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renjini263

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Awesome update..."Why only face I will show you everything just say you will be mine forever"🤣Luvd it...Plz continue soon...nd thanx 4 pm

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Nitya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: sur001

Thanks dear...

Defo cook will do that but Sid will be two steps ahead

luks intresting ...

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Ziva01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Sorry for coming late my princess. Sur jaanu what an awesome update love every bit of it👏❤️.

The turban part was just too good🤣

Precap is interesting

Plzzz update soon thxs for the pm love ya🤗

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sur001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Trisha4evr
Superb..lmao...:D sid opps i mean naz n maan convo was just lol..n d servent hehe..thnku 4 pm..

Thanks I feel they can make a great couple 😆

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sur001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: shalinisaran89
ha ha ye maan toh naya hai

ha ha Maan kaisa bhi ho line pe toh Geet hi layegi

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sur001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: t_areeb
hhahaaa
naz ...

that sid know how to get rid of maan

waiting for geet

true yaar ...benefit of being his close friend..
Geet will make her entry soon

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freya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

nice part

very humurus

thanx for pm

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

frnd...😉...

4 Pming Me...😛

4 ur new thread...🥳..

👍🏼4 ur

updates.👏👏👏..

me dear...😃..

really dear..😛

lots of hugs n kisses 4 u...🤗...

lov,❤️

Tama

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sur001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Thanks to all of you dear frirnds for liking and commenting...😊

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sur001

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Hey...Thank you so much friends for liking and commenting...
I have added few more characters ...Do have a look on CS...Here is the link

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/47724039

Chapter-3

Three girls run towards Dr.Ashutosh's cabin..

Nidhi"Geet tu mujhe pakka marwayegi..I myself a doctor but you are taking me to Dr.Ashutosh's cabin for this small cut"

Geet"Oye teri lovestory aage toh badhani padegi na...without pushing you will not move even an inch"

Nivi"If Bhai will come to know then"

Geet "chup kar..Ashu bhai ko mai dekh lungi"

Geet knocks on his door...They enter after getting permission

Geet"Ashu bhai..see Nidhi is hurt"

A man in his middle thirties turns with a welcoming smile...

Ashu"Geet ,where is Dr.Nidhi?"

Geet turns and find Nivi and Nidhi were not there..She excused herself and almost dragged Nidhi to cabin

Geet"dekhiye na kitna khoon beh raha hai"...showed Nidhi's finger to him

Ashu couldn't help smiling on seeing a small cut on Nidhi's index finger..hardly two drops blood would have been dropped

Ashu sarcastically"yes I can see that..its bleeding too much..we will have to admit Dr.Nidhi"

Nivi widens her eyes"Really bhaiya"

Geet"Kya bhai you are becoming sarcastic..see this wound from heart then only you can see..now do her treatment"

Dr.Ashutosh looks at Nidhi who was staring at him and says"Any problem Dr.Nidhi?"

Nidhi gets embarrassed"No prolbem..I mean problem sir"

Ashu"Great..then sister Gayatri will see the wound"

Nidhi nods..but Geet interrupts"Bhai we came to your cabin you will see her ..she pushes Nidhi making her bump into Ashu..Geet pulls Nivi out ..Dr.Ashutosh indicates Nidhi to sit on couch and he sits on nearby couch..when he takes Nidhi's hand in his..their eyes met and the time paused for them unaware of Geet and Nivi peeping in

Geet"Bol manti hai ki nahi..teri nazar me bhi koi hai to bata de"

Nivi"After he ditched me ..no chance"

Geet winks"let it be..now segment two..lets get in"

Geet breaks their eyelock by clearing her throat and said"Bhai if you want you can hold her hand forever"

Dr.Ashutosh left Nidhi's hand..They stood embarrassed

Geet"Arrey I was joking..Accha bhai we will leave you with your love"

Ashutosh"What?.."

Geet"Nidhi (Ashutosh looks at her )..Nidhi (stressing on her name) chal na Ashu bhai ko inke pyaar inke work ke saath chor dete hai..Bhai why are you looking at me like this"

Ashutosh had nothing to say..the girls turned to leave

Ashutosh"Nivi..you stay I want to talk to you"

Geet "Okay Nidhi..will see ya later"

Ashu"I have told Nivi..Nivedita my sister to wait"

Geet "But we heard Nidhi"

Ashu"Will talk to you in home"

Geet interrupted again"In Nidhi's home or yours"

Ashutosh"Geet..go before I ground Nivi for whole week in the house"

Geet"going na..dhamki kyoun dete hain"

When They were leaving Geet started singing"Haule haule ho jayega pyaar jattiya ..haule ho jayega pyaar"

Outside

Nidhi"What was that?"

Geet"I had seen this in a movie sio thought to check if it works and it did work..Congrats he loves you..Nivi you got your bhabhi"

Nidhi smiles"You continue my drama queen, I am leaving..bye" She left ..

Nivi"Geet..Why you encourage Nidhi?..you know the difference between their age... though Bhai loves him he wont ever accept it"

Geet"See Nivi..I don't understand this age funda..Nidhi loves ashu bhai and he too then we should help them ..and I don't care what world says as that's their work and champ why are you leaving for US?"

Nivi"I don't want to be here anymore"

Geet"just because of that moron Khurana"

Nivi" leave na...lets go we are getting late "

Geet"paanch minute me kya ho jayega yaar"

Scene freezes and shifts to Maan entering in office and saw an employee coming late

Maan "you are late"

Employee"Sir ,I am late by one minute only"

Maan"should I throw a party for that?..you know in one minute everything can be destroyed..in one minute I can fire you from your job..its first and last warning and dont ever say Sorry to Maan Singh Khurana otherwise you will be sorry for your whole life"

In his cabin

Maan"Adi where is my secretary?"

Adi"sir ,she is on leave"

Maan"Which idiot granted her leave"

Adi"I sir.."

Maan"Great..can I know why?"

Adi" his boyfriernd is not well"

Maan"call her"

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Maan"Secratry..you decide you can get another bf more easily or another job"

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