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mahsoos...
Part 9



Geet stood in the middle with tears in the house. Rano looked down in shame, while geets dad sat on the sofa covered face. Tensed. Darji sat on the other side with his stick along with other house member.
"WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME?"



Rano staid quit.
"was it you mom? It was you? Dad always listens and believes you blindly, you mist have persuaded him to not to say the truth.
Rano was frighten to open her mouth but this doesn't look good, first day after the marriage and here she is, back. Back to her 1st home.
"he is your husband now."
"SHUT UP! SHUT UP!" she covered her ears. Closed the eyes lid together in pain. Refuge to think about that man is her husband.
"I DON'T ACCEPT him as my husband. Why didn't you tell me he is blind and most importantly how could you let your daughter be married to a blind man? He can't see me, he can't feel me... In THE same room he does not know where is his wife." she screamed to the whole house. "you have rejected so many men's for NT to find the perfect one then why not me? Am I not your daughter?"
She cried even louder. Ran upstairs, locking the door...

The family had no clear justification, khuranas far better then NT family, she will be living her life like a princess, husband that always there with her where shoria, barely gets time to see his wife... always after money where khurana already have that so they can spend more time with the family then, then what's the problem.

Rano ran upstairs after geet, she have made her decision no matter what she have to go back. This was no longer her house.
"you have to go back. You can not stay here." geet shockingly looked at her mother. Her father just stepped in. Seems like satisfied with her mother.
"yes, your mother is correct. I want you back to your husband house in 1 hour. This is not your house any more."
Geet gets up from the bed, nodding her head for a no. "NO! No pappa. I would never. He is blind. I can't accept him."
"enough is enough." geets dad grits his teeth. He does not have the gut to see the Handa as a family icon for married daughter living with her parents.
"I am calling maan. He will come and take you."
"NO! NO! O won't go." she screamed.
Darji came across from behind and slapped geet tight. "had enough of this girl. Call maan now."
Geet held her cheek with more tears, angry, frustrated. She felt so helpless, even running way seems pointless when she haven't finished her collage... Who will support her

Rano called maan with in few minute and lied again, lied that geet wanted to go back. He came by along with dev. Maan could clearly feel something was wrong but as this was his wife's house he kept quit. It's there family matter & if geet decided to come along with them then be it. He will always happily accept her.

Geet walked along the stair like a statue. Darjis 5 finger was clearly visible on her face, tears was still there. Rano have forced geet to dress up in a red expensive sari and again with different gold payel. She came by and stood next to him, hating everyone, every person to ruin her life like this. Marring her to a blind man. A man who had no capability to see her, no capability to feel her... & love... That does not even come to the equation.

Dev uncomfortably smiled and left the place flowed by maan and rano took geet to the car forcefully. She was truly a dead person, sitting next to maan.

As they arrived at the khurana, both maan and dev walked stepped out. Maan felt geet wasn't coming, kept her ground there. Dev dips his head in attempt to call her out.
"bhavi, we are home"
Maan listens very carefully, she wasn't reacting at all. She just sat there, staring at nothing.
"dev, you go. You mist be late for office. I will bring her."
Dev nodes and disappears with another limo. Maan came back in to the big black limo and sat next to geet. She didn't move or flinched. Kept her position.
"I know they Have forced you to come here but there won't be anyone forcing you here. You can live your life the way you want."
Geet didn't react at all. She hated his gut. He is bloody blind, what can he feel? How can he see her pain? specially what she is going through.
"but we have to stay in the same room as we are not the only one who lives under this roof. There are my whole family."



Maan stepped out, he waited for her to walk out and flow, eventually she took her step out and did not flow instead walked straight to there room. Avantika along with everyone waited for her in the big hall but geet ignored each one of them, not even a single eye contact and locked her self to the room.

Maan walked in, avantika came by and comforted maan, somewhere they were also regretting why they did not make sure that geet knew everything but it's to late, who to blame? They can't even go to Handa house and question. It wasn't something in there nature...

Maan stepped in, then walked to his private room, geet was sitting far corner of the balcony. She just did not want to think any more... Refuge. In just 2 days her life have became upside down.

The dark night sky illuminated with many start, the beauty was mesmerizing as geet laid on a long arm chair gazing upon it. It's been a torment day, only now she had the chance to calm the tearing eyes and think about her dark deem life. It's so color less that even a beautiful rainbow won't be able to amend the deed. She have not given the hungry stomach any food. It deserves punishment. Torment. She wants to starve her self until the body gives up fighting with every thoughts.

"you need to eat!" a strong deep voice caught her attention. She lazily gave maan a look from the corner of her eyes then quickly changed back to the night sky. She have refuge to talk to anyone, even her husband. Just for the name sake! A husband who probably does not even know how to love a wife. There are many feelings that could only be filled by eyes and here there was nothing, nothing at all. How can she accept him? How can she love a life with a blind man. A colorless man.
"I am not hungry!"
She was still in her red sari, barely took the lazy body up since she arrived at this 100 million worth house.
"geet, let's go in. You will become Ill, & also eat."
Geet ignored his sound completely and sits up and walks in to the bathroom to change. Maan stood there, rather tensed. He couldn't come to conclusion what should he do in order to make her feel better.
Geet changed to one of the usual nighty, the only nighty she packed was the sexy one, it bothered her today, unlike the night before where she was all ready to give her viginety to her husband and today the same body feared with unknown thought. Feeling sick and disgusted to stand nearly naked. She took a long robe and gathered her self to hide.


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geet is really confused and her family is realy bad toward her and maan is really good please try to clear confusion in geet mind
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update soon dear...eager to know geet's answer 😍



awesome update...its hard for her to digest the fact...hope as time passes she accept both maan and fact...
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wow its nice
geet is really cnfused
which iis sooo evident
but nw she needs 2 keep her mind cool n calm n also try n think abt maan's pov
n maan aslo has 2 help geet a bit
n hate geet's familyyy

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