FF-Bodyguard Link 2 New Thread on Pg. 150 - Page 19

Originally posted by: Smileyface

RESERVED!!!

edited!

soumiii loveee <3333333

HEYY =D

yayayayaya im first =D that makes me happy 😃 or a stalker 🤔 hmmm🤣

okie well awesome part..i liked how this had more of khushi and her thoughts...that was great...i loved how u had her described arnav and the pain he was going through...it was amazing and very touching!!! You are really good with portraying emotions and details...like its really easy for the reader to picture it...so kudos to u for that =)

but awww u ended it at a total cliffhanger! lmao! i wanted an Arhi sceneee!! and please update sooner this timeee!!! heheeheh

great job again darling <333

xox

hershi

Hey Hershi!!! I absolutely love your skills and don't mind if they turn a bit stalkerie 😆 See for you I made a new word!! Tht is the extent to which my dedication can go to!😲

aww thanks! Im glad you liked all of the emotions. It would have been strange if they had just gotten on with their Suhaag raat so bamn! n I gotta keep u readers on ur toes eh?? lol!

yes i will update I think I gave you a hint bout this SS so now tht is just making you go crazy I know haha😆

Mya❤️

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Mya!

Nice one hun.

I love the way you've written about Khushi's emotions, feelings, fears and pain. It comes straight through to the reader!

I'm really intrigued as to where her relationship with Arnav is headed.

Thanks for the PM darling and update soon!

😊

Hey Zeba! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it!
Ya I wonder where the relationship is headed too! 😆😆
Your welcome! Will do

Originally posted by: guessimgreat

You seriously write soo well! I have never read Fan fictions, but its like I am reading a beautiful story in bits and pieces!! Keep going!!😍

aww thanks so much! Im glad you liked my writing!

Originally posted by: _mahi_

great update sweetie👏👏.. i loved it😃.. you described khushi's state of mind very well 👏and i loved how she kept looking at him😉.. awesome update⭐️.. keep it up and thanks for the pm😳

Hey mahi! Im glad you liked the update! thanks😳😆

Originally posted by: sweetvidisha

Plzzz..Plzz..Plzzz tell me u will update soon...what a cliffhanger...i cant wait to read what happens next...Khushi thoughts were well written...

aww im glad you liked the update!
sure thing haha

Originally posted by: pinkpearlz

To say this is a nice update is gonna be such an understatement! If am not mistaken, till date, all that i have read of your work this was the best! The way you wrote about khushi being scared for arnav, and all her musings was amazing. Well done dear. Thanks for the pm.

AWW thanks Fareha! you r too sweet hun!😳😆 haha poor girl, you had to plow through all of my horrible writing 😆😆

Now tht is just dedication to Arhi man 😆😃
glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: queenyuks

Lovely update. Im waiting to see what Arnav does

Yuks

Thanks Yuks! Glad to know you read my stuff as well 😆

Originally posted by: areeba123hina

its an awesome update! truly intense emotions are over Khushi! i wish CVs make Khushi a little better than middle class girl in show too! thanx for the PM!

haha true. they make Khushi look a tad dumb. O well 😆
Glad you liked it!!