .. ok ok it was dam good ... read further and u will find out how good it was ... so here goes nothing 😉

Originally posted by: AquaBluez17

Heyy guys!! I know I am really behind in updating !! wow u are aware of tht fact and as i had exams i didnt mind at all i was per-occupied with my own problems.. but i was wondering after leaving at such a happening place in ur last ff how did u think our poor hearts could bear even a single day of lateness😭..stop smiling yaar😉 ..i am crying over here😆 .. Sorry😳😳 - - u are forgiven ..only because u are embrassed 😉 😆.. Just had a huge Spanish project --dont even go there .. i hate projects and if was due to studies the lateness in ur update was ur right and u should even apppologise for it ..and then you all know bout my Chemistry dilemma right?-- i have no idea .. should ask u about it some other time If not then I just hav a bad chemistry teacher so i gotta spend more time doing my Chem work haha😆😆..Well anyway, enough bout me, though I bet you are all just dying to know bout my exciting day!!-- actually i was desperate .. but hun ur ff seems to be more breath taking than u so thanx god u shifted to it straight away ... but would love to know how bad u have been 😉rather mischievous .. Here is the super duper late update. Did I mention it was 5 pages long on Doc?? 😲😃- - wow now tht is great news .. btw the longer the better .. dont mind even if u extend it further 😉 Just saying!!😉😉 Sorry bout the gramatical errors! Did not read over and wrote it late at night so might be a tad off- - where i dont see any 😉

Pms are sent to my people on my buddy list so if you would like one, please add me to your list!!!
-- thanx god i am in ur buddy list or else i might lost track of this fab update in mids of my exams

Part 4-

Recap: Arnav and Khushi are having their suhaag raat 😉 - - liar u always stops at such a happening moments .. u are evil ...

"Hum ne kaha Manglesuta nahi. Matlab ki woh hum'" Khushi started strongly but losing courage as she got closer to explaining her thinking, turning red.-- nt only her even i was red over here .. couldnt help it wild imagination always gets the best of me😉

Arnav watched her turning clumsy and blushing, realizing that she was not saying no to him.- - god how could some one in their right scenes say no to him😉 .. She was just telling him to not remove the necklace he had placed on her himself just a few hours ago. Watching her turning pink and looking away, he thought it would be good to tease her a bit more. - - oh so he is in the mood to play .. for a tease .. he must have looked raggedly handsome with tht smirk of his .. i am a goner ...

the rest was mind blowing and very well written .. i was all red while reading it .. and yaar wht an imagination ... and tht put into words sounded so good 😍...

She had fallen so deep in the tsunami he had thrown at her that she was not able to control herself for a while.- - cant blame her after all the greek god himself is in front of her .. or rather she is in his arms😉 ...

He wanted her, now. And why not? I married her right? She is mine. All mine, he thought decisively. - - this guy keeps on arguing with himself .. come on nt fair .. why keep the poor soul waiting 😉..

"Woh manglesutra apka hai," Khushi told him shyly.

"Kya? Mera hai?" Arnav asked her now completely puzzled. Does she want to keep it on since I bought it? Wait that makes no sense!

"I mean that you put that on me, it is a part of you. A part that I do not want to ever leave me. Not even now, in this moment, " she finally blurted out when she saw confusion cloud in his eyes over her last comment.

- - now tht makes more sense ... kushi is head over heals in love with Arnav ... poor girl she has no idea wht goes on his head .. btw i suppose he himself has no control over his actions and thoughts ..

still watching for any sign by her that would show him that what he was doing was okay, if it was good. - - u have explain it very nicely .. seriously yaar .. u have portrayed how good Arnav is .. a perfect gentlemen ..

Khushi felt his hands sliding off of her and she immediately brought her hands down to stop his. She wanted this, and her silliness was not going to be reason she did not let him have her. He was not even forcing her. She had been taking her time the whole night, while he had just played along. Feeling his intense gaze on her, questioning her if he could proceed, she closed her eyes in approval. - - wow silence speak a thousand words - - She did not need to say anymore since she felt his grip on her tighten, as he brought her head on to his shoulders. His hands went up her back, making her shiver with wanton feelings rising in her. She could not control this anymore. It was too much for her. She succumbed to his touch, his breath, his feel, to him. - - oh god ☺️

It was only him and her, Arnav and his Khushi. - - nothing matter to him and he is calling her his kushi .. nt bad at all ...ye pyar bada ajeeb cheez hai .. u have no control of ur heart sooner or later u will lose control .. it is just a matter of time .. His heart accepted at that moment that it sang for her, smile for her, lived for her, beated for her but this was an unconscious acceptance. - - ok .. even if is an unconscious acceptance it is better than no acceptance at all .. will see how u turn the unconscious acceptance into a conscious one ..

"Main ho nah? Tumhara Bodyguard." - - wow u gave a whole new meaning the the body guard yaar 😉..

yaar everything was going perfectly as planned and the realization had to hit him at the exact moment .. u are too much .. at least he had the decency nt to just leave her there and run out of the room ... u know their should be board wriiten on her heart handle with care .. once broken nt easy to mend .. well will see to how much this hurts her ...

He must be really mad! What did I do now?! Oh no! Now he is going to yell at me on our wedding day! she thought nervously. She walked over to his work table and in her nervousness, drank the drink, in one go, that was on the table not bothering to check the contents of the glass. Placing the glass back down on the table she sat down on the sofa, wondering what was bothering her husband now. - - ok first u stops the romance from turning into the most awaited scene and now this .. i guess it is good tht kushi drank it instead of Arnav ...

Shyam entered his room grinning widely to himself. - - i had to read this line a few times to make sure tht the snake entered his room and nt Arshi room ... i almost had a heart attack ... as u are unpredictable i wont be amazed if u had pull tht stunt .. thank god u didnt .. By now Arnav must have drunk the drink that I had given to Om Prakash to leave in saale shaab's room. He chuckled to himself, patting himself for his own diabolical mind. Now Arnav will not be able to even go near my Khushi, forget touching her. - - kash if he get to know tht it was Arnav who controlled his self and nt kushi .. or rather make him think tht actually they did it .. oh would love to see tht face of his

Well???!! How wuz it ??? -- mind blowing -- I hope you all liked it!!-- loved it -- I am sorry if it was a let down. I know you might want to kill me for the things that happened but Arnav can never be a bad guy in my stories n mind so tada!!⭐️ - - u are right on tht i did feel like killing u .. thanx god u mentioned tht u didnt want Aranv to be bad in ur ff and tht is the reason .. u are forgiven ... I will try my best to be on schedule from now on!! Promise!! Comment and like as always guy!! I love reading you amazing comments!!

P.S.- There is a link to everything I have written and am currently writing in my siggy. Mya's Work. Feel free to check that out if you have time!😳

Here you go Hershi! Hope you like it haha. Do what you always do 😃

ok let me give u an overall comment ... it was a mind blowing update .. i am still blushing as the sence keep on distrubing my once peaceful mind ...

btw i hate u .. u always ends up talking me to cloud nine

and then drops me from their back to earth at the end

and in this process u always ends up breaking my heart

but u know the saddest part is tht i am enjoying it an waiting for another heart breaking update ... full of romance😉 ...

sorry if anything in this comment offended u in any way and hope it isnt too long .. regard it as a treat for my lateness to comment ...

Originally posted by: AquaBluez17



Hey mano!! omg!! your comments always make me soo happy hun!!! luv your comments! SO long and interesting to read! thank you so much for putting in tht much effort !!

I am happy you enjoy my writing style! it is a pleasure to know that ppl actually like my mindless blabble!

thank you soo much for your comments and don't worry they make sense!!!

Mya!


btw thanx for ur recomment dr .. am honored tht u loved it .. and u are mostly welcome .. it was the least i could do .. and another thing .. i think i like it more because it is mindless blabber 😉... and yaar do u think tht i talk anything mindful .. glad u could make sense of wht i talk or rather try to covey ...

so see ya around ...

hope u update soon😉 ...

- - badra

Edited by 143badra - 13 years ago

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