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Posted: 13 years ago
PART-30

Hai friends,

Thank you all for your support .Special thanks for my friends who clicked like buttons and commented my updates.. Please encouraging me in the same way'😊I love you all.😉.

I'm going down to kc..u lock n come there..

dev gave the key n went down…

Dev went insearch of meera…meera was no where in office..

This meera …what will I do with her…

Dev entered maans cabin..he was looking at some file with adi..

Where is meera..adi..

Wo..dev sir..she left a message for u…she asked u to meet her in rosy boutigue..ur fianc will also b waiting for u there..he said giving a cheeky smile..

Oh..shit..i forgot..they are doing purchase.for engagement ..

Dev ..u can go n join them..

Thanks bro..he went away..

Geet came n took her bag.she has totally forgot to call rajji..how she was..ok now I'm going to house only..i'll take care of her ..

adi walked out n She entered mans cabin ..

sir,ur key..

hmm..

now they were alone n maan remembered the morning kiss…he was unable to speak..i too behaved so low..when,I've no rights on her..

but geet was blushing remembering their intimacy..she shoved her thoughts..no geet..dont think about that..it was a wrong moment..

the moment was interrupted by the reception call…

geet as maans secretary attended the call…

hello..

geet…

haan bolo pinky

rajji wants to talk to u…looks like she is scared…talk to her..i'm connecting the line.

One min..pinky..

Maan sir..rajji wants to talk 2 me…she had temperature in morning..shall I attend the call…

He nodded yes..

Ok..pinky..connect the line..

Diiidiii…….

Geet heared Raji screaming..

Raji..raji..what happened why are u screaming like this…

Then he heared some boys laughing sounds…

Diiidiii….chod..chod muje…my dupatta…nooo…..

Rajjjiii….

Maan neared her..he too heared rajjis scream…he know something is wrong…he turned the phone to speaker mode…so,that he can also hear it…

The boys took the phone from rajji…

Hai beautiful

You..you…

Yes..i.i…I warned u..now pay back time…we are going to have our time with….

Nooo..leave my sister…she did nothing..i only slapped u..if u want to punish,then punish me..leave her..she panicked..

Ok..we have now removed only her dupatta..if u want ur sister safe,then come to the play ground near our area…alone…Don't act smart..by going to police..if u did so,u will find her dead..or..

Maan was about to shout at them,when he heared that they will go 2 any extent to harm rajji,he remained mum..

Nooo…I'll come…

In 10 min…

How can i..it will take 15 min from my off..

I don't know..how u will make it…if u r late..i'll remove her dress one by one for every min…the boys laughed…they tickled rajji .n rajji cried..

Ok…

Before she keeps the phone,maan dragged her out of the cabin n pushed her inside the car…he did not even wait for ramu kaka to drive.he himself drove fast….he ordered his securities to follow him n ramu accompanied them…maan broke all the rules of signals n drove fast…geet was in a state of shock….what is waiting for there..she cant imagine…she was continuosly praying..babaji,meri rajji ki raksha karna…

Geet…

…..

Geet..

…maan shook her shoulders…

He gave her the blue tooth…nothing will happen to her..

Sir,if they sees u…

No...u will go inside..i'll wait out…n thru blue tooth I'll hear everything..when I know u both are safe I'll handle the situation…be brave..like u were in ramnaths office..

But…I cant…bcoz..here it is rajji..n i..

Shhh…I'm here…

He stopped a little distance away from the playground…

How many will be there..

4 or 5..

Now go..only a min left..

Hearing it…she started to run towards the ground like a maniac….a boy was at the entrance…he opened the gate n let her in..n the boy also followed her.…maan noticed it..his securities n ramu reached there..maan said he is going there n if he calls they will enter the ground..n they agreed..maan removed his coat n tie n threw it inside his car..he removed his collar buttons..he looked like a normal person in formals..he walked slowly tooking slow steps..n talking to geet via blue tooth..

Geet..

Hmm..

can u hear meHmm..

Have u neared them..

Hmm.

She saw rajji glued to a tree sitting there hugging her knees n crying bitterly..the boys gang were standing around her enjoying their drinks..rajjis dupatta was around one of the boys neck..the sight wrenched her heart…

Rajji…geet uttered meekly...while she was panting heavily ..

Didi…

Hay…beautiful…u r in time…

Let her go..

The boy grabbed rajji 's hand n neared her..rajji was crossing her hands on her front..

We have not yet done with u..how can we let her go..she is our trump card..

He tried to hold rajji more close…

Wo bachi hai…chod usei…..

bachi hai..he looked at rajjis curves lagtha tho nehGeet pushed him..n rajji came n hide herself behind geet…

Geet removed her dupatta n placed on her …rajji..run from here..i'll look after them..

No didi..i'll not go leaving u alone..

Meri kasam hai….jao….geet pushed her to go..n rajji started to run..n geet too tried to follow her…but the boys grabbed her by waist..

dont try to escape baby..he pushed her ..n geet fell on the ground..

The boys were hell angry with geet now…n geet now without her dupatta was driving them more insane…

Its ok boys…we want this girl only…saying this he tore her back of kurti making her back visible..

Nooo…she screamed…

Rajji came out running…maan caught her…

Jiju…save di..

Say onething…do they have weapons

No..

Ok go..to ramu kaka…I'll get ur di..

Maan went inside..

Rajji came to the car…ramu kaka seeing geeets dupatta on her guessed what could have she gone thru..he made her sit inside the car n gave water to drink..

Rajji sobbed didi..

Maan sir has gone beta…ur di will be fine..dont worry…

Rajji was shivering in fear..n fever…

Maan entered the ground without making noise..he could hear geets cry..he moved from one tree to another..he saw the boys in a round..at centre was geet with her bare back n the boys were trying to humilate her more..maan could not bare it..he jumped on them n punched them harder..geet ran n stood behind a tree..maan called his securities..they arrived n all had a fight..one of the boy,moved to the tree where geet was hiding….

Maan looked around..the guys were running n his securities ran behind them to catch..

Boy 1 shouted at that boy…u also escape yaar..

Maan looked at the direction to whom he was speaking..

He heared the boy,..u will never forget us…this is a lesson for u…

Maan tried to catch him..but the boy jumped over the compound n escaped…maan turned back..he saw geet sobbing..she was sitting between the trunks of tree hugging her knees…her face was dipped in her knees…

Maan came near her..

Geet..

She clinged more to the tree..but did not look at him..

Geet..

for his every step geet glued more to the tree..

geet..maan called few more times n geet did not move from her place nor lifted her head…but she did not stop crying..maan got pissed off..he made her stand forcefully facing him…but, when he saw her,he stood there shocked..

Precap:…????😲

18.2.2012..3.20pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: muraadlovesdd

😡di i guss ur twist

i know maan aur geet ki sr aur maan sochega he is with meer
plz big nooo
meer samj ki kiss buht kiya hai but sr no plz
i want their sr jahan maan janta ho ke vo geet ke saath hai
yahan meera vahan anjali muje pagal kar diya hai
i hate this maan i hate geetanjali's maan
but i love u me aur vala maan
at the end i m mad😆 don't mind
love u so much

thanks for ur love n hate..lol..😆
how is the twist..unexpectedna..
ur guess ...sry ...no sr...now...
i'll not make them feel so low of themselves easily...lol..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was really a twist!!!!! totally unexpected...

and by the way... its not fair valli to leave such a big cliff hanger... ek aur update tho banta hai yaar...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update please continue soon
Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
precap ia scary
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Posted: 13 years ago

plz dont tell me ... boy 1 throw acid on geet face?😭 agar asaw hai tu plzzz dont do that yeh... ff phela hi bohat emotional hai...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear
dont leave us near this big cliff hanger
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome superb update dear...

really loved it...one of my favourites...

i really eagerly used to wait fr all ur ffs update...today whn i saw dis update i cant believe my eyes...i m sooo happy...i cant express...

dis is a twist...wht happened to geet...im really scared wht have dey done...plz not anything bad...plz god plz...

thank u fr such a lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

hw's ur back pain...i think u r fine nw...tk cr...

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