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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: rsroopali
wow its nice
geet is really cnfused
which iis sooo evident
but nw she needs 2 keep her mind cool n calm n also try n think abt maan's pov
n maan aslo has 2 help geet a bit
n hate geet's familyyy

thank you for all those lovely photo.. it means allot..
:)
me will update soon again

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#542

deari thought she ll understand pls dont this with geet we want her to be frds with himand take the realtionship a step dearpls dear we want that cant see that geet hate maan becoz he is blindpls dear she is nave and innocent pls dear we want that to beback dearpls we want the next update that geet be with maan has frds first

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Maansexi

@Maansexi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#543

She is back I really want to see how this relationship builds up now please update next part soon
I am craving

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Bloomysunday

@Bloomysunday

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#544

Its painful yar it would be so much painful for both of them ...painful for geet to accept him...guilt for maan he may think he had spoiled a girls life who wanted to have a normal life a loving husband ..it would pain him when she would not accept him he would ask god why dis to me...dont i deserve love ...its so painfull yar so painfull

This pain is for you
Many things I believe for you is pain
I dont want any pain from you but I accepted your pain
I'll take the pain from you forever

Many pains cannot be removed
many can stay forever and ever
many think pain isnt nothing for them
pain is everything you learn from outside world

Love is pain too you know
you left me alone in the outside world
pain is getting inside of me, not letting me go
I'm alone in the darkness of shadows

This pain is everything painful has it is
ready for everything is to be done for you
I'll be ready for everyone's pain
Every shadows of darkness is there inside of me
tearing me apart to learn from you and the people

So I'll take everyone's pain away
so you can tell me about your pain and
forever pure

😭

tc😊

❤️

priya

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pearl_warrior

@pearl_warrior

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#545

Maan supported Geet against his own family..

Only thing is that Geet should try & understand Maan..

No one could read Geet except Maan...Not even her family...

Even though he was blind, he knew exactly what she was feeling..

Why did her mother not tell the truth...

Please update the next part soon...

The more I read, the more I want..😊

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#546

awesome update
what must be geet going through
and if in future geet taunt maan about his blindness how can he bear that😭
this FF has become really close to my heart
update next part quickly

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reni

@leverne

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#547

Awesome update..poor geet her family forced her to go back maan is sweet to understand her situation..poor geet is feeling so sad...pls continue don't hesitate the story is very good...

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#548

is that really u safi...😲

u r scaring me now...

i think i better run away from this ff...😆

this is deep sh**...😆

it seems like some1 has some sort of experience in this...😉...

aww...safi is grown up now...😳

ok..leaving this aside...now seriously...

like ur definition...i guess through this ff u r trying to portray the same feelings...

the first line says abt maan...abt him recognizing geet in such a short time...her actions...her smell...her payal sounds...

second line...will come later..i think..n will b related to geet...when she will fall for him...i hope she does...

n third line goes for the both of them...finding each other...

the three lines contain the essence of ur ff...

n as for u finding ur love..i am sure he is nearby...just waiting for a chance to bump into u...😉😆

You better not run way... It's my deep hit ff which is better then remorse lol
So you better come and comment hehe

& have I experienced it? I really don't know you are dating me
Do I really sound like some pathetic person in love which I am not... Gosh who is he
Lol

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no promises babe...😛

hey i loved remorse...whether it is better than that will depend on the further tracks...

haha...u in love...not right now..but i can say u r seeking it...😉

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#549

dear hope u give many updates if huby is blind that pin cause more dear but pls odnt do that we cant see maaneet like that we want geet t think about this i knew maan gave the time but atleast make her to be friendly with hhis family dear and pls we want them as frds dear geet should think in maturity dear pls in atleast next update we want geet to think about maan and start a frdhip dear pls dearupdate the next one soonwaiting eagerly dear