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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: sarach


thnx...thats what i meant..the word ragging slip off my mind in a sudden at that time..and yeah i guessed right..
Btw loved the update,4th part..loved how she answered arnie back with a slap.and teach him a lesson..but a bad thing,as lavanya entered..and he assume her as true love.the worst thing.

Lavs is just an infatuation. Often we fall into the trap of confusing physical attraction for love. The same has happened to Arnav in this FF. He will get over it. Anyways why fear when Khushi is here!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: asmi4you

wow !!!!! 👏👏👏
kya dhamakedar intro tha Aakash-Payal & Shyaam-Anjali ka.
superb !!!!! 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Arnav slapped by Khushi wow I seriously wish she does that with him someday on show.
I felt bad at first place coz Arnav is infatuated by Lavanya.but I wish it is infatuation only
anyways lovely storyline

"I would have really done it for any genuine person because my ego or anything is not more valuable than a human life. Even if I didn't love, I would have at least tried to love a person who was ready to give up everything including his life for my sake. But why am I talking to such a fake person like you who chose to play with a pure and wonderful emotion like love?"


beautifully written lines shailu👏 I got exact account of Khushi's character from these lines. Strong yet Romantic,Chirpy and bubbly yet sincere and mature. She appears to be superficial and shallow but only her heart knows that no one can measure the depth of this ocean, ornate-d with the treasure of emotions in it.
I think she will fall for the person, who measures its depth by diving into this ocean of emotions.
totally unpredictable I just love such stories.
waiting waiting 😍😍😍

Wow! Beautiful post! I loved these lines analyzing Khushi's character "Strong yet Romantic,Chirpy and bubbly yet sincere and mature. She appears to be superficial and shallow but only her heart knows that no one can measure the depth of this ocean, ornate-d with the treasure of emotions in it.
I think she will fall for the person, who measures its depth by diving into this ocean of emotions."

Both Khushi and Arnav will keep fighting each other like two obdurate children but will keep influencing the other in ways unknown to themselves. The words, actions, care and affection showered on the other in unforeseen circumstances, and becoming the moral and emotional support of the other in their weak moments will keep happening time and again when suddenly one day they will be thrown off balance by the power of the feelings they have for each other. Lavs has been brought just to highlight the difference between infatuation and true love. Payash and Shali (Shyam-Anjali) love tracks will also be unraveled simultaneously.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi

wow wonderful update..
payash scene was nice..
n the relationship between khushi and shyam in your ff is also nice😊
bechara arnav was bein ragged!
wonder wat'll happen now!

I honestly got fed up seeing psycho Shyam on the show. So made him the Khushi's bro.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: anita_21492

I love reading your FF!!!!

so is shyam a good guy in this story or will he turn out to be bad?
thanks a ton for the pm

Shyam is the good guy in this story. As such, there are no negative characters in this FF only grey ones like Arnav's father Vikas. All the characters who have been introduced till now are positive. If at all any negative characters are necessary, I'll give a hint before introducing them.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Davi

hey shailu


great update.

i really liked how you made shyam khushi's brother.

this arnav here is a total badmaash.

thanx for the pm.

Yay! Arnav has the badmash streak in him. He has been neglected since his childhood by his father. That's why he doesn't care too much about feelings and emotions. He is a pessimist and also has a strong inferiority complex and issues of insecurity. He will mellow down when Khushi starts influencing his thoughts and actions.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
What a starting of the luv stry. It was a nice update. Thanx for pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Great Job!!👏

And shyam is khushi bro!! HA!! Thats what made me the happiest😆
Continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98

The Most Unromantic Romance: A FF

Part 5:

Being the first day, there were no full-fledged lectures. After being introduced to the subjects, syllabus, the scope of the course and the faculty who would be dealing with those subjects, the students were left free for the day. Khushi reached her bike when she was surprised to find Payal waiting for her.

Khushi pinched herself to see whether what she saw was real. Payal floundered with her words, "I---I—don't know h----h--------how to start what I wanted to say. I know you'd understand me."

Khushi saw that Payal was really disturbed. She asked her in a concerned manner, "If it's something I can do, I surely will try. What's the problem?" Payal explained in brief everything that had happened in the class. She also told Khushi how she didn't want to be the butt of ridicule a second time. But at the same time, how would Krithika aunty react if she wore clothes like the ones Akaash suggested?

Khushi had a brainwave, "Aunty , I mean Mother India will have a problem if she sees you in that dress. You wear your old clothes when we start from home and change yourself into new ones which we are going to shop today in the girl's dressing room. Again while returning home; you get back into your old clothes. Howzat?

"Sounds good but-----" Payal, a little bit hesitant. Khushi encouraged her, "No! Sounds excellent! Let's not waste any time. Sit on the back seat. We're in this together, baby!"

At the other end, Arnav had just waved a goodbye to Lavanya. His heart was beating erratically even though it was just the first day. Why was he unable to watch her going farther and farther from him? He had to do something about it. He called up Akaash, "Hi, Aks don't wait for me. You go alone. I've some work."

"What man? This is the first day and work already?" Akaash sounding little bit suspicious. But he knew his friend enough to tell if he was determined you couldn't argue with him.

Arnav blessed his lucky stars that Akaash had not questioned what work he had. It would be a little bit delicate for him to share his real motives. And what a day it was! He had said "I LOVE YOU" to a girl whom he had hated and even got slapped by her.

After attending the class, he had discovered one more reason to hate her. She was the Khushi Bajaj who had secured the first rank in the entrance test and snatched the scholarship from beneath his nose.

But when he thought back, it was also the most memorable day in his life. He had met Lavanya who resembled his ideal dream girl. He would give her a surprise tomorrow. He would buy her a gift.

Arnav had just finished selecting his gift. It was a beautiful glass globe with a boy and girl dancing to the music. He was climbing down the stairs of the shopping mall when it slipped from his hands and fell down shattering into a thousand pieces. Why did anything right never happen in his life? Why was he in for disappointment every single time? He had selected this gift for Lavanya with so much love. Why did it have to break?

While he was thinking like this his eyes fell on a chart holder beside the broken globe. He opened the lid of the chart holder and found three paintings in it. He kept them back in the holder. That night after Akaash had gone to bed, he spread those paintings before him and pondered.

They were pieces of the same puzzle. Or so he felt! He looked beneath the painting to see if there was any name or address. It was just signed THE FIREBIRD with an E-mail ID having the same username given beneath each painting.

In the first painting, there was dark room in which a large and brilliant firebird with majestic plumage glowing brightly with feathers of multitudinous shades like red, orange, pink and yellow is imprisoned. A small shining feather of this bird is detached from its body and flown away by the west wind to the distant lands into the hands of a handsome prince.

In the second painting, the prince is holding the feather in his hand and battling a severe thunder storm full of gale and fury which prevents him from moving forward and reaching the firebird that is his ultimate destination.

In the third painting, the prince has released the firebird from its captivity and holds it as carefully as one would hold the most valuable treasure of this world. In his arms the bird gradually begins transforming into a beautiful and soulful girl.

Truly Arnav had never seen anything to equal this. He was sure that the painter was a girl and she had summed up her entire life in these paintings. Very interesting! He mailed the username he saw in the paintings--------

The same night, Khushi was frantically searching her room. Payal asked her, "Why are you turning this whole room upside down? Have you misplaced something?"

Khushi replied, "Looks like it. My chart holder in not there in my bag. I've searched the entire room also."

Payal asked, "Is it important? What's there in it?"

Khushi answered, "Just a few paintings!" Though she appeared nonchalant before Payal, those were not just a few paintings to her.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
sooo nice update dear...
like it ...👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow the paintings concept has left me in awe. Khushi paints, and the color are gonna fill up arnav's life. Nice update, missed Arhi interaction. Thanks 4 the pm

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