The Most Unromantic Romance: A FF(Updated Pg. 35)

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Asmita

@asmi4you

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

wow !!!!! 👏👏👏
kya dhamakedar intro tha Aakash-Payal & Shyaam-Anjali ka.
superb !!!!! 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Arnav slapped by Khushi wow I seriously wish she does that with him someday on show.
I felt bad at first place coz Arnav is infatuated by Lavanya.but I wish it is infatuation only
anyways lovely storyline

"I would have really done it for any genuine person because my ego or anything is not more valuable than a human life. Even if I didn't love, I would have at least tried to love a person who was ready to give up everything including his life for my sake. But why am I talking to such a fake person like you who chose to play with a pure and wonderful emotion like love?"

beautifully written lines shailu👏 I got exact account of Khushi's character from these lines. Strong yet Romantic,Chirpy and bubbly yet sincere and mature. She appears to be superficial and shallow but only her heart knows that no one can measure the depth of this ocean, ornate-d with the treasure of emotions in it.
I think she will fall for the person, who measures its depth by diving into this ocean of emotions.

totally unpredictable I just love such stories.

waiting waiting 😍😍😍

Edited by asmi4you - 13 years ago

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

wow wonderful update..
payash scene was nice..
n the relationship between khushi and shyam in your ff is also nice😊
bechara arnav was bein ragged!
wonder wat'll happen now!

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

nycc part ...loved it..whr were u missin ??

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tvmylove

@tvmylove

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

just nw finish reading all the parts in ur FF.. Itz superb..good job..

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

This so lovely yaar. The way khushi said about love, touched my heart. Now we got to meet other characters too. Very well written about the situations. And oh! How thankful i am to read shyam referring to khushi as sweet sister! Lol. Thanks for the pm.

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Nice one Shailu!!

I really liked what Khushi said to Arnav about love...it was so meaningful.

Looking forward to the next part sugar!

Thanks for the PM.

😊

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

awesome update!!

loved wht khushi said abt love to arnav !!

thank you so much for the pm!!

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

I love reading your FF!!!!

so is shyam a good guy in this story or will he turn out to be bad?

thanks a ton for the pm

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Davi

@Davi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

hey shailu

great update.

i really liked how you made shyam khushi's brother.

this arnav here is a total badmaash.

thanx for the pm.

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Shailaja

@shailusri1983

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: -Murphy369-
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edit: Me first, uhahahahaha😎
I still go gaga over reading your works, they are totally out of the world!😍
And it seems you turned all the characters upside down and wrote this, and I have to say I love it!⭐️
Payash scene was really cute and so was their cute convo!😳
Oh man! That was ragging, bechari khusi!
Payal is like Khusi right?😲
And so was Shyam -Khusi bonding❤️, I would have appreciated such a relationship in this serial!😳
Great job doodles!👏
I love it!
thanks for the pm🤗

Payash will be the soothing cloud in Arhi's fiery story. Payal dresses like Khushi in the show. But the resemblance ends there. She is not so chirpy, bubbly and effervescent like Khushi on the show. She is subdued and has a tinge of hypocrisy in her behavior. Shyam as Khushi's brother was a stroke of my wicked mid. Not being able to do anything to the leech in the show made him Khushi's brother at least in this FF.