MG[SS]-The Yellow Dot of Eternal Joy[IMP Note Pg 1 & Pg 72]

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Kesha

@--Kesh--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Jazzy darling... i dont think there is anything left for me to say.. what with that nautanki Shika posting a comment as big as India it self...

But darn you say the story is falling flat... flat my foot (which is actually not flat at all 😆)... its got even more intriguing. As for the suspense of Sunday.. I have some thoughts about that day... but will wait for the story to move forward instead of revealing them here.

Waiting for the next part eagerly...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#162

part 4
u r evil do u know that dear...
God the suspense is killing...
who is Nanhi and the yellow girl all making so curious that i bang my head when u still dont reveal it...
Sameera hmm interesting...
cont soon dear...
the story is going good dear and the curiosity absolutely kills...
keep going...

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

i em really reading all the parts again..

i em confused so much...

but i luv ds confusion yaar..just brilliant..

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#164

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

i never thought sameera would b the little handa

and they seems to share a special bond

but i want to know more about the yellow dot

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Saba

@Eccentric.Being

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Hey Jazz,

Loving the story style.

Strange, wherever Maan goes, his path crosses with yellow dot but with distance that still has him deprived of facial recognition.

Maan was worried & jealous though he was incognizant of reason.

Sameer can be the youngest of lot but I believe, she is not Nanhi or Maan would have never acted the way he did with her.

whatever Sameera's big plan is, it is taking it's toll on Maan but still he is following it, wondering why is that?

Please continue Soon.

Edited by serenelove - 13 years ago

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

So Geet is playing cupid/agony aunt for arjun...but where did Sameera come from? Don't tell me Geet is someone who Maan already knows - nahiii...Jazzu this is getting so interesting!!