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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
omg that was a painful update...
i had to close my eyes to refrain from reading some parts...
i feel some foul play by sameera and some one else...
waiting for the next eagerly...
pl cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Hey guys,
First of all, Thank you to all you lovely people for taking time and commenting on my FF. It really means a lot to me 😊
Secondly, I am really dumb at using IF and it took me so many days to figure out how to quote your comments as I access IF on my mobile most of the time and it behaves really stupid on my cell as it doesnt allow me to comment. So I am really sorry for not replying to you 😊
I will try to update it before my tests as I wont be able to update that week. I hope you guys dont mind 😊
Do read my other works as well and post your valuable comments on them as well, so that I atleast know that my work is being appreciated 😊 It means a lot to me because I am a 12 std student and even though I am hell busy with my never ending studies, I come to give updates. So if you comment then your words of appreciation really makes me feel tremendously happy 😊
Love,
Radhika 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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no worries ... i understand coz even i use IF on my mobile most of d times .. take ur time ...

all d best 4 ur exams ...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello! Beautiful people! Ready for another sad update? Hae hae😭...mujhse aap log to itna ghussa hogaye ki pichli update keliye mujhe sirf 16 likes hi mila...koi baat nahi 😊 main samajh sakti hoon. Maaneet ko koi dukh mein dekh nahi sakta aur to aur unhe dukhe imagine bhi nahi kar sakte. But maine plot shuru kardiya to khatam to karna padega na. Meri khushi keliye please like karke comment kardo jee! Kya pata main khush hokar kuch achcha news dedo next update mein 😆 Puh-leaze! 😈 😉
And those who liked and commented, BIG BIG THANK YOU and A GREAT HUG 🤗 Thank you people...Love U 😊
Here you go another update...its a small one so pleaje joote mat maarna...😆

CHAPTER 4

Tanhayee...


Tanhayee..tanhayee...

Dil ke raaste mein kaisi thokar maine khayi...

toote khwaab saare ek mayoon si hai chayi...

har khushi so gayi...zindagi kho gayi...

tumko jo pyaar kiya maine to saza mein paayi... tanhayee...

tanhayee... tanhayee...milo hai phaili hui... tanhayee...

Tanhayee...tanhayee...milo hai phaili hui... tanhayee...

His eyes were blank, with nothing except tears coming out of them. No happiness, no excitement...he was lifeless...as he stared out of the window of the car, trying to find his Geet...

Khwaab mein dekha tha ek aanchal maine apne haatho mein...

Ab toote sapno ke sheeshe chubte hai in aankhon mein...

Khwaab mein dekha tha ek aanchal maine apne haatho mein...

Ab toote sapno ke sheeshe chubte hai in aankhon mein...

Kal koi tha yahi... ab koi bhi nahi...

Banke naagin jaise hai saason mein lehraayi...

Tanhayee...tanhayee...

Palkon pe kitne aansoon hai layee...

Tanhayee...tanhayee...

Palkon pe kitne aansoon hai layee...

He tried to feel her, to sense her in the air around him...he called her, requested her but it was no use...his Geet hadn't come in front of him, to hug him, to console him, to vanish all the pain from him'she still hadn't...

Kyun aisi ummeed ki maine jo aise na kaam hui...

Door banayithi manzil to raste main hi shaam hui...

Kyun aisi ummeed ki maine jo aise na kaam hui...

Door banayithi manzil to raste main hi shaam hui...

Ab kaha jao main...

Kisko samjhao main...

Kya maine chaha tha aur kyun kismat mein aayi...

Please come back! Geet please come back to me!!

Tanhayee...tanhayee...

Jaise andhero ki ho gehraahi...

Dil ke raaste mein kaisi thokar maine khayi...

Toote khwaab saare ek mayoon si hai chayi...

Har khushi so gayi...zindagi kho gayi...

Tumko jo pyaar kiya maine to saza mein paayi tanhayee...

Tanhayee... tanhaye...milo hai phaili hui...tanhayee...

Tanhayee...tanhayee...milo hai phaili hui tanhayee...

Tanhayee...tanhayee... tanhayee... tanhayee...

***

Nandini was waiting for them to come. She was extremely tensed. Dev had informed her about his conversation with the inspector. Just then Nakul came and asked 'memsaab, mein khane keliye kya banao.'

'Tum ek kaam karo Nakul,aaj jijaji ki pasand ki kuch banao, waise bhi unhone do din se kuch khaye nahi.'

'Par usse koi faayda nahi hoga memsaab. Jab tak is ghar ki jaan wapas nahi aati, tab tak Maan sir kuch nahi khayenge. Aap un dono ki zindagi ki poori kahani nahi jaante memsaab. Maan sir aur Geet memsaab ne pata nahi kitni musibato ka saamna kiya undono ki prem kahani ko kamyaab banana keliye. Maan sir Geet memsaab se apne jaan se bhi zyaada pyaar karte hai aur woh unke bina khana to kya, koi kaam nahi karte. Maan sir keliye unke din Geet memsaab se shuru hoti aur unke raat Geet memsaab se khatam. Unke liye Geet memsaab sab kuch hai. Ek pal nahi rehsakte unke bina. Jab Geet memsaab aayenge tab woh apne aap theek hojayenge aur khana bhi kahyenge.'

'Par didi to wapas nahi aanewali. Woh to hum sab ko chod kar, is duniye se door chali gayi hai.'

'Aap yeh maan sakte hai ki Geet memsaab ab is duniya mein nahi hai par main yeh baat kabhi nahi maanoonga. Jab Maan sir iss baat pe vishwaas nahi karte to main bhi nahi karoonga. Mujhe Maan sir ki baato par pura yakeen hai aur agar woh kehrahe ki Geet memsaab abhi bhi zinda hai to Geet memsaab zinda hogi.'

'Saare pyaar karne wale yahi kehte hai Nakul lekin duniya aise nahi chalti. Jijaji ko yeh baat accept karne mein zyaada waqt lag sakta hai lekin sach to yahi hai ki Geet didi ab wapas nahi aasakti. Unhe babaji humse cheen liya' said Nandini, crying.

'Memsaab aap abhi bhi Maan sir ke pyaar ko nahi jaante. Aap ne kuch nahi dekha hai. Undono ko koi alag nahi kar sakta, babaji bhi nahi. Geet memsaab ko Maan sir se koi juda nahi kar sakta. Mujhe Maan sir pe pura bharosa hai aur main un dono ki prem kahaani par apne jaan se bhi zyaada vishwaas karta hoon. Bohot din se main Maan sir keliye kaam karta hoon. Aur main unhe jaanta hoon, hamare Geet memsaab wapas zaroor aayenge, aap dekh lena memsaab, aapko pata chalega Maan sir ke pyaar ki taakat' Nakul replied and went inside the kitchen, leaving behind a deeply in thought Nandini.

He slowly walked inside the mansion without any sense of the things around him. Everyone had broken his trust today. Nobody believes that his Geet is alive. But he wont accept it. He just couldn't accept it. He could never accept defeat and if he gives in to this lie then it would be a dishonor to his undying, divine and pure love. No! His Geet is not dead. She just couldn't be dead. He slowly sat on the couch and closed his eyes remembering her and feeling her in every particle of the air. Nakul came out of the kitchen and knelt down beside Maan and said 'main vishwaas karta hoon Maan sir, hamare Geet memsaab ko aapse door koi nahi kar sakta. Main vishwaas karta hoon Maan sir ki Geet memsaab abhi bhi zinda hai.'

Maan felt a deep respect for Nakul and his eyes thanked Nakul for the respect and belief he had for him. Dev and Daadi came inside, looking deeply hurt and guilty. Nandini approached them and asked 'Geet didi ka kuch pata chala?'

'Woh dono bodies mein koi Geet ki nahi thi. Bro abhi bhi vishwaas nahi karte ki Geet'' replied Dev and he looked over to Maan who was sitting on the couch with his eyes closed. 'Par agar Geet didi zinda hai to woh ghar kyun nahi aarahi?' asked Nandini.

'Pata nahi'par main aur Daadi bro ko convince nahi kar sakte. Agar woh kehte hai ki Geet zinda hai to shayad'' replied Dev but abruptly stopped as he saw someone entering the mansion. She was strangely familiar. Then he realized who that was. IT WAS SAMEERA!

PRECAP:

Just chill Dev!

Chapter 5

Edited by bharadwajrad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

superb the faith nakul has on maan is just awsome u have shown in ur ff that hw much nakul has respect n faith on maan cv are always neglecting this kind of scenes u r too good hats off to dear giving nakul character this much imp which is necessary its too too good n for sameera that means of geet is conecting with sameera i hope maan find his geet soon eagerly waiting for maaneet milan pls update next part soon

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Awesome part👏.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
luvd it...
wat sam doing dere?
nakul's character has been given a good importance..i luvd dat..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sakshi04

superb the faith nakul has on maan is just awsome u have shown in ur ff that hw much nakul has respect n faith on maan cv are always neglecting this kind of scenes u r too good hats off to dear giving nakul character this much imp which is necessary its too too good n for sameera that means of geet is conecting with sameera i hope maan find his geet soon eagerly waiting for maaneet milan pls update next part soon

Thank you so much dear 😊 Really glad u like it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Wonderful update...loved it...
eagerly waiting to know what sameera is up to
please continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Very sad but beautiful part! The trust that Nakul has on Maan and Geet's love is mindblowing!

Sameera entering the mansion... OMG!!

Has she done something to Geet??

Update soon, please! :)

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