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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks for the following members who liked the last part n thanks for all who gave me their precious comments..
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guys...i'm not going to stop writing...jab aap sab meri writing torture kosehnekeliye tayyar ho..phir mein kyun rukungi..lol..
i'll keep alive maneet in the form of ffs..its a promise to all my readers..n always my leads will be maan n geet only..
Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART-13

Hai friends,

Thank you all for your support .Special thanks for my friends who clicked like buttons and commented my updates.. Please encouraging me in the same way'😊I love you all.😉.sry guys,I made you all wait for a long time...thanks for baring me😆

I was totally numb as geet ended..it took really a long time to believe..but we will be here making maneet alive in our hearts through our sweet ff tortures..hope you guys dont mind it..

Geet was shocked n so was dev n meera..the three don't know how to react other than staring at each other...the first to react was geet'she tried to get up ,moving maan from her lap..
Meer, let me sleep..don't snatch my pillow.😆.he mumbled in sleep'geet was feeling embaressed..😳
dev n meera understood now,what is going on'they both bursted into laugh..
pillow'geet'you'ye maan bhi na'.meera again laughed'
maan woke up hearing their laugh..it took a long time to realize for him,he was sleeping in geets lap'thinking her as a pillow'
he got confused as he remembered kissing..
who am I kissing'was it a dream or I was reallykissing ..if it is real..then oh no..only geet was with me.. did i kissed.geet'did I mis behaved with her..how can I ?if it was geet she must have shouted at me.or she must have complained to meer...he looked at her..
she was looking at the ground..she was quiet,but a little embarrassed..
I am sorry geet..i don't remember..how I fell asleep in y..ou..i'm extremely sorry'he felt really guilty..
Its ok sir'you were so tired..but..i'm also ..meera dont want them to be more embarressed..so she changed the topic..
If you both talk like this,we will be late for the party..dadi will be waiting for us'
Then only maan remembered,they have to leave for party'.
What are you both doing here?
Bro'we were waiting for u for a long time'we called you..but u did not take ur phone'then we called geet..her sis took n she said..she has not yet arrived n the cell is with her..then we called the office number..noone picked it..then we called the driver'he only said,you are still inside n about the power cut also..we thought something fishy..so,we both came here..
Someone met with an accident in transformer n our securities'to fill diesel in generator,the fools filled water'so it took a long time for us to activate the generator
Hum sochrahi the you will be worried about us,that we will be worried about you..but'janab..aap tho..yese sorahi thi jese rajkumar..apni bistarpe sorahi ho'how can you sleep like this bro'n too in a floor'


Patha nehi dev ..i don't know how I slept..n I forgot my phone in cabin..lets go its already late'
Geet ..tum car lekar jao..aur jaldi thayar hokar aana..
Mam..i'm not coming..rajji will be alone at night..
Hmm'yek kam karthei hein..we will take rajji also there..
But mam'
ab kya'
wo party ka theme Indian n white'
tho..i know..c we both are wearing white only..(meera was in white chudi n dev was in white suit)
I don't have ..
Ab samji'

She gave the phone to geet..call raji n tell her to get ready..
Lets go to office'geet tum bhi..
But why..
I'll tell..apka phone bhi tho lena hai..
they entered the lift n went upstairs..
Maan was still thinking to get ,what happened between them..he could not think straightly'his unconscious mind said that he did something wrong' the way geet is behaving normally was offending his thought..that he did not do anything other than sleeping in her lap'
They reached their office..
Meer n dev was walking in front..maan n geet were taking small steps
Geet..
Yes sir'
..say me..did I misbehaved with you..i'm feeling restless'guilty...i don't remember what I've done to you'you only can take me out of this guilt'say me geet'did i'
Geets ST:How can I say you the truth sir..without knowing if you feel restless..then after knowing the truth..you will never forgive yourself..i'll not let you in trouble sir..
No..sir'nothing happened..you cannot do anything wrong that your heart accept..
She said this without looking at him..
Though his heart doesn't believe in what geet is saying,He felt a relief'
Thank you geet'

meer gave geet a bag which she was having with her..
Whats this mam..
White sari..
Par..
I thought of changing in their house'but now this will be useful for you'go n change'
But mam'I don't know to wear sari'
dont give me excuses.Teek hai..i'll help you'first I'll help maan'
Ji mam..

She took the packet n went to her cabin'
Maan was a silent viewer there..
Dev tell dadi to pick up rajji n go to the party..we will go directly from here..
Ok meer'
He went outside '
Maan.i've brought your dress also..she started to remove his shirt n vest..geet was looking at them through the blinds..
They both are perfect for each other..but her throat dried when she saw him bare..
She remembered the day,when she fell on him,when he was bare like this..her mind n her night dreams was filled with his thoughts from that day only..
Meera unbuckled his belt..geet felt a needle inside her heart..yes..i'm feeling jealous'but,I'll not become a problem for their relation..i'll divert my mind from him..
Meer,I'll change myself.you go..
Meera looked at him ..it was not his usual tone'he looked confused..
Are you sure..
I want to frsh up..then I'll change..
Ok..as you wish..maan left to the washroom in his cabin n meera entered her cabin to help geet.geet was feeling relaxed ,when maan stopped meer..she was still lost in his thoughts..
Geet..what are you doing..atleast,you must have changed to skirt n blouse..
Wo..mei..
Get ready fast..
Yes mam..

Geet took her dupatta n salwar ..she changed to skirt..
She hesitated to remove her kurti..
I'm also a girl only geet'if you feel so shy,then I'll turn..
While meera turned facing the wall..geet was facing maans cabin..she took her kurti..she was in her inner..she took the blouse to wear..the front was ok.but,it has no sleeves n was backless with two strings..she cannot wear it over the inner also..
Mam..it is very small'
Meera turned to her..
Only for few hrs..geet..you remove ur inner n wear the blouse..
But,mam..
You will look gorgeous n sexy too..she winked..
I don't want to be exposed n noticed by all..
Oh geet..for once try it geet..if you feel uncomfortable we will change..sometimes we have to do things that our heart doesn't accept also..like now .
.she chuckled n the next minute she undid geets bra hook '
Maamm'geet held it close before it fall from her shoulder..
Geet try the blouse..or..i'll..force you more'do you want me to make you wear it..she giggled..
Nnooo..i'll wear..
That's gud..i'm turning now..change soon..
Geet covered herself with her hands n took oneside of her inner n wore the blouse..the same way she did the other..she tied the strings..
Mam..sari..
Hummm..

Meera helped her in wearing sari.both did not realize maan was watching them for a long time..he even saw geet changing as she was facing him..maan was totally lost in her beauty after seeing her half exposed'ST:she has perfect curves n her skin is milky...he was breathing heavily n he had an urge of touching her'it was really hard for him to remove his eyes from her..he left his cabin after getting ready..
Meera n geet came to wards maan n dev..geet has left her hair open to cover her back..
Maan was drooling her'she could feel his gaze over her..she blushed..but controlled it..
dev complemented'
geet'this sari suits you than this donkey..
dev..what did u say..repeat..
golden words will not be repeated meer..
u said me donkey'
oops sry..i must not have said like that'
yes..
I must have said a beautiful donkey..
Dev..

Geet giggled..maan was unable to take his eyes from her..she looks like a goddess of beauty in that white sari...her thin silky hands..he was feeling something in his stomach as he has never experienced before..geets laugh made maan come to reality..
If you both have finished your cat fight shall we go..
Ummm..i feel hungry now itself..
Yes bro..if we don't reach soon this donkey will eat files ,papers n clothes'
Meera gave him a slap on his back..
Omg..my bones have broken..bro..you better divorce this donkey..marry a beautiful girl like geet'atleast she will give me respect as a devar'n she will not break my bones..
He said it in a dramatical way..The surrounding came to a silence..
Dev,behave yourself..you are not a kid anymore..bolnese pehle socha karo'
Cool bro..i was kidding..sry..sry..
The entire ride to the party was silent..

(what happened in party..i'll tell in next part..)
at night..
Maan was having a mixed feeling towards geet...whenever he closes his eyes geet was there..he cannot come out of it..he need to get out..he looked at his side..meer came near n slided near him..
gud night maan..
gud night sexy..but not so soon..
he made his mind to distract being with meer..he thought may be we have been not together for a long time at night .so,i'm getting this strange urge towards geet..
he started kissing meer..that kiss reminded only geets kiss that day in office...he was burning inside..
maan..pls..i'm tired..
not today meer..he felt like he was pleading ..he want to get rid out of geets thought..
he removed her dress..he bent to her curves..that reminded only geet changing her blouse in office..
he tried very much not to think about geet..it all went in vein..
meer was not responding his touch or kiss..that added fuel to him..
meer..
pls maan she was trying to wear again her night dress..but,maan did not let her do it.,.they both struggled at each other..atlast the night dress was torn..
maan..what are you trying to do...cant you hear i'm not ready.i'm tired..i dont want to be a doll to be with you at bed...meer shouted from her lungs..
maan felt hurted..rejected by his own wife was painful..he cant split the beans what he is going through..and here she is not accepting his need...nor trying to understand his fear..
and his male ego raised there..
What do you think of yourself meer...you are so beautiful.gorgeous..sexy...miss world..that i'm after you always...how dare you.if i want i can get girls for a night..daily...do you ever thought...how many days have passed we have spent a night together...you have changed meer..you are not like before..you are not like my friend as you are before we were in college..you are avoiding me nowadays...if you think i'm nearing you only for your body..ok..then..i'll not touch you from now..thats a promise...
he left the room in anger..
Meer fell on her stomach at bed..she started to cry..
sry maan..for insulting you..i never meant those words...
SHe rememembered his words..
you are not like my friend as you are before...
Yes maan...today you said the truth in anger...you never thought me as your wife..i remained as your friend ..but a little more than it...to fulfil the needs to keep this relation...
she felt her heart in pain...
she took her bag...she took some pills swallowed it n went to bed..she touched the pillow next to her searching for maan..but maan was not there to stop her non stop tears ..maan was doing his tai chi vigorously to keep him out of the thoughts of both girls...


Next :what happened in party..that maan was totally off...


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Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part !!!😛...plz solve the mystery soon😕..
and plz update next part soon me waiting😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update maan geet ko change karte hue dekh raha tha naughty boy😉
ab mei fav line
i hate u😡
phir meer aur maan
aap wait bhut karvane lage ho aaj kal
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Posted: 13 years ago


guys...i'm not going to stop writing...jab aap sab meri writing torture kosehnekeliye tayyar ho..phir mein kyun rukungi..lol..
i'll keep alive maneet in the form of ffs..its a promise to all my readers..n always my leads will be maan n geet only..
love u so much di
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely dear
ossum
but why meera doing like that
i think she have some diease
shalini_s thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
i want to know what Meer is upto... loved this..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome but kab ye problem ki sachai pata chalegi please jaldi is problem ko solve kar do
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Posted: 13 years ago
there mst b some reason for meeras behavior. feel sorry for her.
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Posted: 13 years ago
luvd it..
so maan s not fully in love with meer..
he thinks dat he luvs her may b b/c he supported her so well in each step..
inner turmoil s getting even worser..

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